Nothingness
I care for nothingness
of floating backward
in a pool of thought
to be alive
and to revel in it
The thrilling of sences
dreamings and feelings
streatching fingers, toes
I celebrate
the smile of the soul
I care for nothingness
enjoy the exquisit
soft music of life
rhythem that is
sheer pleasure of being
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up.
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Good job on this.. it was original concept and the imagery was fuckign nice.. i actually relaxed a bit when I read this.. the description was top-notch and I felt myself floating through thought and everything.. there were some minor spelling errors though.. fix that up and this would be a very nice read
hit up "The Eulogy Is Late"
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thanks man, well, im real relaxed right now, lol, so yeah, and those spelling errors i'll work on.
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this was simple but yet very good. nice flow you had
structure was good and u had some nice vocab here and there
overall this was nice i liked it. your good keep it up.
thanks man...
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Nice, Short and abstract style of poetry, i liked it alot. It was fast paced and proved a point, what more can i say on such a short peice? longer would of been interesting.
yeah, short, lol, but thanks man, thanks alot.
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