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    Your In Nation.

    since birth.

    I always had alot to believe in or at least i thought
    reading, being taught to walk the path the preacher walked
    had to read the bulk on my own, the pain hit through me
    and what i didnt understand another man explained it to me
    for this id go to war in a minute, i was so thoroughly smitten
    i felt like i was apart of something wit every word that was written
    and call me gullable but the art of war isnt just beefin
    it isnt givin up and leavin ..its fighting for what you believe in
    enlighten the people that read it, it'll take him some work
    but it'll all work out in the end if you make'em convert
    made up from birth to live, breath and die by everything wrote
    and you'll live a good life, have a good wife and never be broke
    and truthfully i liked it, i liked what it would do to me
    made me feel apart of something, up in my tight nit community
    lived with all the same kind, especially when it came time
    to show are religious commitmemt, we basically had the same minds
    sometimes i had to shake mines, i was forever day dreamin
    but when i woke up i soaked up everything the reverend stayed screamin
    eventually i aint believe him but i believed the best of his lies
    like when he said 2morrow would be the 1st day for the rest of our lives
    showed up to service and grabbed a brochure off of the desk
    bowed for no more than seconds then made a cross on my chest
    sat down, opened my book ..my eyes glued to the page
    preacher grabbed the mic to enlighten us on what were doin today
    he said 'SACRIFRICE!, today is the day we need to get this done
    and its the day we REALLY see how deep your commitment runs!
    the collection plate will be replaced with flask's that are surely great
    and they contain a one way ticket to get past the pearly gates
    and as one we will take this drink!
    i assume ida made this risk
    im just glad that after he said 'SACRFRIFE!'

    i was in the bathroom, taking a piss.
    1/2 of The Hearty Boys

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    40 Cal. Ripken
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    hey guys drop some links and shit, dont be shy.
    1/2 of The Hearty Boys

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    Lol, this was good.. im tired as hell & don't feel like doing a reply to be honest... but just so you know I read this piece & I liked it.. hope that counts for something

    pz

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    40 Cal. Ripken
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    hey man coming from you its means everything. this was for a topical battle and had to be under 30 lines so i couldnt get the story going as much as i wanted but i thought it came out good. so thanks.
    1/2 of The Hearty Boys

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    40 Cal. Ripken
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    upping, leave links.
    1/2 of The Hearty Boys

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