10lines
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d0m0
S.ilent K.illa
10lines
blind spit
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10min check
verse due 1hr 15min after check
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He's dumb, and by looking at his check I think his fingers are numb
And he's phucking soft, he claims he's big league........................
.................................but he's just a little piece of chewing gum
d0m0 is cool he gets the girls and he buys his own rice
He's a big spender n' shit<--- but why cant his rhymes be nice?
I might call him Bob the builder, because his letters be climbing so high
This battles like a movie Thriller, and the votes r health, so u die
Dam im tired, but im punching this cat with all my might
^ya see how i spelled might, its like the maybe how u win a battle tonight
Dude will probly start talking about my name and shit
Yea he might say im silent, but listen bitch.................
......your clit...................i mean..............your candles lit
lol......10.
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"silent Killah" real funny, but I aint joking kid
i'll pull out a knife and might poke your head
Or give you 24 slices like a loaf of bread
You a silent loser, hoping you'll win free (oprah winfrey) like u oprah's kid
SIlent killah, nah ima call u Heinz,
cuz u need to catch up (ketchup), ur games too far behind
take rap viagara cuz ur rhymes aint hard as mine
iima a killa, got bullets to burn ur chest like some grey goose
and after the days through,
I lyrically raped you, and im just making my debut
i cant tell how many lines that is but wtf uppin 1
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10 like u said
uppin 1
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wuz really good with some votes,comments or something????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????
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neither 1 was really good yall both need ta elevate but i guess ill throw it 2 sielent killa idk why his was jus a little better v//sielent killa
For starters, I feel that both flows weren't all that tight, although S. Killa's was better. S.K.-yours had some good personals to it and a few mild punches, but that was all that was needed to defeat domo...DoMo-for some strange reasons, I've at least read 3 of your battles and all my votes went to the peeps u battled...dude, u have to start bringing more to your flow...your lines are way too simple...man, sit down and elevate before jumping into battles with everyone thinking you're going to get a quick record...Mak Vote-S. Killa
NotarizedArtistry
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"Superb Individual"
this was a pretty weak battle
silent- you had sum iight punches atleast, good flow, good strucutre
and was a lil more creative and complex.rhymes were good
d- your verse was weak, simple rhymes, creativity was lacked
punches werent that direct or hard hitting not even descent just weak
elevate a bit man
v/silent for a better verse
:hung: rofl.....Originally Posted by Blaze
uppin 3 good battle, but shitty verse on my par.
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Silent- Good verse...Sum lines were stretched but it came thru..punches were there and everything was str8..nice structure as well..iv seen u do better tho
d0m0- weak...ya first line didnt rhyme with anything, so what was that about? u dont need fillers...come a lot harder with your punches..tha ketchup line and oprah line for ex. were weak..fix ya structure and come better next time
\/-silent
RB OG Triple OG
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word silent could of came better but it dusn't matter cuz i he took this easy with the punches n flow he hate domo but silent took this iight juss elevate..Originally Posted by WestBank504
vote//killa