10 lines
10 check
hour drop or anything over
house
easy win for me
GL
*Jay*
Gho$t Wrighter
10 lines
10 check
hour drop or anything over
house
easy win for me
GL
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Ch'eck
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
check mate nigga
pussy ass nigga get it
a "gho$t" vs. jay great this nigga thinkin since thats his name punchs'll miss,
ya right he gotta better chance of his dood actually bein a bitch,
10 lines thats 10 times i could rip ya ass in less then them 10 lines,
he thinkin "this dood said the same thing twice" that dont rhyme,
quick win? right think twice and stop hatein,
this nigga couldnt have "hot sex spit" if his "pussy lips" was "kissin satan",
its bad these niggas gonna disown u even tho "i owned u",
like ya heart was a "touchdown" ill hit the "red zone" on you,
"pretty boy" type nigga talkin niggas like my dimples,
u fuckin wit a real nigga who will put "red dots" on your "face" like "pimples
get ya life bitch
your a fuckin' a stoner kid, i'ld kill this noob and nobody would'a cared,
n' jay's finna' get a blunt... object smashed straight into his head.
this shits easy, im whoring cats ready to mash, mob an' jerk,
s'only time you'll see Street Sweaper, is when you visit your dads work.
i'll uppercut your jaw kid, watch this jay take flight,
you The Reformation of a Genius? fuck that saint right.
no need to try kid, im talking locations, the fuck do you live,
shit i searched for you in bad area... n' all i found was a error message.
i've climbed mountains, battled giants, on this site im BIG!
you know your wack when ya best acomplishment was... geting in my sig.
Blah Blah Blah cant be bothered. die!
if you dont get my punches dont vote!
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
lol ight drop i seen u do better ghost n e ways uppin 1
i know Rofl i didnt try one bit, ima save the trying for my LLL season
[1]
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
*Jay*:
I Wasn't Feeling Your Verse At All. It Didn't Have Anything In It. The Verse 2 Lines Started Off On A GOOD Track But You Fell Off Right After That. Your Punchlines/Disses Were Played. That "Red-Dot" Line Has Been Used So Much Its Not Even A Punch Any More.
Gho$t Wrighter:
I Wasn't Really Feeling That Verse, But I See That You Got Madd Potential. That Verse Could've Probably Been More Fire If You Would've Set Them Up Right And Fixed The Punches A Little Bit. That "Error Message" Line Could've Been GOOD If You Would've Re-Worded It Better.
My Vote Goes To Gho$t Wrighter For Just Having A Better Verse Overall..
Vote - Gho$t Wrighter
your a fuckin' a stoner kid, i'ld kill this noob and nobody would'a cared,
n' jay's finna' get a blunt... object smashed straight into his head.
haha okay
this shits easy, im whoring cats ready to mash, mob an' jerk,
s'only time you'll see Street Sweaper, is when you visit your dads work
haha and....... hes done
vs
umm nothing
1 sided ghost crushed this kid,jay came way to played, and just herbish
vote ghost
When I was 10 I was a hip hoppin shorty wop,
known for rockin microphones n twistin off a 40 top.
[2] lol blah blah i didnt try coz i wanted a win.. fuck the 150 post thing...
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
i'll uppercut your jaw kid, watch this jay take flight,
you The Reformation of a Genius? fuck that saint right.
i've climbed mountains, battled giants, on this site im BIG!
you know your wack when ya best acomplishment was... geting in my sig.
vs.
nothin
pretty weak battle by the both of you, Jay you had a few half decent concepts in your verse but none of you punches were worth quoting because they were all worded horribly, you may needa work on your flow a bit to, ghost wrighter you came with a couple fresh lines, ive heard better from you but you took this win easy, you definatley have potential in all aspects of texting, decent verse.
v/ Ghost.
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Verbal Intercourse
damn, battle was weak as shit,
Nothing
vs.
Nothing
jay came shitty, with nothing in his verse, no real punches, personals etc, ghost also came shitty with no good punches either, both need to elevate alot, ghost won for having to try an attempt a punch
V/ ghost
TNL
a "gho$t" vs. jay great this nigga thinkin since thats his name punchs'll miss,
ya right he gotta better chance of his dood actually bein a bitch,
no
10 lines thats 10 times i could rip ya ass in less then them 10 lines,
he thinkin "this dood said the same thing twice" that dont rhyme,
statement
quick win? right think twice and stop hatein,
this nigga couldnt have "hot sex spit" if his "pussy lips" was "kissin satan",
no!
its bad these niggas gonna disown u even tho "i owned u",
like ya heart was a "touchdown" ill hit the "red zone" on you,
meh ok
"pretty boy" type nigga talkin niggas like my dimples,
u fuckin wit a real nigga who will put "red dots" on your "face" like "pimples
Played personal on him
your a fuckin' a stoner kid, i'ld kill this noob and nobody would'a cared,
n' jay's finna' get a blunt... object smashed straight into his head.
ok
this shits easy, im whoring cats ready to mash, mob an' jerk,
s'only time you'll see Street Sweaper, is when you visit your dads work.
ok
i'll uppercut your jaw kid, watch this jay take flight,
you The Reformation of a Genius? fuck that saint right.
no
no need to try kid, im talking locations, the fuck do you live,
shit i searched for you in bad area... n' all i found was a error message.
???
i've climbed mountains, battled giants, on this site im BIG!
you know your wack when ya best acomplishment was... geting in my sig.
ok closer
v/ghost no hate
both hit up my links honestly
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
your a fuckin' a stoner kid, i'ld kill this noob and nobody would'a cared,
n' jay's finna' get a blunt... object smashed straight into his head.
ok concept coulda been mad nicer, kinda played
this shits easy, im whoring cats ready to mash, mob an' jerk,
s'only time you'll see Street Sweaper, is when you visit your dads work.
its cool, but real indirect unless im missing something??
i'll uppercut your jaw kid, watch this jay take flight,
you The Reformation of a Genius? fuck that saint right.
wording killed this, coulda be alright
no need to try kid, im talking locations, the fuck do you live,
shit i searched for you in bad area... n' all i found was a error message.
this whole bar was pretty weak.
i've climbed mountains, battled giants, on this site im BIG!
you know your wack when ya best acomplishment was... geting in my sig.
yeah this is almost funny... decent, not really harsh tho..
a "gho$t" vs. jay great this nigga thinkin since thats his name punchs'll miss,
ya right he gotta better chance of his dood actually bein a bitch,
nah
10 lines thats 10 times i could rip ya ass in less then them 10 lines,
he thinkin "this dood said the same thing twice" that dont rhyme,
lol
quick win? right think twice and stop hatein,
this nigga couldnt have "hot sex spit" if his "pussy lips" was "kissin satan",
hah
its bad these niggas gonna disown u even tho "i owned u",
like ya heart was a "touchdown" ill hit the "red zone" on you
eh,
"pretty boy" type nigga talkin niggas like my dimples,
u fuckin wit a real nigga who will put "red dots" on your "face" like "pimples
lolz
fuck ahah, dudes verse made me crack up...^
but yea ghost some cool concepts, wording on some was off. n yea...
ummm this isnt sam jay that was on here 6 months and more before and he was good right? cuz this is uber weak.... ghost had some decent(in compare to jays) lines and he won this easily..
V/ghost
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