...10 lines...
...Drop in 1 hour...
...House rules blind spit...
...this is my chek...
...10 lines...
...Drop in 1 hour...
...House rules blind spit...
...this is my chek...
Groove To My Soul
♪♪♪
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Tie Ya Lip'z too the Remote-n-put u n a 'Silent-Pause
U Hit 'Without-Effect',Dam soul u Became a 'Lost-Cause
i'll 'Crack Ur Pipe',Just So u can't beath this 'Win'-d'
Fake Ass Netcee,u learned everything from K-mart ManaKinz
Stab u on ur Cd,Just to Leave u 'Dead-in ur-Tracks'
Survive With me?...Nah Cuz ur Heat 'Text'ure Lack'z
Write ur Verse In a "Topless-Bar',n still Couldn't 'Bare-It-All
Watch ur Slump Soul...
.........Cuz Dick-Rider's Wont Always Catch ur Fall
I'll groove to you soul And leave you dead you Lost To Angel
Cause you worst than the underdogs..
I cant be a loser like you....or touch ya liFe at a Angle
This shit aint close, I can use movie titles to show that it's over
Cuz the Hills Have Eyes .......
…… sadly for you, so do the voters
me vs. you and fuck a comparison. . your rhymin' is worse
You'd think we were in Texas cause there Arno good lines in your verse
That shit is gross. . but you're fucking homo dude and I’m droppin' gays
You see enough Cox to take credit in catching Nixon with the Watergate
Soul vs. .insomnia strong arm him punches’ll give him a free ride
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ that’s got whack wrtien all over it
...........well atleast the right side
Groove To My Soul
♪♪♪
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Write ur Verse In a "Topless-Bar',n still Couldn't 'Bare-It-All
Watch ur Slump Soul...
.........Cuz Dick-Rider's Wont Always Catch ur Fall
nice hit right there, i felt that this battle was mainly onesided as i felt that insom, had the majority of verse filled with good descent punches, wordplay, and some flashes of vokab.
soul- i have a read a couple of your battle and i feel the problem is you are trying to hard to punch with gay lines and this is a copout to me, come a little more orignal and try to use some personals, you did have the right idea with your closer, but i felt the wording could have been better
v/ insom
I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON
^^^ you dont do text, you shouldnt vote on it... or atleast know what ur talkin about.
This shit aint close, I can use movie titles to show that it's over
Cuz the Hills Have Eyes .......
…… sadly for you, so do the voters
^^^ liking this, good and witty
me vs. you and fuck a comparison. . your rhymin' is worse
You'd think we were in Texas cause there Arno good lines in your verse
^^^ ehh kind foreced but not bad
vs
a bunch of not terriable lines, just some that needed wording and less '''' shit, your wordplay and stuf was wayyyyy foreced
vote .soul.
When I was 10 I was a hip hoppin shorty wop,
known for rockin microphones n twistin off a 40 top.
up..1
Stab u on ur Cd,Just to Leave u 'Dead-in ur-Tracks'
Survive With me?...Nah Cuz ur Heat 'Text'ure Lack'z
v.s
This shit aint close, I can use movie titles to show that it's over
Cuz the Hills Have Eyes .......
…… sadly for you, so do the voters
Vote-Insom
His punches were a bit harder and better worded. The use of ....s is old. I mean old. Personals lacking on both ends but like I said INsom took this he came a bit harder.
Last edited by I Incis; August 6th, 2006 at 10:44 PM
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up..2
Both had a decent verse. .Insomnia had some good concept's as well with some weak ones. Soul your verse was okay. You had more weak concept's then fresh. That took alot away from your punches. Insomnia had a good delivery and was well around with wordplay.
v/ .Insomnia
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
up..3
thankz
Insom- Good Wordplay..good concepts..Could have been harder in some of your punches..but you pulled it together nicely...overall, good job
Soul- Your first 2 lines were the best..but then it fell off after that...i thought it was gunna be a lot better after i read your opener..but oh well..sum ok punches..need sum personals in there...structure was nice...But you should of had a lot more
no hate..but \/-Insomnia for reasons above
RB OG Triple OG
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up..4..
can we get this closed..nice battle Soul
bump 1 yeea good battle insom.
Groove To My Soul
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Tie Ya Lip'z too the Remote-n-put u n a 'Silent-Pause
U Hit 'Without-Effect',Dam soul u Became a 'Lost-Cause
ok.
i'll 'Crack Ur Pipe',Just So u can't beath this 'Win'-d'
Fake Ass Netcee,u learned everything from K-mart ManaKinz
No.
Stab u on ur Cd,Just to Leave u 'Dead-in ur-Tracks'
Survive With me?...Nah Cuz ur Heat 'Text'ure Lack'z
ok.
Write ur Verse In a "Topless-Bar',n still Couldn't 'Bare-It-All
Watch ur Slump Soul...
.........Cuz Dick-Rider's Wont Always Catch ur Fall
No.
I'll groove to you soul And leave you dead you Lost To Angel
Cause you worst than the underdogs..
I cant be a loser like you....or touch ya liFe at a Angle
meh.
vs.
This shit aint close, I can use movie titles to show that it's over
Cuz the Hills Have Eyes .......
…… sadly for you, so do the voters
lol.
me vs. you and fuck a comparison. . your rhymin' is worse
You'd think we were in Texas cause there Arno good lines in your verse
ok.
That shit is gross. . but you're fucking homo dude and I’m droppin' gays
You see enough Cox to take credit in catching Nixon with the Watergate
meh.
Soul vs. .insomnia strong arm him punches’ll give him a free ride
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ that’s got whack wrtien all over it
...........well atleast the right side
meh.
From the breakdown the winner of this battle is Soul. Wasn't reallt feelin any of Insomnia's lines.
\\//Soul
Stab u on ur Cd,Just to Leave u 'Dead-in ur-Tracks'
Survive With me?...Nah Cuz ur Heat 'Text'ure Lack'z
vs
This shit aint close, I can use movie titles to show that it's over
Cuz the Hills Have Eyes .......
…… sadly for you, so do the voters
v/is
This was an ok battle but isomnia got it with harder and more direct punche's. Soul you had some ok shit but were not as hard as is. Anyway good battle yo.
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