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Mari.Juana
Lord of Pens
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Last night, you and ya girl was runnin through the sand,
^Cops stopped him...
...he couldn't find an excuse why he married juana man,
Maybe your illiterate ass can get some vocab some day,
He can't sleep without his ghostwriters...
...like a remix of Mari.J,
I guess your an ok guy, wassup wit all the dots though,
Have a million periods, and you a bitch, but still no flow,
I swear I need some bug spray, this little fuck is a pest,
The way he rapes children, nobody wants to b ur guest,
It's like the end of gym class, you should hit the showers,
What kind of battler are you...
...When you can't even drop a punch in 3 hours,
Don't get it, don't vote.
iight here we go...i think its good enuff
yo call me the plural rapper, cause i always write down the PP's*,
i'd say you wouldn't b sick if you had wit aids,
...........................but i already kno you carry that disease,
oh no this guy from the northside, aw shit no way this ain't fair,
kid wen i asked if u carry clips, i didn't mean the ones in ya hair,
this faget wanna b friends, offers to share his things in every game,
lord of what?this kid so unselfish he forgot to put the I in his name*,
gonna heat this up, .....verse really hot so get ready to be tanned,
cause even wen this kid ownes sum, it still manages to be 2nd hand,
1 hour for 10? man rhymes must come really slow thru yur head,
but i understand why rules is no bs votes,
........................cause you don't two shit posts in this tread*
*1...punches n personals
*2....lord of pen?s
*3..his verse is shit numba one..lol get it?
don't get the verse den don vote....period..
.n check out the battle against brandon if ya have time
pretty tight verse homie.....alias??..pm meOriginally Posted by Lord of Pens
Lord of pens
Last night, you and ya girl was runnin through the sand,
^Cops stopped him...
...he couldn't find an excuse why he married juana man,
lmao
Maybe your illiterate ass can get some vocab some day,
He can't sleep without his ghostwriters...
...like a remix of Mari.J,
No
I guess your an ok guy, wassup wit all the dots though,
Have a million periods, and you a bitch, but still no flow,
No
I swear I need some bug spray, this little fuck is a pest,
The way he rapes children, nobody wants to b ur guest,
No
It's like the end of gym class, you should hit the showers,
What kind of battler are you...
...When you can't even drop a punch in 3 hours,
No
Weak verse. Your opener was good. Your verse should have stayed consitant. Get some better concepts. Learn some wording to, that could help you out.
v.
Mari
yo call me the plural rapper, cause i always write down the PP's*,
i'd say you wouldn't b sick if you had wit aids,
...........................but i already kno you carry that disease,
Played
oh no this guy from the northside, aw shit no way this ain't fair,
kid wen i asked if u carry clips, i didn't mean the ones in ya hair,
lol
this faget wanna b friends, offers to share his things in every game,
lord of what?this kid so unselfish he forgot to put the I in his name*,
Okay
gonna heat this up, .....verse really hot so get ready to be tanned,
cause even wen this kid ownes sum, it still manages to be 2nd hand,
ha
1 hour for 10? man rhymes must come really slow thru yur head,
but i understand why rules is no bs votes,
........................cause you don't two shit posts in this tread*
No
Decent verse. Some dope punches & some played. Decent concepts. You came much harder then what im use to you seeing. In this case, that's why you won this battle.
v/ Mari for better concept's / verse
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Yeah i i agree vvv/Mari
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[QUOTE=Mc Mystique]Lord of pens
Last night, you and ya girl was runnin through the sand,
^Cops stopped him...
...he couldn't find an excuse why he married juana man,
lmao
Maybe your illiterate ass can get some vocab some day,
He can't sleep without his ghostwriters...
...like a remix of Mari.J,
No
I guess your an ok guy, wassup wit all the dots though,
Have a million periods, and you a bitch, but still no flow,
No
I swear I need some bug spray, this little fuck is a pest,
The way he rapes children, nobody wants to b ur guest,
No
It's like the end of gym class, you should hit the showers,
What kind of battler are you...
...When you can't even drop a punch in 3 hours,
No
Weak verse. Your opener was good. Your verse should have stayed consitant. Get some better concepts. Learn some wording to, that could help you out.
v.
Mari
yo call me the plural rapper, cause i always write down the PP's*,
i'd say you wouldn't b sick if you had wit aids,
...........................but i already kno you carry that disease,
Played
oh no this guy from the northside, aw shit no way this ain't fair,
kid wen i asked if u carry clips, i didn't mean the ones in ya hair,
lol
this faget wanna b friends, offers to share his things in every game,
lord of what?this kid so unselfish he forgot to put the I in his name*,
Okay
gonna heat this up, .....verse really hot so get ready to be tanned,
cause even wen this kid ownes sum, it still manages to be 2nd hand,
ha
1 hour for 10? man rhymes must come really slow thru yur head,
but i understand why rules is no bs votes,
........................cause you don't two shit posts in this tread*
[B]No
Decent verse. Some dope punches & some played. Decent concepts. You came much harder then what im use to you seeing. In this case, that's why you won this battle.
yea i think that mari. won but i cant vote sry guys but leave votes nd feed in my battle vs icewater links in sig..
murked: ice water, jr
murked by: none
battle record 2-0
[QUOTE=lyricalabuse]upp 2
It's like the end of gym class, you should hit the showers,
What kind of battler are you...
...When you can't even drop a punch in 3 hours,
only quoteable you hadin your verse. you gotta come more creative and with fresh concepts and punches.
vs.
this faget wanna b friends, offers to share his things in every game,
lord of what?this kid so unselfish he forgot to put the I in his name*,
more creative, wittier punch. it hit,and it was a nameplay on his username, but overall it was an average punch.
decent battle, but you guys gotta step up on ya punches
v/ MJ
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Droppin bombs like a North Korean Nuclear Missile.
Eastside walk it o-o-out.
uppin 2
uppin 3
yeah, these both both pretty good veses, but mj took it im afraid, he had better flow and better punches all together, but lord of pens, keep at it homie
V/MJ
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