ILLEGAL CONCEPT Vs B-DoG

[d-flow]

well both of u came real wack but u actually tried something...i would vote but my alias is screwed up so nothing for now.

but v// b

[BozKurt]

Uppin for Votes.................. Pls Vote People I need this over with i got other battles THANKS!!!! ...............................................

[Cashop]

lol, I liked Illegal, cuz his "This guy is probably white just like eminem tryin to steal "the show"
I'll blow out your neck then E-40 will be "tell me when to go"
I liked that, lol. Kinda' intelligent.
Nice Duel, both were stupid, but I think Illegal was dopest this time

[BozKurt]

igth good good thanks for the feed back :0................................................ .................................................. ..........

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[Mari.Juana]

I Can't Vote Cuz Not Enough Posts But I'll Leave Sum Feed. Just Make Sure To Hit My Link After. Thanks.

Illegal- Ok Lines. I liked how u used his name in the verse. But You Had Alot Of Played Concepts. Sum Self Glory Was In There As well. Try to stay away from that in a battle. Try to be more witty and be more direct with your punches. Think of more concepts and connect them and use sum good wordplay. Make sure ur lines are dissing your opponent hard. Keep up the good work. U've got potential.

B-Dog- Decent Verse as well. I also liked how you used ur opponent's name in ur verse. But work on wording it harder and coming more creatively. Its what you call personals...use everything you know about him and turn it on him. Same problem with Illegal....don't use self glory. But you did have a couple ok punches. Just think of more creative concepts. And don't try to rush the battle by trying to write it in 3 min. or wateva. If you have 30 min...then use them to keep working on ur verse and trying to reword your lines so they hit harder. Keep it up though. U've got potential.

Please Hit Up My Link And Leave Some Feed- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302697

lol rez how can u leave that much feed...n say it was a decent battle..yo this shit was horrible no offence but b dog you gotta elevate n so illegal fuck....i mean no hate but ya verse are so basic its funny...anywayz vote goes to b i guess he had a better verse ....halla back

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thanks Mari.Jauna for the feed back and the vote Its My 2 day lyrical Battling !!!!!

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[ILLEGAL CONCEPT]

I had to drop sommin in like 2 min. sorry............................................. .................................................. ...............

[BozKurt]

Come on People lets get this shit Over With Lol .................................................. .................................................. ..

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[Red_]

both was whack but B's was less whacker

u aint dope enough, to talk about wats wack and not, the fuck outta her fag, u wanna talk about wack, look at ur sig. werd

[ILLEGAL CONCEPT]

shouldn't i get a automatic win, because b-dogg1992 upped to much?????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????????????

[BozKurt]

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