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I Leave Niggas With No Neck Like Fat Guys
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You Do Wanta Get On My Bad Side
I Leave Niggas With No Neck Like Fat Guys
same same...Originally Posted by lOOks.
lOok$ like a clean kill, i'm ill, that's no joke...
if your career was string, you'd be at the end of your rope...
i'm sendin' this dope, a hell-in-a-handbasket massacre...
would stop now, but need at least a hundred fifty characters!
BLaKLiSTeD, yeah, he's sonnin' this kid, call 'em the g.o.a.t...
since absence makes the heart grow fonder, you'll miss a vote...
the silouhette of Barry Bonds in the batting cage would probably be similar...
cuz... for votes? 5-0, that's a BALLPARK FIGURE...
100%, non stop, these kids got no talent...
lynch this idiot on the scale... victory... hanging in the balance?
nah...
ooooh God, it's him again...
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u'd get layed out more den tables wen dem punches start rippin
you can pick a restaurant, either way ur gon get served pimpin
yea hes used to the turn tables..
....but dat dnt mean dis outcome gon change
he wont c the punchs comin, u'd think i was shootin from range
dnt get it twisted, till now i neva knew dis 2 face wigga existed
rbs not racially confused, but hes verses keeps gettin blacklisted
dis pussys gon get fisted, so u can endure the pain like virgins
when givin birth cus after im done, dis pussys gon need surgeons
ima end dis race have u wavin the white flag with out the strip
you an 03 head?, well welcome to 06 faggit im triple ur hype
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You Do Wanta Get On My Bad Side
I Leave Niggas With No Neck Like Fat Guys
u'd get layed out more den tables wen dem punches start rippin
you can pick a restaurant, either way ur gon get served pimpin
*ok
yea hes used to the turn tables..
....but dat dnt mean dis outcome gon change
he wont c the punchs comin, u'd think i was shootin from range
*nah
dnt get it twisted, till now i neva knew dis 2 face wigga existed
rbs not racially confused, but hes verses keeps gettin blacklisted
*ok
dis pussys gon get fisted, so u can endure the pain like virgins
when givin birth cus after im done, dis pussys gon need surgeons
*ok
ima end dis race have u wavin the white flag with out the strip
you an 03 head?, well welcome to 06 faggit im triple ur hype
*good
decent verse i thought u had good concepts n a consistent verse no played rhymes or bad good job..
8/10
vs
lOok$ like a clean kill, i'm ill, that's no joke...
if your career was string, you'd be at the end of your rope...
*nah
i'm sendin' this dope, a hell-in-a-handbasket massacre...
would stop now, but need at least a hundred fifty characters!
*ok
BLaKLiSTeD, yeah, he's sonnin' this kid, call 'em the g.o.a.t...
since absence makes the heart grow fonder, you'll miss a vote...
*meh
the silouhette of Barry Bonds in the batting cage would probably be similar...
cuz... for votes? 5-0, that's a BALLPARK FIGURE...
*nah
100%, non stop, these kids got no talent...
lynch this idiot on the scale... victory... hanging in the balance?
*nope
alotta self glory didn't like the verse no hate but weak punches..
3/10
vote blaklisted easy no hate...
LMFAO you rate my verse 8/10 and rate hes 3/10 then how u gon say vote blacklisted? i think u got the personalities mixed up lol. uppin 1Originally Posted by Kid New Era
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Got a hole in you then your bleeding
so its not like im just calling you pussy for no reason - Jada
lOok$ like a clean kill, i'm ill, that's no joke...
if your career was string, you'd be at the end of your rope...
no
i'm sendin' this dope, a hell-in-a-handbasket massacre...
would stop now, but need at least a hundred fifty characters!
played ive used this concept before
BLaKLiSTeD, yeah, he's sonnin' this kid, call 'em the g.o.a.t...
since absence makes the heart grow fonder, you'll miss a vote...
ok
the silouhette of Barry Bonds in the batting cage would probably be similar...
cuz... for votes? 5-0, that's a BALLPARK FIGURE...
i guess ok
100%, non stop, these kids got no talent...
lynch this idiot on the scale... victory... hanging in the balance?
no
vs.
u'd get layed out more den tables wen dem punches start rippin
you can pick a restaurant, either way ur gon get served pimpin
nice
yea hes used to the turn tables..
....but dat dnt mean dis outcome gon change
he wont c the punchs comin, u'd think i was shootin from range
ok
dnt get it twisted, till now i neva knew dis 2 face wigga existed
rbs not racially confused, but hes verses keeps gettin blacklisted
lol
dis pussys gon get fisted, so u can endure the pain like virgins
when givin birth cus after im done, dis pussys gon need surgeons
meh
ima end dis race have u wavin the white flag with out the strip
you an 03 head?, well welcome to 06 faggit im triple ur hype
didnt rhyme
v//Looks
hit up Battle #2 in my sig please
Originally Posted by Wyte
WTF STRIP AND HYPE DNT RHYME? DAMN WOTS RB GOT TO.
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Got a hole in you then your bleeding
so its not like im just calling you pussy for no reason - Jada
ok, blacklisted, you had a couple ok lines but on a serious note they were played. your lines have already been written and it shows you aren't that savvy with the times here. you need to read up on battles, and notice the type of creativity there is. preferrably closed LLL battles. work on your shit, i like your wording but your concepts are so bland. keep trying though man ...
vs.
dnt get it twisted, till now i neva knew dis 2 face wigga existed
rbs not racially confused, but hes verses keeps gettin blacklisted
this was OK at best. could've been a lot better.
dis pussys gon get fisted, so u can endure the pain like virgins
when givin birth cus after im done, dis pussys gon need surgeons
concepts OK at best too, but simply because its a pussie joke. its wack.
ima end dis race have u wavin the white flag with out the strip
you an 03 head?, well welcome to 06 faggit im triple ur
this was a new thing, but your bad wording came back on this one.
LOOks, your wording IS getting better, but its still a little rough around the edges. you need to work on some things still, but you're deffinatly getting there. your concepts hurt you because they aren't that harsh, and don't be scared to spell shit right and call him a faggot fuck or something. be direct man. you'll get good.
word, well, thats my opinion. my votes obvious ..
v. LOOks
uppin
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Got a hole in you then your bleeding
so its not like im just calling you pussy for no reason - Jada
looks-you are elevating slowly but surely, you wording is improving but your punches are still lacking, you spelled stripe/strip wrong, lol, thats why know one got your last punch, i liked it tho, you also need work on multies and internals, not bad tho.
blak-you dropped really noobish, nothing stood out as 'whoa' and all of your punches were played for the most part, you need to elevate, if you are a head from 03' you probly just need to shake off the rust but you will get there.
vote looks
hit mine up niggaz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=303415
lol....oh shit....my bad homie..Originally Posted by lOOk$
lol vote looks easy....
well i don?t have enuff posts anyways so yur lucky ..lol ma bad thoOriginally Posted by Kid New Era
uppin 4
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Got a hole in you then your bleeding
so its not like im just calling you pussy for no reason - Jada
u'd get layed out more den tables wen dem punches start rippin
you can pick a restaurant, either way ur gon get served pimpin
ha ok
yea hes used to the turn tables..
....but dat dnt mean dis outcome gon change
he wont c the punchs comin, u'd think i was shootin from range
meh
dnt get it twisted, till now i neva knew dis 2 face wigga existed
rbs not racially confused, but hes verses keeps gettin blacklisted
ha ok
dis pussys gon get fisted, so u can endure the pain like virgins
when givin birth cus after im done, dis pussys gon need surgeons
meh
ima end dis race have u wavin the white flag with out the strip
you an 03 head?, well welcome to 06 faggit im triple ur hype
not good
vs.
lOok$ like a clean kill, i'm ill, that's no joke...
if your career was string, you'd be at the end of your rope...
nah
i'm sendin' this dope, a hell-in-a-handbasket massacre...
would stop now, but need at least a hundred fifty characters!
...nah self-glory partna
BLaKLiSTeD, yeah, he's sonnin' this kid, call 'em the g.o.a.t...
since absence makes the heart grow fonder, you'll miss a vote...
nah...
the silouhette of Barry Bonds in the batting cage would probably be similar...
cuz... for votes? 5-0, that's a BALLPARK FIGURE...
hell no self-...
100%, non stop, these kids got no talent...
lynch this idiot on the scale... victory... hanging in the balance?
...no wtf...nah
V/look$ forreal easy...too much self-blak...u gotta stop that...
*The Original.*
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