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    wow this piece was great. i loved it. great collab. all writers came dope and tight. the topic was original an well thought out. the flow was tight for all parts of this. the structure was kept even for every writer in this and it was easy for the reader to follow and not get confused with anything internally in the piece. the rhymeing from all was dope and came consisten. sometimes cats will start strong and finish weaker. but that wasnt the case in this piece. i liked this piece alot. congrats to yall. peep my om It Seems if you get a chance. much appreciation. an omega we should collab soon for real.

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    iight my dude thanks and ill PM you more details on shit later thanks man!.
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    wer up0 omega like your verse and feeled what you said about pages filling up good vocab nice flow and the ending been there lol overall nice verse just needs more muilts

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    love the muilt usage here has good flow like the rhymes and vocab fell off toward the end tho not alot just yeah

    Kt
    yo love the imagery you got the vocab i say more muilts still got good flow

    overall dope piece together imagery is crazy love it pz
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    Mic </a> you'll get more feedback and everythin
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    thanks man thanks for the feed appreciated!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Omega.
    iight my dude thanks and ill PM you more details on shit later thanks man!.
    alright man. hit me up whenever.
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    iight man will do ya heard......
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    lol I was expecting somthing good but man this was one hella collab I'll like to see more writtens from all there of you. this was an good experiance for me seeing im just now opening my heart to write poetry this was an great inspiration for me I enjoyed the multis you all used an they descriptions.

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    thanks man...we surely appreciate it...i see potential in you and one day we shoud collab!
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    upp this man....lets go people!
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    whoa man madly slept on man people lets start some feed.
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    real talk i had to say some twice on this i might not of posted but

    its a hit

    let it be know

    nomanited it needs 2b
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    word man this does man its like a wasted time of writing..
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