Due date is Friday the 28th of July. Must be 16 lines at a minimum, 32 at the most. Agree on a length and each of you choose a topic from below.
No voters under 1000 posts, or 6 months on the boards.
Good luck.
Topics:
Barely Able
Caught and Controlled
indecisive
Understood
Last edited by Split; July 25th, 2006 at 02:13 PM
I dont know if Tim told you, but I'm taking M. Pulse's spot. Thanks.
How about, 32 lines?
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czech... and 32 is fine
interesting topics
gl
Hence Forward
Originally Posted by Passive
That's fine.
I assume I have til midnight... it's 7:34 so that gives me 17 hours...
I'll edit my post here
Hence Forward
ok I don't post for a no show... if you need time
then we'll do this... otherwise let's not waste my time
Edit...
Alright... it's Saturday night and I'm feeling like this needs to be finished. Why don't we agree to extend until tomorrow?
Sunday night that is... I'll drop and that's it, no more time after that... ok?
Last edited by Mag...; July 29th, 2006 at 10:55 PM
Hence Forward
Shout outs to that PenPointz cat for having a nice beat iike Lonely Ones to get my head into writing....
one, two, burnin em black... all turn to ash in a fast flash and that's that
Ima mad flash pan arsonist, phat stack larsonist set to a high hat crash
noone ever stepped back as fast as that or laughed when I asked her for a name
a mute dame giving no time of day, no time to say that baby you and I are the same!
what a shame for flames so I'm chagrinned to sin in this inevitable mess we're in
within a spin of iniquity lost in a din symphony of simple synonyms for sin
grinning I can smell that bitch's scent, grab her quick and then her wrist is wrenched
behind her back her arm I twist and bend, show her swift that my fist is clenched
Snap crash and the break of glass I turn around see that we're both now trapped
last laugh and I know it's lonely but not too bad when it's a suicide pact
or murder-suicide to be a bit specific but who nit-picks specifics when it's do or die?
for you or I it's pseudoscientic psychobabble stuff you'll never find in the elusive mind
don't even try in the abuse of time just watch us die as the flames go higher
and I'm inspired to cry in a sense as we die we go from the frying pan to fire
I took her from the pain of being a nothing shadow of her true destiny
I doused her the flame of normalcy and scorched her with what was best in me...
All of the above flew through my mind in a scintilla of time as she looked back at me
I asked her for a name and I fantacised about her looking back attractively
then giving me the time of day and sitting down with me for a drink or two
instead she turned away and walked and fuck what the hell was I thinking fool!
So now I had a to make a choice of arson, flames and ash piled up incendiary
but choices of poison fit for the wary... oh the many ways to purge hate are varied
damn it's scary thinking I might falter... could slit her throat on an alter or just in an alley
add another unknown face to the tally with a fated detonated school bus in the valley
it's a shame really that my silly little mind couldn't sort at a speed of million miles
ability wild, dialed back up the middle scanning will I be mild or still to the filed
rank and soldier, shoulder up and then I throw her on down to meet a boulder
but without my flame of smoldering heat it's time to fold or retreat and I grow colder
she ha dwalked away as I in a daze completed every move,every plan, every blaze
maybe she saw some craze a lunatic truly raged or simply continued her day
she left my vision and derision aside whether running or hide she missed an incision
likeliesthood and which might be as good as I'm forgotten in mind off sheer indecision
-Damn!, Missed another one,
Hence Forward
someone close this...
Hence Forward
Sorry Mag, I was out on vacation for that weekend, from Thursday to Sunday, fuck. I would've asked for an extension but the vacation idea was a short notice thing, and I packed my shit and left.
Mods - Go ahead and close this, but realize that the series of crew battles had NO POLLS, so make sure no one gets a win, no one gets a loss.
I'm sorry mag, great drop dude.
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