NawkOut vs. Theory.

[NawkOut]

bump 2

[Ack Scent]

I see why you hate me. I’m clever & you’re a disgrace
But go head ill let you show demise….
…right before I knock em out your face
---ok
yeah i got wordplay, my punchs hit u wont get a breather
but atleast your not dope & showboat..
…only cuz u cant afford either.
---LoL good.
I got aim kid, ill kick swift & hit though its small
& could kill you in my sleep…
…cuz when I hit the sack, this kid will cough up a ball
---Kinda gay but ok
Im dope, your in luck cause I got talent to spare
& I’d give u a penny for your thoughts…
…but wait, that wouldn’t get me anywhere
---LoL seems like I heard it before...
what? perfect skilled, get killed, ill murder this goat
or I’ll welcome u w/open arms & inbrace u…
…along with knockin ur teeth down ur throat
---meh...

Verse was nice, and most of the punches were on point...good verse overall.


The dope flow drains ya blood out.................
......................Call it the Theory Detox.
N' have u like freshly made J's, and put u ina new box.
---meh...
He said check in 5, faster loss, listen what im tellin kid..
Punches render your face out..................
............Like you star'd in Photoshop Elements.
---nice
Ill wit the lines, allways heated up like im rockin a coat.
S'like MC's Passin wins to me, cause you aint recievin a vote.
---good
Im done with this coward, someone just tell em to holt.
No punches out his mouth, only when mah fist in his throat.
---good

This verse could have been better if it had a few more punches, adding an extra line or so...but it was a nice verse overall.

For better punches, I vote nawkout...

hit a link.

[NawkOut]

upp (3) and drop a link

[NawkOut]

upp 4, votes please?

[NawkOut]

wow up (5) vote, then drop a link

[Blaze]

nawkout had a good verse his shit was chillin but theory's wasnt as good so imma vote 4 nawkout

yo nawkout poll ur vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=303372

[8]

I see why you hate me. I’m clever & you’re a disgrace
But go head ill let you show demise….
…right before I knock em out your face
what? perfect skilled, get killed, ill murder this goat
or I’ll welcome u w/open arms & inbrace u…
…along with knockin ur teeth down ur throat

vs

nothing

one sided battle, not that great a battle either. nawkout took this easy for overall a wittier and harder hitting verse. theorys punches seemed weak, nawkout had some aight ones, only realy like the first one and the inbrace one is a lil played but it was still aight. but yea, nawkout took this

vote no

[100%.]

I see why you hate me. I’m clever & you’re a disgrace
But go head ill let you show demise….
…right before I knock em out your face
k
yeah i got wordplay, my punchs hit u wont get a breather
but atleast your not dope & showboat..
…only cuz u cant afford either.
na
I got aim kid, ill kick swift & hit though its small
& could kill you in my sleep…
…cuz when I hit the sack, this kid will cough up a ball
k
Im dope, your in luck cause I got talent to spare
& I’d give u a penny for your thoughts…
…but wait, that wouldn’t get me anywhere
na
what? perfect skilled, get killed, ill murder this goat
or I’ll welcome u w/open arms & inbrace u…
…along with knockin ur teeth down ur throat
no




vs

The dope flow drains ya blood out.................
......................Call it the Theory Detox.
N' have u like freshly made J's, and put u ina new box.
no
He said check in 5, faster loss, listen what im tellin kid..
Punches render your face out..................
............Like you star'd in Photoshop Elements.
no
Ill wit the lines, allways heated up like im rockin a coat.
S'like MC's Passin wins to me, cause you aint recievin a vote.
no
Im done with this coward, someone just tell em to holt.
No punches out his mouth, only when mah fist in his throat.
no


v/nawk