lol at b dog freeposting n gettin banned.....
dog you wack anywayz i hope u get banned again
Cliff.Hanger
Fuck.<3
lol at b dog freeposting n gettin banned.....
dog you wack anywayz i hope u get banned again
LAst upp...And b-dogg you gotta wait your turn..i got 3 open then i'll batte you whack ass...agine......LAst uppp
man, I gotta do some something soo iamma make this quick dude
Puttin <3 at the end of your name...Damn anit that what chicks do?
(nice)
You spits is shitty man, they need too be stairolized
I leave this nigga shit'n him slef Even if he anit yet paralized
(ok)
Right now he thinks hes tight, but after we gunna see how he feels
This niggaz 16......
Soo i put him in a wheel chair soo he'd have some nice new wheels
(nice)
Fuck love eh? thoe i might missunderstand is it fuck heart?
At least you think'n of fuckin something.....Now thats a start
(badly worded but good concept)
heyy man...you made a new hailday what u got too say?
Fuck.<3 just got murdered soo so can call it anit-valentines day
(nice concept meh worded.. ok closer)
overall pretty decent verse man
vs
Who gives a fuck about your day, everyone is heedless
Kids hanging off a cliff........................................
..................Once I Cause his ass to become weedless
(cool)
When you say you lift heavy, probably as much as your age
Kids 13 and has no education..............................
..............................Time to elevate and get on the page
(elevation disses = played as a gameboy)
Dudes 2-0, battling noobish mutha fuckaz that are rotten
This fuckin Kids talks soft I could mistake him as cotton
(meh, if someone called you cotton would you be insulted? no.)
If he left i wouldn't care i would have just forgotton bitch
You couldn't make yourself good even if u had a toggle switch
(haha cool)
Canada boy, Damn your from toronto, i aint feelin your flag
Everytime i see it i just tell you "Leave", i don't feel real bad*
(umm.. huh?)
Fuck your coach, fuck the track, i'ma approach ,what your back
You are toast, stop talkin trash, i'm commin better start runnin fast
(really nice inners, no punch though...)
Even if he does run he goes no where even with elevation
Congratualations of feeling annihilation, so time to start evation
(ok)
Just to tell you your battle against bdogg wasnt even that intreaging
I hope you stop breathing......................................... .........
........................cuz if u don't either way your going to be leaving
(mmeeehhh okish)
overall: pretty decent verse
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i have no idea who to vote for... this was really close and i dont want any hating cause both verses were really even...
after rereading both i decided that both were even on the punches
but Fuck <3 had better wording, more complex rhymes, and a nicer flow to his verse...
so v/ Fuck <3, seriously no hate
hit up my battle against Zaverian please... i1 more vote to get it closed
but seriously drop an honest vote...
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Canada boy, Damn your from toronto, i aint feelin your flag
Everytime i see it i just tell you "Leave", i don't feel real bad*
my bad forgot to explain- leave (leaf) on the canada flag
uppin # 3.
man, I gotta do some something soo iamma make this quick dude
Puttin <3 at the end of your name...Damn anit that what chicks do?
v.
If he left i wouldn't care i would have just forgotton bitch
You couldn't make yourself good even if u had a toggle switch
Cliff you had a blah verse. That was your only good punch. Everything else was extremly week. Stay consistant an get better concept's. Fuck you stared off weak as well. Every now an then you had a good punch. You need to stay consistant an also get better concept's. The one's you had were simple. Sorry cliff, i appreciate you voting on my battle, but i didnt feel you took this one.
v/ Fuck<3
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
man, I gotta do some something soo iamma make this quick dude
Puttin <3 at the end of your name...Damn anit that what chicks do?
Your best line^
vs
If he left i wouldn't care i would have just forgotton bitch
You couldn't make yourself good even if u had a toggle switch
ok^
v/Fuck <3
Fuck had a better verse and more direct punche's. Cliff you had one meh line and the rest you feel off and was wack, elevate. Fuck decent verse and was enough to win.
thanks for the votes. uppin # 4 for more.
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