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    Picture Perfect [Collab]

    BLACK= Omega.
    RED= Johnny 6 feet
    GREEN= Kaotic Theory




    The Writer
    Images play, in fascination of existence
    Words appear in great depth of definition that’s persistent.
    Troubled times recorded, struggled times explained
    Future starts to unfold, with a figure four of tenacious pain.
    Tears fall slow, like the ink from my pen
    World of destruction tour begins in the count from 1 to 10.
    Mind corrupted as pain is written and emphasized
    The ink bolds itself and italically prints with meaningless underlines
    World spins with no fear, nor with no destination in hand
    So does my finger tips gripping tight writing the art for the world of man.
    So they say, life is held in the sand of times
    Well the sand seeps fast through the very fingers that write my life.
    Pages fill faster than expected from the mind
    The ink turns into blood as I cut deep and slowly a fine line.
    My heart pounds and crops, its starts to write its own plot
    Time stops along with a writer’s block….
    ……………No beat of a heart as the pen suddenly drops.
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    The Urban Artist

    Sprays of paint and thoughts divine make a picture perfect
    Rays of hate hurts the mind, as the witless murk it
    But artists persevere and create visual prophesies
    Inspiration to create inspiration, crush literal mockeries
    Beads of sweat dripped from his forehead, the brush stung with splinters
    The man, bent on his task, through half a dozen winters
    His labor of love, a slave to the heavens above
    Realizing a delicate scene, thoughts free as seventy doves
    He sacrificed eating for his bottles of paint
    His ambition was not to be great, just to follow his state
    of mind, a shocking result, the colors come in focus
    He shakes out his trance, some kind of hocus pocus
    There it was, his vision made flesh, picture perfect
    He collapsed exhausted to his knees, but by God it was worth it
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    The Painter
    the mural of a fantasy, in my art brings life
    why can't it be, beautiful souls from the inside
    no brutality, with no harm in my twisted reality
    walking into my pictures, dancing and singing loudly
    many nights of sweat, and bruised finger tips
    i paint my visions like the poetry flows from my lips
    its my passion, perfect pictures is where I’m living though
    creating wicked vivid visuals, of fond individuals
    sharing laughter, no room for catching up off a struggle
    no space to taste the burning sensation of tired muscles
    this life has no hustles, living healthy is the ultimate drug
    its never ending, no off buttons, batteries, or plugs
    every angle of this world is pronounced love, and dedication
    reaching for the stars on every try of each attempt, without hesitation
    its the habitat where every breathing creature lives in laughter and peace
    it's like each and every child's dream, its my perfect masterpiece
    Last edited by Omega.; August 12th, 2006 at 05:52 AM
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    woot let me get some feed for us writers man...lets go people come on..
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    that shit was hot son
    niggaz real niggaz fly niggaz hood

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    Damn, omega, I really, really liked this. I sang along to it slowly, and I think I caught the rhythm you wrote it to perfectly, and you just never, NEVER let up on this thing, man. This is one of my favorite things I've read from someone in quite a while, man, and you just kept the story going and the internals and it was dope like on every line.

    I'm rambling a bit now, I think, I just wanna say, I'm impressed, you obviously did a really good piece here and I think it's dynamite, I think it won't be slept on and shouldn't be. Nice Job, stay up, man. Hit my new OM if you can in my sig, Peace.

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    well i didnt right all of it man..come on now my dudes wrote with me ya feel me read the top....those are the people who wrote those parts..LOL!
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    Oh. Didn't even notice. Props to everyone. All three pieces solid, I won't put any over another.

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    "She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."


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    woot man thanks my dude!..
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    thanks dude. bump
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    yup yup i fixed the last line...i missed it thats why lol.
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    naw go aheads and remove those last to lines...i think my verse was better without it.
    okay no more rambling ....feedback people.
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    props to that shit was hot
    niggaz real niggaz fly niggaz hood

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    thanks.

    BUMP!.
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    My bad Omega lol, so many things to say in such a little time period lol excellent on all parts so here's a breakdown

    vocabulary could've be better and some of the wording but other then that solid drop, plenty of imagry and emotion especially your take on the topic and i really like how yall seperated the concept and showed how much variety there was in the topic(omega) Johnny as usual a dope drop same as for KT, (nominate i will) lmao this is one of the best takes on a Collab i've seen in a long time, so be ready to be my collab im work'n on with Illest and Def.
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

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    malice whenever you want my verse ;let me know i wanna hop on any collab!...and thanks my dude!
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