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  • Advisory

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Thread: Gho$t Wrighter Vs. Advisory

  1. #16
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    i'll kick you in the balls bitch, i'ma make this cunt fly,
    coz when i hit the sack... Advisery gets a black eye.
    lol nah
    Advisory you throw girl punches, when i diss dont get mad,
    but you'll never get noticed... nobody ever watches' Ad's
    Eh, simple.
    swingn' hard, knockin teeth, Ads'll never go far when i hold 'em,
    yeah you checkin little but you'll come out Swolen.
    Weak, here. Better wording would've been better
    I rap like drugs dude, i'll have you sniffin' with haste,
    n' my rhymes'll give you a buzz... saw straight to the face.
    Same as above. Needed better wording
    beating noobs, whoring you, im known to raise the roof kid,
    after this battle you'll be countin' your blessin's...
    along with the bruises.
    Not liking the closer



    i'll have u put ur hand on ur heart,like dead soldiers
    ur avy has meaning<---- it represents your voters
    Not liking the opener
    i would say u flow shitty, but thats too high of an amount
    Be proud of ya username...
    ..........`s the only time you'll have money in your account
    Not liking the concept
    meh, ur rec is str8, so ima quickly wreck you hater
    i would say i took a big step, but im usin' esculator
    Esculator punches are way played
    your settin' yourself up for the fall, newb face the loss
    esculator got me stuck....wen' my shoe lace is caught
    Not sure if this is a punch or not. He's got YOU stuck? Sounds like you're punching yourself here lol
    if we go rankin' hoes, then this slut would be misplaced
    he's known world wide....for the worlds biggest disgrace
    Not liking the closer


    Ghost - The lines I didn't like in your verse for example your opener. It seemed so very simple, noobish, if you wanna call it that. Also your closer, threat punches are played 'cept when wit and creativeness is surrounded by it, and your was pretty much simpe, straight forward. Keep working on wording though and adding witt to your lines.

    Advisory - I pretty much wasn't feelin' your stuff man. Your opener was too simple and staright forward, not labeled as a punch imo. The follow line was could've been better if not for wording idk, just don't know what's wrong w/ it but I just didn't like it. Esculator punches are too played, it's been done countless times. Closer, wasn't feeling it , it's too plain.

    v. Gho$t Writer

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  3. #18
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    lol

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    hmm this is pretty close....

    Advisory you throw girl punches, when i diss dont get mad,
    but you'll never get noticed... nobody ever watches' Ad's.
    ^^^ nice nameplay/personal
    I rap like drugs dude, i'll have you sniffin' with haste,
    n' my rhymes'll give you a buzz... saw straight to the face.
    ^^^ like this, creative

    vs.

    meh, ur rec is str8, so ima quickly wreck you hater
    i would say i took a big step, but im usin' esculator
    your settin' yourself up for the fall, newb face the loss
    esculator got me stuck....wen' my shoe lace is caught
    ^^^ both good, but 2 elsculator punchs in a row? hmm not feeling

    good battle, cant vote just feeding battles so i can, both keep up good stuff

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    i vote advisory

  9. #24
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    i would say u flow shitty, but thats too high of an amount
    Be proud of ya username...
    ..........`s the only time you'll have money in your account
    worded badly

    vs

    i'll kick you in the balls bitch, i'ma make this cunt fly,
    coz when i hit the sack... Advisery gets a black eye.
    meh


    V/Advise barely
    TNL

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    In my opinion this was a pretty close battle. My vote goes to Advisory. I was feeling that he came with stronger punches then Gho$st. Both had good structure and flow. Advisory also had a little better wordplay. Gho$t you had some good punches, but i feel that you could have came with a little more consistancy. Oveall this was a good battle.

    v.Advisory

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