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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
Yup, check.
Lmfao., Check.
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
I follow sigs religiously. This battle? Like a rigged debate
^And as Em said, hes created a monster..
..and he STILL can't fix ya face
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...0&page=2&pp=15
Killin you? Yes, but nicely. I'll make sure you lie right
I've never been down on myself before..but I bite
And I may repeat concepts, but you're an infadel
So I'd make you eat your words...
..but they're always from someone else
Here comes the raping, call ya jailor
Text is his thing to just always be a constant...failure
Give in to this, you CAN'T win, so why the defiance
Pussy,
Just how you fiddle with female names I know you won't come to violence
^^pwned.
Before this battle, should'nt have been ova da boilin cup
cuz i seen ya bubblin...
...just didnt want you to get ur self-esteem up
[Quote Originally Posted by Laureate]
me and Illus talked a bit on AIM, i think your text needs work, you use a lot of filler, and some of your punches are just dumb. [/quote]
Your' so close to joining<------ Im proud dude
lmao @......
.....Your own leader even fucking doubting you
Originally Posted by Originally Posted by Key.
You were hyped to join, But aint that some shit^
Dont worry....
....He only had to consider putting you on the elevation list
Key. ^ your schooled daily, like late mid-terms
He' was a virgin...
...Untill he went an donated some of sperm!
If his dick can't get any, his sperm might as well...Being inserted through a tube that is.
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
Sorry, Error on first quote
Before this battle, should'nt have been ova da boilin cup
cuz i seen ya bubblin...
...just didnt want you to get ur self-esteem up
Your' so close to joining<------ Im proud dude
lmao @......
.....Your own leader even fucking doubting you
You were hyped to join, But aint that some shit^
Dont worry....
....He just had to consider putting you on the elevation list
Key. ^ your schooled daily, like late mid-terms
He' was a virgin...
...Untill he went an donated some of his sperm!
If his dick can't get any, his sperm might as well...Being inserted through a tube that is.
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
I follow sigs religiously. This battle? Like a rigged debate
^And as Em said, hes created a monster..
..and he STILL can't fix ya face
lol
Killin you? Yes, but nicely. I'll make sure you lie right
I've never been down on myself before..but I bite
you bite? Huh?
And I may repeat concepts, but you're an infadel
So I'd make you eat your words...
..but they're always from someone else
rhyme where? no
Here comes the raping, call ya jailor
Text is his thing to just always be a constant...failure
meh
Give in to this, you CAN'T win, so why the defiance
Pussy,
Just how you fiddle with female names I know you won't come to violence
meh stretched, but w/e
vs
Before this battle, should'nt have been ova da boilin cup
cuz i seen ya bubblin...
...just didnt want you to get ur self-esteem up
meh
Your' so close to joining<------ Im proud dude
lmao @......
.....Your own leader even fucking doubting you
statement
You were hyped to join, But aint that some shit^
Dont worry....
....He just had to consider putting you on the elevation list
lol
Key. ^ your schooled daily, like late mid-terms
He' was a virgin...
...Untill he went an donated some of his sperm!
meh
v/mc
This was a weak battle from both of you. Key you may have had the weakest verse I seen from you. Some stuff didnt rhyme, and it was just meh. I know you can do better. Mc you had a weak verse as well. Pretty much the same but you had some perosonal's why I vote for you.
~1~
I follow sigs religiously. This battle? Like a rigged debate
^And as Em said, hes created a monster..
..and he STILL can't fix ya face
nah, you just said he's a sig.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...0&page=2&pp=15
Killin you? Yes, but nicely. I'll make sure you lie right
I've never been down on myself before..but I bite
s'gay as fuck.
And I may repeat concepts, but you're an infadel
So I'd make you eat your words...
..but they're always from someone else
personals ok.
Here comes the raping, call ya jailor
Text is his thing to just always be a constant...failure
didn't like this setup. concept was nice.
Give in to this, you CAN'T win, so why the defiance
Pussy,
Just how you fiddle with female names I know you won't come to violence
naw, statement.
okay key, this was really weak. we know you've done better but u need rewording on some of your punches.
Before this battle, should'nt have been ova da boilin cup
cuz i seen ya bubblin...
...just didnt want you to get ur self-esteem up
no, self esteem punches are old.
Your' so close to joining<------ Im proud dude
lmao @......
.....Your own leader even fucking doubting you
statement.
You were hyped to join, But aint that some shit^
Dont worry....
....He just had to consider putting you on the elevation list
still a statement.
Key. ^ your schooled daily, like late mid-terms
He' was a virgin...
...Untill he went an donated some of his sperm!
stay away from cum/sperm lines.
you're concepts have been old for som years now, your wordings off to,
if you get better concepts you'll go alot farther. just keep battling ur lines just need to connect instead of just telling somthing about him you gotta make fun of him for it.
key came fresher with the concepts and had 1 ok line so my vote goes to key.
vote - Key.
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=304173
^both of u hit that up before reading my vote please I'll wait....
.....ok
I follow sigs religiously. This battle? Like a rigged debate
^And as Em said, hes created a monster..
..and he STILL can't fix ya face
^Ok
Killin you? Yes, but nicely. I'll make sure you lie right
I've never been down on myself before..but I bite
^I got this it was funny (Assuming he's Eye) but u should have spelled I-Eye
And I may repeat concepts, but you're an infadel
So I'd make you eat your words...
..but they're always from someone else
^nah
Here comes the raping, call ya jailor
Text is his thing to just always be a constant...failure
^Meh
Give in to this, you CAN'T win, so why the defiance
Pussy,
Just how you fiddle with female names I know you won't come to violence
^meh
Good start poor finish
vs.
Before this battle, should'nt have been ova da boilin cup
cuz i seen ya bubblin...
...just didnt want you to get ur self-esteem up
^No.
Your' so close to joining<------ Im proud dude
lmao @......
.....Your own leader even fucking doubting you
^not a real attack just kind of there rewording could have made this dope
You were hyped to join, But aint that some shit^
Dont worry....
....He just had to consider putting you on the elevation list
^ok
Key. ^ your schooled daily, like late mid-terms
He' was a virgin...
...Untill he went an donated some of his sperm!
^no
the only punch of urs I really liked was the doubting u punch witch was more of a statement
V/ Key
Why didn't y'all delete my ugly ass sig while I was gone?
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I follow sigs religiously. This battle? Like a rigged debate
^And as Em said, hes created a monster..
..and he STILL can't fix ya face
nice
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Killin you? Yes, but nicely. I'll make sure you lie right
I've never been down on myself before..but I bite
wtf no
And I may repeat concepts, but you're an infadel
So I'd make you eat your words...
..but they're always from someone else
no needed better wording
Here comes the raping, call ya jailor
Text is his thing to just always be a constant...failure
naaa
Give in to this, you CAN'T win, so why the defiance
Pussy,
Just how you fiddle with female names I know you won't come to violence
stretched..and no
vs.
Before this battle, should'nt have been ova da boilin cup
cuz i seen ya bubblin...
...just didnt want you to get ur self-esteem up
niceee
Your' so close to joining<------ Im proud dude
lmao @......
.....Your own leader even fucking doubting you
lol nice personal
You were hyped to join, But aint that some shit^
Dont worry....
....He just had to consider putting you on the elevation list
another personal
Key. ^ your schooled daily, like late mid-terms
He' was a virgin...
...Untill he went an donated some of his sperm!
naa
\/-mc
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
I follow sigs religiously. This battle? Like a rigged debate
^And as Em said, hes created a monster..
..and he STILL can't fix ya face
lol funnyshit
Killin you? Yes, but nicely. I'll make sure you lie right
I've never been down on myself before..but I bite
nope
And I may repeat concepts, but you're an infadel
So I'd make you eat your words...
..but they're always from someone else
pretty good, but wording
Here comes the raping, call ya jailor
Text is his thing to just always be a constant...failure
wasnt really feeling this
Give in to this, you CAN'T win, so why the defiance
Pussy,
Just how you fiddle with female names I know you won't come to violence
seems forced, bad finish
vs
Before this battle, should'nt have been ova da boilin cup
cuz i seen ya bubblin...
...just didnt want you to get ur self-esteem up
good
Your' so close to joining<------ Im proud dude
lmao @......
.....Your own leader even fucking doubting you
lmfao good personal
You were hyped to join, But aint that some shit^
Dont worry....
....He just had to consider putting you on the elevation list
ouch, 2 personals in a row
Key. ^ your schooled daily, like late mid-terms
He' was a virgin...
...Untill he went an donated some of his sperm!
nope, anything with sperm/ or relation to cum lines, is played
ok I felt this battle was fairly good...some good shit and some bad shit, well first off key your first abr was your best by far, but MYSTIC you had 2 or 3 bars i liked one of your eprsonals was funny adn your opener aswell was good but not as good as key's opener...then again on the other ahnd there was alot of weak bars i wasnt feeling, like key you had some bars that coulda been dope but just went the other way and both had bad finishers....but for mystic that was is only flaw i think...so Mystic gets my vote, no hate just making a vote. `pz
TheDIENASTY
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
Mc Mystique had alot of things that i noticed in this battle first of all he had alot of wordplay and originality with all of his punches and he kept it to where you could understand it he came harder with his background too he pulled out more things and put them to good use.
Key you had alot of good things also but i dont think you had enough to win this battle, it was close you had some good vocab and punches and it was strung together pretty good i just say come harder
My vote goes to Mc Mystique
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