Es.Choir vs. ~One~

[Es.Choir]

10 lines
blind spit
check in asap
due midnight
house rules

[Es.Choir]

Checking, and savings........................................... ................

Good Luck.

[One]

Check.

[Es.Choir]

^Him? dude's no challenge I'll merk him like I've done weak herbs before.
Say you can get more for less, so why can't he win with votes anymore?
I'd kill him, but that's too easy, It's better to publicly shame and whore.
Because dudes lines couldn't be tight------if the barber faded him more.
Dude would have to have help, unusual as it seems, this dude plainly sucks.
Took his name to match the punches--------he himself could actually think up.
He's wack. one syllable like his name, 'n his punches're OLD but I'm not hatin'.
Just one of my IRON fists'll make sure his WRINKLES are STRAIGHTENED.
It's blatant this cat is losin, fuck his cheesy punches, I'm here to take the cake.
Cuz dude couldn't give me a run for my money--------if I paid him off at a race.


Blah 10.

[One]

Checking, and savings........................................... ................

Good Luck.

what a fuckin herbish way to check in, bitch i aint a fuckin Bank Of America
why you gotta amercan flag in ya sig?
so you can call me "Don King" and say this ass whoopin was "Only In America"
haha kid you are fuckin 12 years old and i bet you havent even hit puberty yet
and by sweatin around your herbish ass is tha only time ya gurls cuch a be wet
face it kid you wack,if this battle was New York traffic, i could easily Steer Thru
cuz bitch evn your wack crew Idolizes me jus look at tha name Tier One Crew
and speakin of that herb fulled crew i say i give it atleast about 24 hours to die
nah nah who am i kiddin it already cuz it stayin active 24 minutes was a try
ima merk this bitch for tha fact of anyone who aint believin this hoe aint weak
make this faggot wanna quit rappin and simply stick to "singin us hoes to sleep"

singin us hoes to sleep=in his sig

[One]

*EDIT

Checking, and savings........................................... ................

Good Luck.

what a fuckin herbish way to check in, bitch i aint a fuckin Bank Of America
why you gotta amercan flag in ya sig?
so u can call me "Don King" and say this ass whoopin was "Only In America"
haha kid u are fuckin 12 years old and i bet you havent even hit puberty yet
n by sweatin around your herbish ass is tha only time ya gurls cuch a be wet
face it you wack,if this battle was New York traffic, i could easily Steer Thru
cuz evn your wack crew Idolizes me jus look at tha name Tier One Crew
speakin of that herb fulled crew i say i give it atleast about 24 hours to die
nah nah who am i kiddin it already is so i guess me sayin 24 hours you can try
merk this bitch for tha fact of anyone who aint believin this hoe aint weak
make this faggot wanna quit rappin and stick to "singin us hoes to sleep"

singin us hoes to sleep=in his sig

[One]

*EDIT* i messed up tha 24 minutes thing and shit

what a fuckin herbish way to check in, bitch i aint a fuckin Bank Of America
why you gotta amercan flag in ya sig?
so u can call me "Don King" and say this ass whoopin was "Only In America"
haha kid u are fuckin 12 years old and i bet u havent even hit puberty yet
n by sweatin around ur herbish ass is tha only time ya gurls cuch a be wet
face it u wack,if this battle was New York traffic, i could easily Steer Thru
cuz evn your wack crew Idolizes me jus look at tha name Tier One Crew
speakin of that herb fulled crew i say i give it atleast about 24 hours to die
nah nah who am i kiddin it already is so i guess me sayin 24 mins u can try
merk this bitch for tha fact of anyone who aint believin this hoe aint weak
make this faggot wanna quit rappin and stick to "singin us hoes to sleep"

singin us hoes to sleep=in his sig

[Es.Choir]

Upping for votes on this battle.

Since this is my 100th posts, drop links and I will hit them.

[Lord of Pens]

Nothing

vs.

what a fuckin herbish way to check in, bitch i aint a fuckin Bank Of America
why you gotta amercan flag in ya sig?
so u can call me "Don King" and say this ass whoopin was "Only In America"
^And that wasn't even that good.

This was a weak battle. One wins becuz of his one punch that was meh at best but neway

\\//One

Both of ya'll hit the battle in my sig honestly.

[Ink Q]

weak battle PLUS i think it was one-sided... i couldnt quote much from this battle, at all..

es.choir took it for the fact he had a decent flow unlike one's verse.. plus eschoir attempted at throwing a few punches, so thats why u get my vote. but like i said, weak from both sides... anyway one, ur lines were too stretched, and i wasnt feelin any of ur punches... none of them hit, no attempt at being witty and most of them were just either played/lame..

v./eschoir

i'll leave a link to my battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=304383

[One]

Uppin 1 I guess.

[One]

up number 2

[cLOUD9]

No real punches... wordplay was coo es's part. personals were non-existant one had one ... es flowed better an had better structure.. but both were basic nothing hard hitting

Vote: Es his flow was more atractive some lines were coo.. tho they are played a bit

[El Deciple]

alright es took this i don't even think i need to explain but i will anyways. i'll start off with an tip......... elevate the fuck up naw seriously man that shit y'all spitting aint cutting it .... and secondly choir take this (_____) shit out of there aiight...
and settle in cypher and spar in there to upgrade ya skills.........................
well thats pretty much it es. you took this with an better all around

v/es - R.T.F http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=304587

[Es.Choir]

2nd up.

Bump.

Rise.

Levitate.

Float.

Blah.

Drop Links.