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Client
Lord of Pens
10 lines
due in a hour
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IJL
Check. Good luck.
You're joking right? fuck an hour bitch, I'll key you in 20 minutes.
I kill with mine, you’ve never wrote an original line
You’re rhymes represent kids movies…
…their from a land before time
You beatin me, that’s a lie…your punches come up shy
You get no support, been in the light ya whole life…
…but the limes been dry
You lie about puffin lye, you being high is obscene
Plus you being the lord of pens only implies…
…your punches won’t show up on the computer screen
Shit it’s good to dream, but dawg step into reality
You burn fat for every loss, so I’m lowerin your calories
Well at least you don’t gotta worry bout high cholesterol
You’re sig maker called you the forbidden writer…
…*hint* WE DON’T WANT YOU HERE AT ALL
10 bitch.
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IJL
Fuck Client, you don’t need a fuckin appointment to be served,
Teach u a lesson then cut through ya mind ‘n kill what u learned,
Just so I can call you a dumbass that doesn’t know what a punch is,
I should truly call your verses Toys R Us, cuz they’re made for kids,
I’ll punch you left and right, leave you lookin a fuckin sight, ya dig?
I won’t make you look like it, but turn you into the creature in ya sig,
Fuckin asshole, after this battle Client is going to feel the need to brag,
I owned him, ‘n he wanted to be my maid AND secretary, fuckin fag,
I’m like a serial killer business man, known to kill Clients, ya damn fool,
I whored u man, cut ya head off, put it on a tray, so I fuckin served u too,
Damn quick keys from both sides. lol. uppin 1.
I kill with mine, you’ve never wrote an original line
You’re rhymes represent kids movies…
…their from a land before time
This was ehh, needed more hashness
You beatin me, that’s a lie…your punches come up shy
You get no support, been in the light ya whole life…
…but the limes been dry
Nahh
You lie about puffin lye, you being high is obscene
Plus you being the lord of pens only implies…
…your punches won’t show up on the computer screen
Ehh okay..
Shit it’s good to dream, but dawg step into reality
You burn fat for every loss, so I’m lowerin your calories
ehh
Well at least you don’t gotta worry bout high cholesterol
You’re sig maker called you the forbidden writer…
…*hint* WE DON’T WANT YOU HERE AT ALL
Weak.
I didn't like this too much. I see to much attempts @ being witty, and less attempts @ hurting your oponent. I dunno usually I like your style, but in this battle it makes you seem weak. Not too good..
vs
Fuck Client, you don’t need a fuckin appointment to be served,
Teach u a lesson then cut through ya mind ‘n kill what u learned,
Naw, doesn't hit
Just so I can call you a dumbass that doesn’t know what a punch is,
I should truly call your verses Toys R Us, cuz they’re made for kids,
Noo
I’ll punch you left and right, leave you lookin a fuckin sight, ya dig?
I won’t make you look like it, but turn you into the creature in ya sig,
Naw, come on man..
Fuckin asshole, after this battle Client is going to feel the need to brag,
I owned him, ‘n he wanted to be my maid AND secretary, fuckin fag,
Wtf NO PUNCH
I’m like a serial killer business man, known to kill Clients, ya damn fool,
I whored u man, cut ya head off, put it on a tray, so I fuckin served u too,
No
I saw not on hit in this battle. Wtf @ you?!? Come on man tighten up. Throw punches, make `em cry. I wanna see some multis too. I'll keep an eye on you. But as for the final vote I HAVE to go with Client seeing as he actually attemtped to hit. Lord, you need to hit, and hit hard. Bleh battle..
v. Client
I kill with mine, you’ve never wrote an original line
You’re rhymes represent kids movies…
…their from a land before time
vs
Just so I can call you a dumbass that doesn’t know what a punch is,
I should truly call your verses Toys R Us, cuz they’re made for kids,
Its obvious who has it here.
V/Client, better verse.
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ehh upp 1
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IJL
Client i liked your concept's. The land before time made me laugh. Some line's could have been worded better. It was a decent read. Lord, i think you could have came with fresher concepts. You had a few good line's but nothing hard hitting and creative. Get rid of your filler's to, that took the consistancy out of your verse.
v/ Client
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
nothing
vs.
nothing..
pretty close, but at the same time, my vote might have to go to Client ONLY because he had attempts at punches.. LOP u just need to work on ur wording and ur punches WILL start to hit, sorry but i felt no part of ur verse hit at all..
with that being said, this was a close battle... but in the end, client takes it due to having an attempt or 2 at a punch.
peace
v/client
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ok haha upp 2
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upp 3
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Originally Posted by Client
Fuck Client, you don’t need a fuckin appointment to be served,
Teach u a lesson then cut through ya mind ‘n kill what u learned,
*why would u learn him something and kill it huh?*
Just so I can call you a dumbass that doesn’t know what a punch is,
I should truly call your verses Toys R Us, cuz they’re made for kids,
*meh*
I’ll punch you left and right, leave you lookin a fuckin sight, ya dig?
I won’t make you look like it, but turn you into the creature in ya sig,
*weak*
Fuckin asshole, after this battle Client is going to feel the need to brag,
I owned him, ‘n he wanted to be my maid AND secretary, fuckin fag,
*no *
I’m like a serial killer business man, known to kill Clients, ya damn fool,
I whored u man, cut ya head off, put it on a tray, so I fuckin served u too,
*nah weak finisher*
pretty weak i must say
Client- u had some attempts but delivery was awful,just battle and try to think of fresh everytime , coo?
LOP-man weak!!! i mean this was 10 times worse that any other verse u droped lately... cmon what happen?u can merk client with ur usual shit! guess it was a slip dont that again aite? pz
so imma give it to client, just cuz i know LOP can do much much much better than this.
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