User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: A Beautyful Town

  1. #1
    Banned
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Age
    33
    Posts
    244
    Battle Record
    1-3

    A Beautyful Town

    This poem has inspired me im at my grandpas house and im looking out side and reminisin and ish i been working on this since the second day i was here and im just now finishing it give honest feed please


    A beautiful place is the little town of clermont.
    The quiet streets are lines by ancient trees.
    Down the long avenues of old houses,
    pepper trees, sycamores, cedars, oaks and elms,
    eucalyptus, palms and jacarandas
    translate sunlight into restful shadows.
    Flowers are everywhere, and citrus trees.
    Lemons and oranges ornament the gardens.
    Students walk by, with their books, to the colleges.
    Townspeople walk together to the village.
    From parks and schoolyards, children’s voices call.
    Sunday mornings, churches ring their bells.
    On a clear day, you can see the mountains,
    where children play, in winter, in the snow,
    and long trails lead to streams and waterfalls.
    Deer and mountain lions roam the mountains.
    Rattlesnakes doze for hours in the sun.
    Some days the ponds are visited by bears
    who stumble home with their bellies full of trout.
    Unable to sleep, I leave my house tonight
    and sit at the wooden table under the trees.
    Now the winds and birds have settled; the night is still.
    The owl in the cedar tree begins to bell.
    Rose and jasmine burn their sticks of incense.
    Moonlight falls on Claremont through the clouds.
    I remember grandpa’s poem about the cranes.
    In the early dusk, down an alley of green moss,
    the garden-boy is leading the cranes home.
    How strange and powerful, the love of home.
    Stranger still to be alive at all,
    to be anywhere, in all its endless detail,
    and the millions of tiny locks that will be broken
    before you can be released from where you are
    to return again to the place,
    so many years ago, you started from,
    the nothing that is everywhere but here.
    Last edited by El Deciple; August 11th, 2006 at 08:44 AM

  2. #2
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Age
    35
    Posts
    196
    Battle Record
    1-6
    [center]

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.



    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


    Poetic Scriptures

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  3. #3
    Bye bye black bird Poeta Demonio's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2005
    Posts
    10,394
    Battle Record
    18-1
    Awards OM HOF PS Champion/IE Champion PS HOF PS Season champ Legendary PC PC HOF
    -Closed.

    Fucking noob.
    AI


    “ˇViva la Revolución!”

Similar Threads

  1. The TOwn
    By Sniper Clown in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 11
    Last Post: October 24th, 2010, 03:14 PM
  2. A-Town
    By Samuel Same Old in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 16
    Last Post: November 18th, 2005, 07:16 PM
  3. town of O
    By Tosh in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: October 8th, 2005, 10:52 AM
  4. My Town
    By SouthSideWarrior in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: November 16th, 2004, 02:23 PM
  5. When G comes to town
    By MCG123 in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: September 19th, 2004, 09:07 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •