Key Vs Advisory

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

10 Lines
Due Mon. 11:59pm Est.
House Rules
Blind Spit
Goodluck

[keywerd]

Check.

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

Chekc

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

you need til' monday, shit, i jus flow off the top
yeah you elevated...
.......from gettin slept on, to no's on your drops
whore you aint tough, im noticin' slight bends
put a "." after ur check...
.....................cuz thats where your life ends
i kno your feelin' my style, like chicks do purses
but i've been feelin ur punches too.....
......cuz lately you've been askin me for a hand wit ur verses *[1]
now key no hate, but your really lackin' skill, see
u claimin' u ready for LLL...
........but one more battle with cry, and you will be *[2]
this bitch aint dope, and we dont wanna read ya spit
i would say u drop half ass....
...........................but all your drops are full of shit

*[1] - this is true
*[2] - 0-2 against cry

[Key.]

The odds aren't just against you...shits stacked
Kid explains his punches, lemme help<---its whack
Hes lucky hes even IN scytso..but he swears he runs
I'm not sayin ya structure's whack...
...........................................just wheres the punch?
You can say you can beat me but you outta laugh
I can't see you gettin signed without me givin you an autograph
What slut?!?!? Punches on your chest to leave impressions
`N you could STAY polishin Skills <--but you'll never get in
I gave you all the info to elavate, but you leave me frownin dude
But you know me, I'll lead the horse to water <--`n drown `em too

Errm yeah...you're done

[Key.]

Upp..

[Key.]

Upp #2..

[Key.]

Upp #3..

[Cody Nash]

this bitch aint dope, and we dont wanna read ya spit
i would say u drop half ass....
...........................but all your drops are full of shit
barely quotable. played as well.

Advisory - dude, i barely even quoted this line, because it's real played as well. your verse here was real elementary to me and not really up to par. if you want a bar to bar breakdown w/ reasons why this is, pm me your verse and i'll be happy to critique it for you ...but this verse looks like a real quick one coming from you, which imo, was a mistake on your part. one of your weaknessess is that you like to key shit up and you don't take time to edit/revise and think/re-read on your punches. you need to read them over and find out if the diss you wrote would honestly feel harsh or insulting upon yourself. Keep trying man.

vs.

You can say you can beat me but you outta laugh
I can't see you gettin signed without me givin you an autograph
I gave you all the info to elavate, but you leave me frownin dude
But you know me, I'll lead the horse to water <--`n drown `em too
^both could've used better wording.

Key - not a great verse from you either, i felt you half assed and dropped barley enough to take this win. you could've gone way harder with this, but the originality effort was more present with your verse. except in those first two lines, i thought your first two lines were wack/basic. you can do better, and you should be doing so even if you know you'll win by half assing. object is to crush your opponent, not baby him and make it close.

weak battle coming from 2 of my crew members sadly. dissapointing read to say the least, and you two could've done a lot better if you would've taken your time. keep it up i guess.

v. Key.

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

uppin [2]

[Key.]

Upp #4..

[Key.]

Upp #5..

[NawkOut]

not a bad battel at all.

now key no hate, but your really lackin' skill, see
u claimin' u ready for LLL...
........but one more battle with cry, and you will be *[2]

vs

The odds aren't just against you...shits stacked
Kid explains his punches, lemme help<---its whack
I gave you all the info to elavate, but you leave me frownin dude
But you know me, I'll lead the horse to water <--`n drown `em too

I think advisory has alot of potient, just kinda came played, keed had all decent bars notihng amazing, good battle

Vote key.

ps we should battle, and hit link(both)

[[DEF]]

you need til' monday, shit, i jus flow off the top
yeah you elevated...
.......from gettin slept on, to no's on your drops
this bitch aint dope, and we dont wanna read ya spit
i would say u drop half ass....
...........................but all your drops are full of shit


vs.

The odds aren't just against you...shits stacked
Kid explains his punches, lemme help<---its whack
I gave you all the info to elavate, but you leave me frownin dude
But you know me, I'll lead the horse to water <--`n drown `em too

I didn't see so much originality in this battle, a lot of played punches none striking too hard. the punches I did see tho, were solid, Keys being stronger than advisorys just a bit.so therefore I'm giving this battle to Key, for stronger punches.

v/ Key.