Fay La Breez vs. Kiolo

[Kiolo]

10 lines
20 mins
blind spit
house rules

start when check

peace.

[Kiolo]

ok check, gl.


















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[Kiolo]

Faggot you aint Latino so please what the fuck is a "Fay La Breez"
Only way you spittin Spanis is wen yo suckin 1, on ya fuckin knees
Coz ya rhymes are fucking shit, and ya flow is fuckin weak
your skill is the same level of heat..... as an eskimos feet
You aint a lyrical athlete, yo another shit mcee for me to beat
niggu retreat,coz ya shit is elevated like a world war leg amputee
Bitch you a fuckin faggot suck more dick than Chasey Lane...
And ya seen more cocks than a gat dat belongs to John Mcclane
Fuck you bitch, yo aint an textcee you fake I understand
You about as real as a Christian priest in Afghanistan

Meh had to rush the last line coz my mate knocked the door.

but Peace x

[Fay La Breez]

chec.... my name is french lol

I inflict pain like “pornographic torture tactics” ya couldn’t “endure an ass whip
duct taped to the mattress”, you “stuck on the same path” like “mornin traffic”….
yous a boring actress, but im ice cold so i'll freez ya mind,
...............your barz aint on locc, so how u freeing ur shyne
start speeding them ryhmes u decent not fine,
......ur barz r weak but i bring caution wit mines
and the only reason u alive today bcuz ya moms didnt finish the abortion in time

[Whyte Gunz]

Faggot you aint Latino so please what the fuck is a "Fay La Breez"
Only way you spittin Spanis is wen yo suckin 1, on ya fuckin knees

vs.

Nothing Really

My vote goes to Kiolo. His punches were a lot harder then Fay La Breezes punclines. He also had better structure and wordplay. Flow was about even. Fay you had no real good quotables, work on punches personals and wordplay, read LLL battles and work in the cypher until you get better. Nice verse Kiolo.

v//Kiolo

[Kiolo]

thx 4 votes

uppin for more.

peace x








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[P. Mortuus]

This was an agith battle:

Kiolo- your verse was aight but many of your concepts are either played or just not good. I mean the gay jokes don't make it no more. Your punches had impact but not as much as they should have but i liked your structure that was good.
Fay- Your structure wasn't good at all, but your flow was there adn teh punches had more hit impact and the concepts were better. Furthermore, the personals hit to.
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\/ Fay for above reasons.

[Fay La Breez]

.........RiSE
... more votes......

[James,]

ok...

Kiolo- good flow, and good structure, decent rhymes, bad punches, no use of vocab really none of them really hit, you had one attempted personal, no multis, you need to use multis, and more personals, elevate...

Fay- bad flow, bad structure, I couldn't even read your verse, you had no punches, no attempted personals, no multis, vocab was bad, you need to elevate big time and put your verses' in easier to read format...

Kiolo gets this for attempted punches and a personal...

V/ Kiolo

[Tinkererr]

ki - decent stuff wasn't feel'n the punches.
Good structure not too many personals.Flow
was meh nothing special but decent.

Fay- Harder punches, structure needs work though.
It was hard to follow up on ur flow but yeh i guess
u can say it was there.Had personals but the was meh

v. Fay for punches and personals

[Kiolo]

tx
uppin 4 votes.

peace

[Kiolo]

uppin for votes people

tx











































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[Kiolo]

uppin 4 votes #4.

[Kid Corleone]

Kiolo - not that good punches but alot better than fays, good structure and good flow, some of the punches i felt were pretty decent like the one about as much heat as an eskimos feet i thought that was pretty tight actually. but the main thing was that your structure was pretty good aswell

Fay - i was feeling your verse i think the only punch that had potential was the last one about his mum having an abortion but it wasnt structured well enough and the flow was off. the pornographic torture is abit weird, i mean if you do pornographic torture to men keep it to yourself alright. but could of been better especially with the last punch that could of actually been decent.

v/kiolo for better structure and better ounches

[Kiolo]

uppin #5

ty for the votes