Cashop Vs. thegreatestrappe

[Cashop]

Random Spit, however many lines you want, you spit first, House Rules! 30 minute limit for you, then after you spit, 30 minute limit for me.

[thagreatestrappe]

Random Spit, however many lines you want, you spit first, House Rules! 30 minute limit for you, then after you spit, 30 minute limit for me.

So I rap any time?

[Cashop]

yeah, spit at any time you want, I just spit second. Lets do this... ooohhh, I'm your very first opponent, well, this is an honor... you'll probably beat me, but O Well.

[thagreatestrappe]

Well nigg'a I got 30 mins
But it dont matter Cuz I could ebat you with only a 60 sec time limit
This Is my very first battle but you still been beat
Dont worry you can stay and your seat and keep playing with your meat
You even you admitted
Man Idc if this went on my rec.ord
I dont care If I lose to a guy that looks at guy'z naked
Plus he said no line limitation
I dont got any hesistate acts to put this fool in extermination

[thagreatestrappe]

Well nigg'a I got 30 mins
But it dont matter Cuz I could beat you with only a 60 sec time limit
This Is my very first battle but you still been beat
Dont worry you can stay and your Chair* and keep playing with your meat
You even you admitted
Man Idc if this went on my rec.ord
Man I dont care If I lose to a guy that looks at guy'z naked
Plus he said no line limitation
I dont got any hesistate acts to put this fool in extermination





couple typos

[Cashop]

You say you need 60 seconds? let my lyrical weapons teach you a lesson. Don't think you can beat a scrub like me, with lines like "keep playing with your meat" thats nasty. Another thing, didn't I hear about you playing with yourself wearing a G-String... now thats just terrifying.
My limits are endless, just like the way my rhymes are specific, all yall that are about to vote, don't even listen, to what he says about me being admitted, wait... I can't even read it. You did hesitate, in the way you had to wait, so long just to spit a verse about how you think I'm gay. You punk ass bitch, now do you still hate?, stop feeling so safe, about rapping in this place, cuz if you even think about playing chase, and coming up with another false case, I'll beat you down with a rap thats laced, with lyrical punches to your face! this is a disgrace! I'm sick of your talk and bad taste, you can't even spell mate. If you want to come back with another verse thats whack, make sure your pockets fat, so I can at least make some paper after my verse kicks you in your sack, wait... where's your dick at?

[Cashop]

K, I'm going ta' sleep. this is my first up y'all. I need these votes, I'm 2 down, come onn!! Tell me what part of mine was yalls favorite, I need to know just so I can get a feel for what I need to put down, and if you didn't like any of it, say so when you vote, PLEESE!

[MC ENFIST]

keep playing with your meat" thats nasty. Another thing, didn't I hear about you playing with yourself wearing a G-String... now thats just terrifying.
nice lines keep it up cashop your getting better

very generic the worlds greatest rappe need ta up ya game

[thagreatestrappe]

Tell me what part of mine was yalls favorite, I need to know just so I can get a feel for what I need to put down, and if you didn't like any of it, say so when you vote, PLEESE!
Vote people cote already

[Cashop]

Hey, this is my 2nd up. Y'all vote already! I need this battle out'a the way. Lets do this, come on! I'll get back at ya' once I get my 100 posts, I'm pretty close, I'm at 70 something. HELP ME AND teagreatestrappe out! we need y'all lil votes, PLEESE!

[CrosT Over]

ok this is how it goes down...
the greatest- your verse was simple, it had very few punches i don't wanna hear about him lookin at guyz naked and beatin his meat, these are not considered punches to me, come more personal. fiction will only get you so far, try to use some multis in your stuff...but first master the punch.
cash- where do i begin, your setup is completely f'd, length of lines is drawn out beyond comprehension you lose your readers by doing that. punches were at least prevelant which is a good sign, however im not a fan of feeding, next get a good flow going try your next battle in a smaller rhyme scheme\

well those are some tidbits for y'all, but overall these need practice but it's good to see that their is room for improvement, hope to se a rematch soon.

v/ cash...for having better punches...but you didn't win by much