Wyte vs. d0m0

[Wyte..]

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Blind Spit

[Wyte..]

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[d0m0]

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[d0m0]

I spit sick, like something pneumonic
Look dude, stay off the chronic
Cuz you can't even spell WHITE, u aint portraying ebonics
I stay using my knuckles like I'm playing sonic

When Im on my grizzly I kill you with my bare hands,
You'll get ur wig split like u gotta share ur hair fam
U beating me, u aint got a fair chance

A wyte boy stop rapping, go sing some country
IM d0m0 bitch, i cracked heads like junkies

[Wyte..]

Basically you suck, really it is true, you are in with the gays
You like to fly? So ill just shoo u – then kick you in the face
No one wants or gets ur punches, quit trying to be Eminem
^^ Your punches could be for sale…
………………………….…And we still wouldn’t buy them
Im gunna merk this bitch, leave this faggot biting for words
Your crew is so dope – it must be his special blend of herbs
I mean why are you battling me? Cuz you winning is a no no
Because u suck, im saying how are u^, u couldn’t spell Homo
Imma close the door to RB in your face, go to a different site
Yeah u could have a refreshing verse - if u dipped it in Sprite

[Gifted Signs]

this was basiclly a one sided battle to d0m0 you rhyme was played out and sounds like you are trying to hard make it look like you are face to face with him and you know his flaws and whyte this was ok verse but you had enough to over come this dude in the battle punches are direct but they could have been harder and rhyme scheme was good also creativity was alittle played but not to much so for you having a whole round better game then him good job whyte

v/whyte

[Amor Jones]

Wyte u played d0m0. u aint even have to do him like that. thas fucked ^. u won this battle easily. d0m0 fuckin read LLL battles so u can get sum concepts in ur head put even when u do that u need to flip em but

V//Wyte

[Wyte..]

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[Blaze]

wyte was better in this battle cuz he isnt trash like domo i dont really feel like typing but my vote goes 2 white

[Wyte..]

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[Relli_Mak]

Although I can't vote just yet, I'll just give some input on the battle...overall, yeah, wyte did win because domo didn't put enough thought and flow into the battle...his was plain, no good vocab, imagery, or personal disses...wyte, yours was cool although I feel you could excel in some areas...

[Wyte..]

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[Wyte..]

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[Wyte..]

|5| Vote.

[Cartman]

I spit sick, like something pneumonic
Look dude, stay off the chronic
Cuz you can't even spell WHITE, u aint portraying ebonics
I stay using my knuckles like I'm playing sonic
lmao, hell no
When Im on my grizzly I kill you with my bare hands,
You'll get ur wig split like u gotta share ur hair fam
U beating me, u aint got a fair chance
no
A wyte boy stop rapping, go sing some country
IM d0m0 bitch, i cracked heads like junkies
no

read tutorials, your structure is too fucked up

Basically you suck, really it is true, you are in with the gays
You like to fly? So ill just shoo u – then kick you in the face
no
No one wants or gets ur punches, quit trying to be Eminem
^^ Your punches could be for sale…
………………………….…And we still wouldn’t buy them
worded bad
Im gunna merk this bitch, leave this faggot biting for words
Your crew is so dope – it must be his special blend of herbs
meh
I mean why are you battling me? Cuz you winning is a no no
Because u suck, im saying how are u^, u couldn’t spell Homo
meh
Imma close the door to RB in your face, go to a different site
Yeah u could have a refreshing verse - if u dipped it in Sprite
o.k

v/whyte for a better structure
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=303407