10-12 lines
blind spit
no feedin
no d/r
no hatin
Due:tomorrow
Check in:Today
Supernat
X.Qui.Zit
10-12 lines
blind spit
no feedin
no d/r
no hatin
Due:tomorrow
Check in:Today
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Originally Posted by Cartman
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Last edited by X.Qui.Zit; July 31st, 2006 at 12:59 AM
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Originally Posted by Cartman
I'll summarize Mal in a book, he dont got the balls to say this
I'm endin this joke.. as soon as i'm done rippin all the pages
got whats comin to you, its your mouth i'll be opening wide,prick
man if dopeness revolves around you then glad 4 bein your sidekick
who ya think ur toyin dude super's gonna unleash the boy in you
knew ya written wisdom n' its even funnier that u joined the crew
your a waste of everyone's time, stay quite n' lie down
if life is too short to waste you should be a giant by now
you were denied from VI, so lemmie shout this bar dude
VI really does want you..TO STAY the fuck out of our crew
I'd tell you whats dope but i'd rather die then spoil it later
cause dog I DID half ass this n' used you for my toilet paper
Fuck This Biter.
Your Nothing u always lose, u're crew needs new rules
nobody in your crew losses battles, s'why It Takes nothing to lose
V.I recruited him, but his punches make no feelin
why they put they money on u when i've already made a killin
Kid you won a few battles, s'what a few ppl let u do
I'd breeze through my opponents to, if i blew them as good as you
Kid thinks thinks his verses are life but he fails to be a winner
And yea lifes full of shit, cuz your whole verse 's fill-her
All Of rb knows dis kid sucks his losses are numerous
And when he spits he get no claps, but his verses humor-us
You naturally suck and i dont think theres nuttin u can do mane
We all know your shit aint fly but somehow it stays plane
12.
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Originally Posted by Cartman
Structure- Supernatural.
Flow- Malicious
Vocab- Tie
Rhymes- Malicious
Multis- Supernatural
Wordplay- Malicious
Punches- Malicious
Personals- Malicious
This was such a close battle but when it came to the punches and personals i really think that Malice stood out slightly above supernatural. but supernat really did have some good concepts tehre but i dont think matched up to Malicious....
close battle but v/X.Qui.Zit
I.J.L Reppin
Tatt And Blue Perhaps You Knew
I'll summarize Mal in a book, he dont got the balls to say this
I'm endin this joke.. as soon as i'm done rippin all the pages
ehh creative, but no
got whats comin to you, its your mouth i'll be opening wide,prick
man if dopeness revolves around you then glad 4 bein your sidekick
umm no.
who ya think ur toyin dude super's gonna unleash the boy in you
knew ya written wisdom n' its even funnier that u joined the crew
okay personal, not harsh
your a waste of everyone's time, stay quite n' lie down
if life is too short to waste you should be a giant by now
i get it a no
you were denied from VI, so lemmie shout this bar dude
VI really does want you..TO STAY the fuck out of our crew
no...
I'd tell you whats dope but i'd rather die then spoil it later
cause dog I DID half ass this n' used you for my toilet paper
okay at best
weak verse, you had creative no harshness at all.
vs
Your Nothing u always lose, u're crew needs new rules
nobody in your crew losses battles, s'why It Takes nothing to lose
nahhh
V.I recruited him, but his punches make no feelin
why they put they money on u when i've already made a killin
haha okay
Kid you won a few battles, s'what a few ppl let u do
I'd breeze through my opponents to, if i blew them as good as you
good, wording was off tho
Kid thinks thinks his verses are life but he fails to be a winner
And yea lifes full of shit, cuz your whole verse 's fill-her
nah, and wording again
All Of rb knows dis kid sucks his losses are numerous
And when he spits he get no claps, but his verses humor-us
okay once again.
You naturally suck and i dont think theres nuttin u can do mane
We all know your shit aint fly but somehow it stays plane
haha good, i knew there had to be one good one
alot of meh lines, few decent and then a good closer
Was expecting more from both, should have waited tell tommorow and took your time on this
vote Mal
if u dissagree with my breakdown, because i dont have posts... lets battle
other wise, hit my sig.
When I was 10 I was a hip hoppin shorty wop,
known for rockin microphones n twistin off a 40 top.
no dissrespect ta2 but that vote is going to get deleted
if you don't explain it better.that feedback was wack son.
uppin...
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Originally Posted by Cartman
I'll summarize Mal in a book, he dont got the balls to say this
I'm endin this joke.. as soon as i'm done rippin all the pages
nah
got whats comin to you, its your mouth i'll be opening wide,prick
man if dopeness revolves around you then glad 4 bein your sidekick
nah
who ya think ur toyin dude super's gonna unleash the boy in you
knew ya written wisdom n' its even funnier that u joined the crew
meh, not really feelin it
your a waste of everyone's time, stay quite n' lie down
if life is too short to waste you should be a giant by now
meh
you were denied from VI, so lemmie shout this bar dude
VI really does want you..TO STAY the fuck out of our crew
ok
I'd tell you whats dope but i'd rather die then spoil it later
cause dog I DID half ass this n' used you for my toilet paper
meh, toilet paper shit is played
vs.
Your Nothing u always lose, u're crew needs new rules
nobody in your crew losses battles, s'why It Takes nothing to lose
meh
V.I recruited him, but his punches make no feelin
why they put they money on u when i've already made a killin
lol, ok
Kid you won a few battles, s'what a few ppl let u do
I'd breeze through my opponents to, if i blew them as good as you
coo
Kid thinks thinks his verses are life but he fails to be a winner
And yea lifes full of shit, cuz your whole verse 's fill-her
lol, ok
All Of rb knows dis kid sucks his losses are numerous
And when he spits he get no claps, but his verses humor-us
meh, kinda played
You naturally suck and i dont think theres nuttin u can do mane
We all know your shit aint fly but somehow it stays plane
blah, wordplay wasn't really working here
super didn't come good, there was only 1 bar that was iight, mal came better with better punches in the battle
V/Mal
I'll summarize Mal in a book, he dont got the balls to say this
I'm endin this joke.. as soon as i'm done rippin all the pages
na
got whats comin to you, its your mouth i'll be opening wide,prick
man if dopeness revolves around you then glad 4 bein your sidekick
no
who ya think ur toyin dude super's gonna unleash the boy in you
knew ya written wisdom n' its even funnier that u joined the crew
meh
your a waste of everyone's time, stay quite n' lie down
if life is too short to waste you should be a giant by now
meh
you were denied from VI, so lemmie shout this bar dude
VI really does want you..TO STAY the fuck out of our crew
ok
I'd tell you whats dope but i'd rather die then spoil it later
cause dog I DID half ass this n' used you for my toilet paper
no
vs.
Your Nothing u always lose, u're crew needs new rules
nobody in your crew losses battles, s'why It Takes nothing to lose
na
V.I recruited him, but his punches make no feelin
why they put they money on u when i've already made a killin
um
Kid you won a few battles, s'what a few ppl let u do
I'd breeze through my opponents to, if i blew them as good as you
kk
Kid thinks thinks his verses are life but he fails to be a winner
And yea lifes full of shit, cuz your whole verse 's fill-her
meh
All Of rb knows dis kid sucks his losses are numerous
And when he spits he get no claps, but his verses humor-us
na
You naturally suck and i dont think theres nuttin u can do mane
We all know your shit aint fly but somehow it stays plane
meh
Kind of a weak battle, but mal took it with better and more direct punche's. Super seen better from you. Um this was one sided to me. Both could have came harder.
v/mal
~1~
This wasn't all that great. Some of the Punches were worded badly-Needs Polishing and Uh your set ups are kinda vague, you need to elevate on that. The Punches were ok, but I felt it could've been better, more harder. Overall Ok Verse.Originally Posted by Supernat
Mal your verse was Ok, Direct Punches came here and there, but they weren't hard hitting, you had personals in your Lines but it should've been worded better. Overall Ok verse.Originally Posted by X.Qui.Zit
Conclusion- My vote would've been for Mal, but I don't have the post counts, but will do when I get it and I'll vote. Reason I vote for mal because his Punches were more harder and effective even though he didn't really try. Supernat Punches weren't really that effective at all. Vote/ Mal
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I'll summarize Mal in a book, he dont got the balls to say this
I'm endin this joke.. as soon as i'm done rippin all the pages
ok
got whats comin to you, its your mouth i'll be opening wide,prick
man if dopeness revolves around you then glad 4 bein your sidekick
kind of self glory, but ok
who ya think ur toyin dude super's gonna unleash the boy in you
knew ya written wisdom n' its even funnier that u joined the crew
lol
your a waste of everyone's time, stay quite n' lie down
if life is too short to waste you should be a giant by now
nice
you were denied from VI, so lemmie shout this bar dude
VI really does want you..TO STAY the fuck out of our crew
good lol
I'd tell you whats dope but i'd rather die then spoil it later
cause dog I DID half ass this n' used you for my toilet paper
lol
Overall- You had some okay punches, i know you could have came harder then this, ok wordplay, good structure and flow. Overall 6.5/10
vs.
Your Nothing u always lose, u're crew needs new rules
nobody in your crew losses battles, s'why It Takes nothing to lose
lol
V.I recruited him, but his punches make no feelin
why they put they money on u when i've already made a killin
ok
Kid you won a few battles, s'what a few ppl let u do
I'd breeze through my opponents to, if i blew them as good as you
Nice
Kid thinks thinks his verses are life but he fails to be a winner
And yea lifes full of shit, cuz your whole verse 's fill-her
lol
All Of rb knows dis kid sucks his losses are numerous
And when he spits he get no claps, but his verses humor-us
lol
You naturally suck and i dont think theres nuttin u can do mane
We all know your shit aint fly but somehow it stays plane
Nice
Overall- You had some nice punches, good wordplay. Good structure and flow.
v.Mal