ILLEGAL CONCEPT Vs B-DoG

[BozKurt]

5 bars[10 Lines]
Due in 30 minutes
Check in 5 minutes
blind drop
no hate votes
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[ILLEGAL CONCEPT]

checkin in. can we move tha due up to tomorrow, i got stuff to do tonight and i already have a couple battles up so it might take a while.hit me up if its ok

[BozKurt]

sorry man but i need this done today i got more battles coming up tommorow just do a easy ryme w.e my shit is gay 2 cause i got also other battles .....

[ILLEGAL CONCEPT]

ok well here we go


I can already tell by your name that you ain't got game
"B-Dogg1992", is that the best way you can talk slang?
This guy is probably white just like eminem tryin to steal "the show"
I'll blow out your neck then E-40 will be "tell me when to go"
I got mad punches, slick multi's and abstract Lines
No offense my lil sister can think better with Nursery Rhymes
Man I know this shit wasn't gonna go that well,
Tryin to Hustle Like Cassidy, but then couldn't even sell
I'm gonna finish you with a 2 min. 5 bar Drop
Just Cause you in the street you think your hot?

[BozKurt]

You A Illegal Concept to this site cause you aignt ACCEPTED.
Your flow and yo ryme structure is weaker then I EXPECTED
13 years old trying to battle B-DoG,
Ima murk with ma flow and make you disappear with ma RYME-FOG.
You Finnaly a teen and you in this rap GAME,
Its ILLEGAL Claim you dope when yo shit is LAME.
So get some hair on your ball's then come and battle me.
Cause you will end up like the rest, I am in a MC killing Spree.
Asking for more time you aignt even going to get it.
Cause I Am The Mofo Who Opened New Theared And Set it.

Blah done in 3 minutes!!!!

[BozKurt]

uppin some for feed back and votes .................................................. .................................................. ...............

[JustinCavalawno]

both was whack but B's was less whacker

[BozKurt]

thanks uppin .................................................. .................................................. .....................................

[BozKurt]

need votes lets go people !!!!!!............................................ .................................................. ........................

[ice water]

i vote b dog

[BozKurt]

thanks bro but explane your vote to the other guy so it will be fair and some feed back would be good ................................................

[Rendezvous]

I Can't Vote Cuz Not Enough Posts But I'll Leave Sum Feed. Just Make Sure To Hit My Link After. Thanks.

Illegal- Ok Lines. I liked how u used his name in the verse. But You Had Alot Of Played Concepts. Sum Self Glory Was In There As well. Try to stay away from that in a battle. Try to be more witty and be more direct with your punches. Think of more concepts and connect them and use sum good wordplay. Make sure ur lines are dissing your opponent hard. Keep up the good work. U've got potential.

B-Dog- Decent Verse as well. I also liked how you used ur opponent's name in ur verse. But work on wording it harder and coming more creatively. Its what you call personals...use everything you know about him and turn it on him. Same problem with Illegal....don't use self glory. But you did have a couple ok punches. Just think of more creative concepts. And don't try to rush the battle by trying to write it in 3 min. or wateva. If you have 30 min...then use them to keep working on ur verse and trying to reword your lines so they hit harder. Keep it up though. U've got potential.

Please Hit Up My Link And Leave Some Feed- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302697

[BozKurt]

Yeah true that but i had 2 battles so i had to come up with something quik thanks for feed back .................................................. ...

[d-flow]

i vote wack battle...no offence tho

[BozKurt]

its cool i has to do this kid in 3 minutes so its cool with me .................................................. .....................................