i'ma have to go with ace..i liked his verse better more personals n punches..
no hate,
but thats how it goes...liked the quote line
vote//ace
Criticize
Ace.
i'ma have to go with ace..i liked his verse better more personals n punches..
no hate,
but thats how it goes...liked the quote line
vote//ace
no joke, i slay throats.. this fag pming for vote's
yea you win battle's..
with self glory, and fake qoute's.
vs
nothing..
I have to say 100% came alot more direct here. He had more quotables also. & alot more creativity in his verse.
v/100%.
Futures In Affect,Check The Punchline To Realize How Hard Breathin's-Becomes
Cuz DODGIN sh*t
...Makes Me Prone 2 "GRABBIN LIFE BY THE HORNS" like Squeezin Ya Lungz
...nah, needs A LOT of rewording.
Predict-Doubt, U Kicked-Out? Wait Until I "RE:BOOT" you Missing A Few Components
Cuz Past D/R Votes Prove Dude "Bi-Ohs!! For Battles" Like Descriptions Of Opponents
...meh, ok I guess
Vision 4 Text? Give U A "Crooked-I", See A Win Or Loss? Which Ones Farthest
& Ace Got Old-Head Skills? Kid U'll "Mos Def Catch Nas/naws'" Like Def Jam Artists
...ok
Think Ya Dope? Give Ya A Big "N.O!!" Like Southern States, Kid Ur A Newbz Equal
& Its Deja Vu, Cuz I'll Just "Jabba A Bad Plot" Like Destroyin' StarWars Sequels
...um, needs re wording.
I'll MuRedeR in tEXT..you Thnik im The UnderDog in This?lyrcally Kill Your Wife
Cause its obvious You take domince on the net so its clear you need to
...pfft nah yo...not even
vs.
Bitch, get slapped. you suck, your text is so wack
i said why even post? So he responded with that^
...meh ok
no joke, i slay throats.. this fag pming for vote's
yea you win battle's..
with self glory, and fake qoute's.
...LoL good
who next? i'll criticize your text.. you dam lame
while your editing.....
you should add the . to my name.*
...ha, not bad.
hold on, let me leave your record with a dent
i quoted you^, and i havent seen a quotable since
...WoW...real personal
true story.. another loss for you, fear me kid
phade is just a herb/pussy.. period.
...bleh, played.
This battle was mediocre. I've seen better, but here it's obvious to see the onesidedness. Crit, you need to work on your wording, so that shits not so stretched and your lines fit correctly, you could also do with a bit less complexity. Ace. you did pretty well I'll admit, nothin too wonderful, but nothin weak either.
V/ Ace. for better punches.
Battles:
Come and get it.
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