mmm.... I could totally hear that spoken with a strong female voice... would come across at a natural pace and have enough taste of rythm to elevate to profound. Yes.. I think there are some small improvemants that could be made if you liuke constructive critcism =)
For example:
i love you, travels through a spell thats casted.
You could simply say ... a spell cast... that is the same as "that's(is) casted. Unless of course there is a vision of this particular passage that I do not see.. in that case tell me to shoosh and look harder.. lol