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Due Tomorrow Noon
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Rendezvous
Ogre Star
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[*FONT=Tahoma]i'll give u advice...stop battlin jack...kid ya wack
ur structure easily covers that......................
even tho ya flow sophisticated as thumbtacks
IceWater voted best...u deserve NO explanation
...cuz as u hinted...thru anticipation, loses come in ration
How good...u and Daniel JameS made up later
nice to c u fuck wit noobs just to receive voting favors
Rendezvous who? ur previous rep good? never that
...especially when i sly'd u and "doesnt matter" is ya comeback
and by that...refer to how u proved ya jus another herb
...ur words r meaningless as trying to use "AB-verbs"(Fightlines)
this kid is prideful...time to bring him back to reality
...in his head he sick...but in reality hes "slain hourly"
this has more talk than an operator waiting on call
except when skill deal arrives...the talk happens to pause
his flow r too easy to have him claim he so damn nice
the only battle nice he write...is "career mode" on fight nite
[*quote}losing dont matter...yea rite...dont participate
cuz i'd say that too if i got my ass kick'd daily without elevate
get played like porn tapes...ya punchlines r stupid
so far on every verse i've seen...i imagined this cat toothless(hick)
Lets gaze at ur attempts after...as well as ya vocab lapse
...collapse under pressure...ur only koo when ya sayin "two-taps"
n i expect ya punk ass to choke...u roll wit the weakest of folk
...u drop so many feelers in ya verse...u need to use a rag n soap
...regardless ur not an artists...mad u spoke...just a lyrical hoax
excuse "no show" sayin ya comp broke...that modifys this "gRendez joke"[/*FONT]
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Checkin In....Just Got Home....I'll Probably Drop 2morrow....
i'll give u advice...stop battlin jack...kid ya wack
ur structure easily covers that......................
even tho ya flow sophisticated as thumbtacks
IceWater voted best...u deserve NO explanation
...cuz as u hinted...thru anticipation, loses come in ration
How good...u and Daniel JameS made up later
nice to c u fuck wit noobs just to receive voting favors
Rendezvous who? ur previous rep good? never that
...especially when i sly'd u and "doesnt matter" is ya comeback
and by that...refer to how u proved ya jus another herb
...ur words r meaningless as trying to use "AB-verbs"(Fightlines)
this kid is prideful...time to bring him back to reality
...in his head he sick...but in reality hes "slain hourly"
this has more talk than an operator waiting on call
except when skill deal arrives...the talk happens to pause
his flow r too easy to have him claim he so damn nice
the only battle nice he write...is "career mode" on fight nite
[*quote}losing dont matter...yea rite...dont participate
cuz i'd say that too if i got my ass kick'd daily without elevate
get played like porn tapes...ya punchlines r stupid
so far on every verse i've seen...i imagined this cat toothless(hick)
Lets gaze at ur attempts after...as well as ya vocab lapse
...collapse under pressure...ur only koo when ya sayin "two-taps"
n i expect ya punk ass to choke...u roll wit the weakest of folk
...u drop so many feelers in ya verse...u need to use a rag n soap
...regardless ur not an artists...mad u spoke...just a lyrical hoax
excuse "no show" sayin ya comp broke...that modifys this "gRendez joke"
I'm Confessin To This Bitch About His Pathetic Life Like UsherOriginally Posted by Ogre Star
And Most Meetings Go Down The Drain After I've Flushed Her
But Enough With 3rd Person....
....................The Way You Talked I Thought U Were A Huslter
Golden 'til Shit Was All U Offered And U Became The Customer
I'm Smart Enough To Know That Ur Quotes Of Me Are Bullshit
So I'm Cutting Right Throu The Middle Of This Retarded Mullet
The Rest Of Your Verse Exposes You By Just Being A Mistake
But Maybe I Can Leave A Small Prayer For Ya After Dis-grace
Though Not Likely...Cuz Nun Of Your Lines Are Worth Reciting
Putting Shit On The Board Is Just What I Call Bad Advertising
Its Funny How You're So Dim But Call Yourself An Ogre Star
I've Seen Shit Spewed...But This Is Worse Than The Local Bar
Continue Drinking 'til I Drop The Bottle And The Glass Shatters
Glazy Eyed I See U As Another Fag That Never Has Mattered
U Have Me Laughin Cuz U're A Cut Up...As I Tore This Rapper
Ya Just Came Back After A Year N U Still Suck Before N After
Damn My Enemies...It's Blasphemy As I Pop This Head's Acne
Don't Hassle Me Becuz Actually U're Just A Rappin Catastrophe
You've Only Gotten Attention By Having Me Give You Whorage
A Song About How Much This Herb Has Continued To Flourish
U Tried So Hard To Drop Hard...Now U're Back At Rock Bottom
U're Trying To Test Me So I'll Leave U As An Unsolved Problem
Normal Advice From Me Would Be To Try And Reword Ur Verse
But Unforunately For U...You Have Nothing Good To Rehearse
U're Known For Litterin Trash In All Sorts Of Crooks N Crannies
So Give Urself A Hand Cleanin Your Trash....
............................And Just Then May You Start Lookin Handy
I'm not too sure who won this one...
You both had a good flow, but I didn't real see that many personals that were excellent punch lines. But if I had to decide on a winner here, than my vote goes for OGRE STAR by a hair.
V/ ogre star
~The Greatest Rap Artist Ever~
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