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BabyBlue17
Eleet
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babyblue checkin in............. yo who goes 1st
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you must drop within the 30 mins...both of us have too
Your rhymes are off girl.....I mean you don't really got this stable
You're out of your element...like takin' shit off the peridoice table
See I'd like to help you bitch...but I'd rather just sit N laugh at ya
But I won't feed off of your shit....N neither would people in Africa
See your 20 and still on the net.....plus you're a girl who can't rap
Only time this battle saw blood was when you removed the tampax
There are many words I'd like to say; none come from the user title
I'd like to say "Signed Sealed Delivered"...we hated you since arrival
My styles witty, your styles off and plus you ain't touching mediocre
Your whole damn life has been a gamble.....no wonder they all poker
eleet'll seek defeat the day we meet,
no doubt im da sickest, 'c'
yo status is 0 -n- 0,
like livin chances wit h.i.v./
my new names SiLK,
eleet's a name uhh fakeness,
you sleepin layin in quilts,/
i beg uhh you "give up rappin",
homie thats all im askin,
if that request aint granted,
ill take drama da wrong way -n- lay you in yo casket,//
yeah second line is PERIODIC table
uppin votes
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v//Eleet even though i don't have enough posts yet.
Eleet decent verse. Sum good creativity and good vocabulary. Keep working on wording though and work on making your punches hit harder. Work on you concepts and elevate on making them connect 2gether. You did have a couple ok punches though...nothing real quotable though. But keep up the good work. You got alot of potential. Baby Blue ya need sum elevation. Structure was ok but you really need to work on more dissing your opponent. Not so much self glory....but really diss ur opponent. Use punches or personals such as dissing his name or his sig. Think of concepts and really try to work them so that it disses your opponent hard. Keep it up though. Good battle both of ya. Keep it up.
Please Hit Up My Battle Fairly- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302663
..........Originally Posted by Rendezvous
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baby work on ya punches n shit i'd say good for a beginer but it duzn't look like you one so.....wtv juss try harder next time...peace
vote//eleet
uppin this shit please....cmon vote it up
i aint got enough post yet to vote but as far i see it eleet beat u because he battle you and you just flowed I bet if you already dont write poetry that it would come natural to you cause you got nice lyrisis qualities with the assonance (eleet'll seek defeat the day we meet, no doubt im da sickest, 'c'// ill take drama da wrong way -n- lay you in yo casket) but if you can incorporate some nice punchlines with yo style then u'd be a bit dangerous
but you should focus more on just talking about your opponent
I Stand Alone But Strong, For My Fans Are My Legs
uppin again...lazy fuckers
yo man Eleet took this one... Man BabyBlue.. you gotta say shit that mean something with your rapping.. no offense keep doing.. but just know what your saying and you'll get better.. v-eleet
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