Crew battle
10 lines
house rules
due 2morow midnight
300 to vote
Crew battle
10 lines
house rules
due 2morow midnight
300 to vote
check.
checkin in. good luck man.
Your too bigheaded for a lame...like unknown conceited celebrities,
Ya crew D.T.Y...lol...
...the fact ya'll give Inhouse Rimjobs makes ya'll D.I.R.T.Y,
This kid could never be sick....even if he caught scarlet fever,
And the loss is like a ringing phone....time for you to receiver,
Go hang yourself kid...I've even tied the noose...here's the rope,
If mah punches made ya verse crack...
...they still wouldn't be considered dope,
Don't break cuz of the challenge...I can see your getting tense,
You couldn't be sick if I made you throw up 'n shit...
...then pushed it all back in,
At best your mediocre...and your definitely not a fuckin vet fag,
Cuz believe me,that^s the only standard your verses'll ever have,
Wining here sincerely your shot, gun? this hoe wont popOriginally Posted by Lord of Pens
concepts, wordplay, punche's..
all shit you dont got.
Biting penlord name, god dam son..what a genius
no need to try, cuz everyone murk's lord of the penis
be for real kid.. kill you, so the beef wont leak
you a biter or recycle...
you droped 5 om's in one dam weak!
blast like a rocket.. You texting, just please stop it
HEY everyone i found somthing special..
meh just lent in your pocket's.
I murked several herb's.. Look's like i got this too
but i'll just end it like this to give you a confidence boost
*Yawn's*
LOP:
-Your too bigheaded for a lame...like unknown conceited celebrities,
Ya crew D.T.Y...lol...
...the fact ya'll give Inhouse Rimjobs makes ya'll D.I.R.T.Y,
^No, weak^
This kid could never be sick....even if he caught scarlet fever,
And the loss is like a ringing phone....time for you to receiver,
^Would've been ok if worded better and played^
Go hang yourself kid...I've even tied the noose...here's the rope,
If mah punches made ya verse crack...
...they still wouldn't be considered dope,
^Meh. Nope^
Don't break cuz of the challenge...I can see your getting tense,
You couldn't be sick if I made you throw up 'n shit...
...then pushed it all back in,
^Weak, Nah^
At best your mediocre...and your definitely not a fuckin vet fag,
Cuz believe me,that^s the only standard your verses'll ever have,
^Ok Closure but played^
KS:
-Wining here sincerely your shot, gun? this hoe wont pop
concepts, wordplay, punche's..
all shit you dont got.
^LOL, Nice personal could've been worded better tho^
Biting penlord name, god dam son..what a genius
no need to try, cuz everyone murk's lord of the penis
^Nah, Weak^
be for real kid.. kill you, so the beef wont leak
you a biter or recycle...
you droped 5 om's in one dam weak!
^Its not impossibe to drop that many OMs maybe he has alotta spare time on this hands^
blast like a rocket.. You texting, just please stop it
HEY everyone i found somthing special..
meh just lent in your pocket's.
^Nah^
I murked several herb's.. Look's like i got this too
but i'll just end it like this to give you a confidence boost
^OK^
v:----:Kid Sick for overally better verse
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
Wining here sincerely your shot, gun? this hoe wont pop
concepts, wordplay, punche's..
all shit you dont got.
K
Biting penlord name, god dam son..what a genius
no need to try, cuz everyone murk's lord of the penis
k
be for real kid.. kill you, so the beef wont leak
you a biter or recycle...
you droped 5 om's in one dam weak!
no
blast like a rocket.. You texting, just please stop it
HEY everyone i found somthing special..
meh just lent in your pocket's.
no
I murked several herb's.. Look's like i got this too
but i'll just end it like this to give you a confidence boost
k
vs
Your too bigheaded for a lame...like unknown conceited celebrities,
Ya crew D.T.Y...lol...
...the fact ya'll give Inhouse Rimjobs makes ya'll D.I.R.T.Y,
ha K
This kid could never be sick....even if he caught scarlet fever,
And the loss is like a ringing phone....time for you to receiver,
no
Go hang yourself kid...I've even tied the noose...here's the rope,
If mah punches made ya verse crack...
...they still wouldn't be considered dope,
meh
Don't break cuz of the challenge...I can see your getting tense,
You couldn't be sick if I made you throw up 'n shit...
...then pushed it all back in,
ha k
At best your mediocre...and your definitely not a fuckin vet fag,
Cuz believe me,that^s the only standard your verses'll ever have,
nice closer
V/ Lord Of Pens...no hate watsoever
Kid Caught a consistency but the last punch did it for me in that battle...it was good but kid neva stood out...but Pen fix ya damn structure...its horrible...lucky I look at words and not structure like half these emcees...
*The Original.*
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Your too bigheaded for a lame...like unknown conceited celebrities,
Ya crew D.T.Y...lol...
...the fact ya'll give Inhouse Rimjobs makes ya'll D.I.R.T.Y,
NICE
This kid could never be sick....even if he caught scarlet fever,
And the loss is like a ringing phone....time for you to receiver,
IGGHT
Go hang yourself kid...I've even tied the noose...here's the rope,
If mah punches made ya verse crack...
...they still wouldn't be considered dope,
NAHH
Don't break cuz of the challenge...I can see your getting tense,
You couldn't be sick if I made you throw up 'n shit...
...then pushed it all back in,
MEHH
At best your mediocre...and your definitely not a fuckin vet fag,
Cuz believe me,that^s the only standard your verses'll ever have,
NAHH
O.K VERSE U FELL OFF THE ONLY GOOD BARS WERE THE 1ST 2
VS.
Wining here sincerely your shot, gun? this hoe wont pop
concepts, wordplay, punche's..
all shit you dont got.
PLAYED BUT GOOD ATTMEPT U COYLD OF DONE BETTER
Biting penlord name, god dam son..what a genius
no need to try, cuz everyone murk's lord of the penis
NAHH O.K ATTMEPT BUT TYPE CHILDISH UN LES U SAID SOMETHING FUNNY
be for real kid.. kill you, so the beef wont leak
you a biter or recycle...
you droped 5 om's in one dam weak!
EHHH O.K BUTU JUST A STATEMENT
blast like a rocket.. You texting, just please stop it
HEY everyone i found somthing special..
meh just lent in your pocket's.
EHH AGAIN JUST ANOTHER STATEMENT
I murked several herb's.. Look's like i got this too
but i'll just end it like this to give you a confidence boost
NAHH
EHHH VERSE MAN U HAD ATTEMPTS JUST COULDNT LANDEM
V/LP CUZ HE DID HAVE BETTER PUCNHES
U KNOW U'VE DROPPED WAY BETTER KID
BOTH YALL HIT UP THAT BATTLE IN MY SIG. THANKS.
Ok lord please stop pming...
[QUOTE=U.S.P.]
I see you saying honest but it's not cool..
Some people vote for the pmer and could say it is swaying.
thank's for your time.
Wining here sincerely your shot, gun? this hoe wont pop
concepts, wordplay, punche's..
all shit you dont got.
ok
Biting penlord name, god dam son..what a genius
no need to try, cuz everyone murk's lord of the penis
seen it many times you just really fliped it.
be for real kid.. kill you, so the beef wont leak
you a biter or recycle...
you droped 5 om's in one dam weak!
didnt work for me.
blast like a rocket.. You texting, just please stop it
HEY everyone i found somthing special..
meh just lent in your pocket's.
no
I murked several herb's.. Look's like i got this too
but i'll just end it like this to give you a confidence boost
meh
vs
Your too bigheaded for a lame...like unknown conceited celebrities,
Ya crew D.T.Y...lol...
...the fact ya'll give Inhouse Rimjobs makes ya'll D.I.R.T.Y,
lol. ok
This kid could never be sick....even if he caught scarlet fever,
And the loss is like a ringing phone....time for you to receiver,
meh
Go hang yourself kid...I've even tied the noose...here's the rope,
If mah punches made ya verse crack...
...they still wouldn't be considered dope,
meh
Don't break cuz of the challenge...I can see your getting tense,
You couldn't be sick if I made you throw up 'n shit...
...then pushed it all back in,
lol your best punch
At best your mediocre...and your definitely not a fuckin vet fag,
Cuz believe me,that^s the only standard your verses'll ever have,
ok closer
Kidsick-
Well Kid you just fell off at a critical point in the battle you need to stay
consistent thoughout the whole battle more and you could have took
this battle by a long shot man I've seen way better from you kid you
need to get back on it.So you can be merkin these people again.But dont
get me wrong you didnt come wack basicly just not hard enough you know
Seems to me you took LOP alot lighter than he seems you know man.But
wordplay wise you had a litte and punch wise you fliped things at times
That I've seem a couple of times used on him in a previous battle Structure
wise it was decent but overall you losed this battle by a little overall your
whole verse gets and 8.1/10 stay up and keep doin your dizzle man.
Lord of pens-Well you came nice for a noweight wit no rescept man people are really takin
you light man.But overall your wordplay and overall set up of your punches and shit was would made you win this battle you just overall had the better drop nuffin elese really to say yours lines made me laugh and I didnt see anything flip that was used before you came like a basic keystyle good job the reason you really won is because you are not being looked at as good your are bein looked at as another text battler you have mad potential with text man keep textin and stay up overall your drop get and 8.8/10 stay up and keep doin what you do.
Battle Overall-Good battle from both ya'll both have potential to become one of the best just got to stay doin what ya'll do you know kid sick you just need to work some more and you'll be killin it easy man stay up both overall the whole battle both verse together gets and 9.3/10 good battle and nice drops.
Vote-Lord of pens for reasons above no beef to any kid sick stay up dawg.
Your too bigheaded for a lame...like unknown conceited celebrities,
Ya crew D.T.Y...lol...
...the fact ya'll give Inhouse Rimjobs makes ya'll D.I.R.T.Y,
Don't break cuz of the challenge...I can see your getting tense,
You couldn't be sick if I made you throw up 'n shit...
...then pushed it all back in,
vs
Wining here sincerely your shot, gun? this hoe wont pop
concepts, wordplay, punche's..
all shit you dont got.
ok battle kid you came weak as hell yhomie i seen you do better but you cant underestimate all noweights cause 1 of them are gonna pull somthing out the bag and catch you off guard like what pens did here LP i felt you're verse was iight you had some gd lines in thier felt you could have dont better with the wording but hey you did you're thing
v/LP
Deadly
meh, havent battled in a while and text is getting boring to me. I didnt under estimate I saw his drop hour's before i dropped. Just meh.
upp #2
Your too bigheaded for a lame...like unknown conceited celebrities,
Ya crew D.T.Y...lol...
...the fact ya'll give Inhouse Rimjobs makes ya'll D.I.R.T.Y,
nah
This kid could never be sick....even if he caught scarlet fever,
And the loss is like a ringing phone....time for you to receiver,
ok
Go hang yourself kid...I've even tied the noose...here's the rope,
If mah punches made ya verse crack...
...they still wouldn't be considered dope,
ok
Don't break cuz of the challenge...I can see your getting tense,
You couldn't be sick if I made you throw up 'n shit...
...then pushed it all back in,
didnt rhyme.
At best your mediocre...and your definitely not a fuckin vet fag,
Cuz believe me,that^s the only standard your verses'll ever have,
ok pretty good closer
Wining here sincerely your shot, gun? this hoe wont pop
concepts, wordplay, punche's..
all shit you dont got.
no
Biting penlord name, god dam son..what a genius
no need to try, cuz everyone murk's lord of the penis
no
be for real kid.. kill you, so the beef wont leak
you a biter or recycle...
you droped 5 om's in one dam weak!
no
blast like a rocket.. You texting, just please stop it
HEY everyone i found somthing special..
meh just lent in your pocket's.
ok nice
I murked several herb's.. Look's like i got this too
but i'll just end it like this to give you a confidence boost
no
v/pens......better verse
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
uppin 1
Your too bigheaded for a lame...like unknown conceited celebrities,
Ya crew D.T.Y...lol...
...the fact ya'll give Inhouse Rimjobs makes ya'll D.I.R.T.Y,
Don't break cuz of the challenge...I can see your getting tense,
You couldn't be sick if I made you throw up 'n shit...
...then pushed it all back in,
vs
blast like a rocket.. You texting, just please stop it
HEY everyone i found somthing special..
meh just lent in your pocket's.
kid sick i felt you came one bar short of taking this battle
both of you had equal lines through out the battle till it came 2 the closer i rekon pen just took it.
no hate but my vote goes 2 pen
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