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    Soule
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    Loved Soul

    She is no longer breathing
    Physical being so decieving
    Let this woman live....
    God hear me pleaing
    Does this have some kind of meaning
    Why this woman must keep on bleeding
    I get ill and deep inside recieve a akward feeling
    Why this woman must end her breathing

    The reck was scary enough
    Now her skins tstarts to get rough
    Her body is getting cold and tough
    I wish this was all just a bluff
    Its like her body is being stuffed
    With ice and cold water....
    Please come back my daughter

    As her eyes start to close
    Blood drips down from her nose
    Trembling from head to her toes
    Will she wake up.......
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    No Body knows

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    Soule
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    upp.

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    Can't teach you my swag! D. Josey's Avatar
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    Dude, this is awesome. Very dope. I'm nominating this for Poetic HoF.












































    lol. J/K.

    You're not elevating, this piece was bland and had no taste at all. Unoriginal, and boring. You seriously need something to help you, just like urgently. You started, and then just stopped. Boring.

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