thank you nique, I'll return favor as soon as I can, too blown to attempt now..
thank you nique, I'll return favor as soon as I can, too blown to attempt now..
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thiz shit be jumpin son this shit was hot
niggaz real niggaz fly niggaz hood
^lmao
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Fuck dude. You are yet to make a Om that does not impress me. This wordpaly was fucking wonderful. The flow was great and went through this whole peice very well done in other words. The creativty was nice. M<ade this peice worth reading. The imagenary put image after image in my head. You didnt need those pictures because you put some in my head. The structre was nice and bsic making it easy to readand enjoy. The story you used but incredible. It was very good and I enjoyed this peice alot. 10-10. Keep writing man. I love your work.
~LeX
all i have to say, is this is my favorite piece i've ever read.
not on rb, i'm talking, since i was a little tyke and reading shits in books and all that. this is my favorite piece, ever.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
^ wow, I'm just glad you read it bruh, hope to get you to come back for future drops.. Thanls, I really appreciate everyone takign the time to drop in on my threads...
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replied to witness and spit, along with a few others, sorry for the delay, I'm just swampped..
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No Problem
Nenhum problema
Nessun problema
Ningún problema
Aucun problème
What can I say.
Your writtens are always amazing. I dont know why some people see it as stretched. This flowed off the tongue for me. I like your vocab, some kids look up words and throw them in without them making sense, You? you fit them in perfectly.
The message in this piece was real deep, and it did not become too simple or too complicated, somehting you do perfectly.
I liked this mainly because its soemthing you can relate too, so emotion shows through. Its harder to write about something you cant relate too. And for me, Thats what made this piece.
Thanks for the good read
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=304699
^
Id appreciate feed there?
Word Perfect
Man i loved this pieace you held strong points.the figurative langugae was great .dayum i wish i could wriht like that oh well it'll take me some time of elevation .I was saying the imagery was awesome i like how you described the children to day and great multis i was definently feeling that. This was an dope pieace if you got the time it'll be cool if you'd could help me elevate.
RTF
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thanks all,
sure, I never have a problem helping serious writers elevate...
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rise
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upping
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Aye Bounce wanna collab? I'll do my best I swear.
You have to take a number...
There are many many dope writers who already were promised a collab. I just don't have the time to get to them all...
If you drop a verse on a track, I might be able to record something tonight.
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