.Tilt. vs. Stunee

[Stunee]

10-12 lines
30 minutes to check
2 hours to drop after your check
no d/r
no c/v´

[.Tilt.]

check check

[Stunee]

Ima drop now...

Let me think...One-Third devided into Two-Thirds of a fraction
did that make sense?.....no.....and neither does what you rappin
asses the situation....still got writers block?
try a little meditation....
just dont choke, like martha does when her stocks drop
Im a screw driver....and like a screw you end up screwed
what the fuck? weak punch....
I just helped you win, see > "Stunee, You Whack Dude!"
Well, Im not alone, cuz you a little whack too my friend
ok, Im a little better....
can I take that last line back? Thank you come again

[.Tilt.]

whack ass nigga look let me tell u suntin......

doggy ill jus "jack" "around the bush" "beat" this nigga all day,
your death cerificates like "chingy" only "one call away",
"ring".....dog u aint got a "awnser" to my raps like a knock of pair of "Iversons",
and to tell u the truth u wouldnt have "sick shit" if we put "diapers on em",
have u stuck on "iv's" "poision" ya flows like i was spittin "ivy",
pack ya bags for ya and have ya crew tellin ya "bye B",
"lyrically" wether text or orally doggy ill "murk you",
send "lines of death" "body bags layed out" who told ya "words cant hurt u",
"stone cold" at heart doggy aint petrified to "stune" "stunee",
but i petrified "stunee" have his body tinglein while he sayin it feels funny

owned

[.Tilt.]

bump 1

[.Tilt.]

bump 2

[Caesar Augustus]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=304173
^bth of yall hit that I'll wait....







...ok now heres how I see it.


Let me think...One-Third devided into Two-Thirds of a fraction
did that make sense?.....no.....and neither does what you rappin
^did u fail math? the answer is 1/2
asses the situation....still got writers block?
try a little meditation....
just dont choke, like martha does when her stocks drop
^no
Im a screw driver....and like a screw you end up screwed
what the fuck? weak punch....
I just helped you win, see > "Stunee, You Whack Dude!"
^no. the first part of the second line was true tho
Well, Im not alone, cuz you a little whack too my friend
ok, Im a little better....
can I take that last line back? Thank you come again
^no

You seemed to be a bit cock way too cocky unless ur just really that Bad


vs


doggy ill jus "jack" "around the bush" "beat" this nigga all day,
your death cerificates like "chingy" only "one call away",
^meh
"ring".....dog u aint got a "awnser" to my raps like a knock of pair of "Iversons",
and to tell u the truth u wouldnt have "sick shit" if we put "diapers on em",
^no
have u stuck on "iv's" "poision" ya flows like i was spittin "ivy",
pack ya bags for ya and have ya crew tellin ya "bye B",
^no
"lyrically" wether text or orally doggy ill "murk you",
send "lines of death" "body bags layed out" who told ya "words cant hurt u"
^meh,
"stone cold" at heart doggy aint petrified to "stune" "stunee",
but i petrified "stunee" have his body tinglein while he sayin it feels funny
^no

blah at your verse expand ur vocab it was very basic to read and a little predictable weak punches here aswell but u went at Stunee and got the win


V/Tilt.

both of you please elevate and learn what and effective punch is

[.Tilt.]

preciate it big homie uppin 3

[Stunee]

lol yeah, no doubt...btw, is 1/3 into 2/3rds 1/2? I aint to good with math ....I'm only writing more to this because its giving me some character bullshit, so umm, yeh, just upin for votes.

uppin

[.Tilt.]

bump 4

[[©Merked You®]™]

Let me think...One-Third devided into Two-Thirds of a fraction
did that make sense?.....no.....and neither does what you rappin
meh ok
asses the situation....still got writers block?
try a little meditation....
just dont choke, like martha does when her stocks drop
no
Im a screw driver....and like a screw you end up screwed
what the fuck? weak punch....
I just helped you win, see > "Stunee, You Whack Dude!"
lol nice
Well, Im not alone, cuz you a little whack too my friend
ok, Im a little better....
can I take that last line back? Thank you come again
naw

vs

doggy ill jus "jack" "around the bush" "beat" this nigga all day,
your death cerificates like "chingy" only "one call away",
meh better than his opener
"ring".....dog u aint got a "awnser" to my raps like a knock of pair of "Iversons",
and to tell u the truth u wouldnt have "sick shit" if we put "diapers on em",
meh ok
have u stuck on "iv's" "poision" ya flows like i was spittin "ivy",
pack ya bags for ya and have ya crew tellin ya "bye B",
lmao ok
"lyrically" wether text or orally doggy ill "murk you",
send "lines of death" "body bags layed out" who told ya "words cant hurt u",
lol good
"stone cold" at heart doggy aint petrified to "stune" "stunee",
but i petrified "stunee" have his body tinglein while he sayin it feels fun
lol good closer

really weak battle nothin was actually what i said i based "ok or good" on ur level you both need to elevate..
the stunne....your verse had less than nothin....mention his name use personals...u need better punches and make ur flow and wordplay better
Tilt....ur verse was better but still weak u mentioned his name but with no personals and dont use " <that try to fix up ur strutre read LLL or other vets around the site..but u did enough to take tha win here

[Summit Ave.]

Both came weak, i think we have already comprehended that. Both had weak concept's an punches. I think stunee used alot of cocky rhyme's which took away his consistancy alot. Tilt i thought had the right idea for wordplay, he just need's the elvation so he can develope that skill. Stunee, you showed no distinguished sense of wordplay, it was just line's put together trying to diss tilt. You have to be more creative. Tilt' you do have the right idea, not bad for a new comer' i have seen worse. You still need alot of work though.

v/ Tilt for wordplay consistancy.

[.Tilt.]

uppin for votes 5

[Skrip]

v// Tilt

better all round verse, work on flow though

decent battle

both elevate

[~ChIChO~]

Let me think...One-Third devided into Two-Thirds of a fraction
did that make sense?.....no.....and neither does what you rappin
decent
asses the situation....still got writers block?
try a little meditation....
just dont choke, like martha does when her stocks drop
wack
Im a screw driver....and like a screw you end up screwed
what the fuck? weak punch....
I just helped you win, see > "Stunee, You Whack Dude!"
nice
Well, Im not alone, cuz you a little whack too my friend
ok, Im a little better....
can I take that last line back? Thank you come again
wack

vs

doggy ill jus "jack" "around the bush" "beat" this nigga all day,
your death cerificates like "chingy" only "one call away",
ok
"ring".....dog u aint got a "awnser" to my raps like a knock of pair of "Iversons",
and to tell u the truth u wouldnt have "sick shit" if we put "diapers on em",
decent
have u stuck on "iv's" "poision" ya flows like i was spittin "ivy",
pack ya bags for ya and have ya crew tellin ya "bye B",
decent
"lyrically" wether text or orally doggy ill "murk you",
send "lines of death" "body bags layed out" who told ya "words cant hurt u",
nice
"stone cold" at heart doggy aint petrified to "stune" "stunee",
but i petrified "stunee" have his body tinglein while he sayin it feels fun
good closer

v//.Tilt.

much betta punches, didnt like tha structure tho, u dont need all tha quotation marks, most ppl can get tha wordplay, keep up