10 lines
blind spit
house rules
check tonight
verses due tommorrow sumtime
Da Prince
~One~
10 lines
blind spit
house rules
check tonight
verses due tommorrow sumtime
check but ill prolly drop tonight prolly
check... ima drop it tonight to
Overpowerin curses, you shook, you mentally stuck...
Usin cowardly verses, tha look, worth a million bucks...
Ur a pussy, I'll make u bleed. every 1st of the month...
You'll never return, best believe, by the wrath of my tongue....
That I don't do this for fun, this is part of my life man...
I be choosin the gun, anytime over tha knife man...
~One~... two three to the four...
You stunned, off the first line, you aint wantin no more...
Tryin to come at me, I'll put an end to you...
And I'll havin you screamin(ITS MUUURDA) like ja rule...
C'MON MAN
sayin he's a newb is comin out of his throat, he aint evn gotta chokeOriginally Posted by Da Prince
callin evrybody dick ridersand ish jus becuz you cant get a vote
we aint d/r,we just seen you're other battles and kno you ez to beat
haha, and you dont know no body so i guess yo ass is hear to meet
ppl that would jump on a chance to just beat Da Prince's ass
cuz youre a Prince, and we're Kings so we're tha highest in class
so what tha fuck,i peeped your other battles and you sucked
and i was stuck,cuz your names not tha only thing fucked
so bitch now that you kno that Da Prince's reign is ova
cuz one line of my ish compared to ur verse is like a Super Nova
Super Nova=a explosion of a big star sumthin like that
yeah... so im pretty sure i won my first battle...
cuz they only hot line u had was the last line
as long as there arent any dick riderz
uppin 1 i didnt have to try vs you man lol
actually is wasnt hot.... thats why yal think im whack... cuz battle and it has a flow to it... when yall knew if u spit urs to a beat its all off timing... so tell me i suck hhhaahahahhahahhahahahaahhahahahahhaha garentee i dont get 1 vote cuz of what im sayin right now too lmfao
Vote ~One~
Damnit that other guy sucked, i don't even do text battling n shit but damn.
*smackaherb*
~One~, your lines sucked - dont get the wrong idea - your verse was pretty trash. To be honest ive seen all of those lines use over an over, everytime i visit FL. The last line held no weight, you need to put a witty as fuck diss in there, save the best till last, because that's usually the line that will win a battle for you.
Also, make sure you have a good line at the start, cause to be honest im not going to want to get to your last line if you dont make me wanna read.
You didnt have a best diss in the whole verse, but well done and shit.
Da Prince, don't outclaim yourself like that. Kids like ~One~ are usually the ones d/r'n me for votes and shit, and believe me this is the first time ive visited this forum for about a year.
You expect to win by swaying after the battle, and you wont get nowhere. He won, because your lines were played out more than his.
You both needto come original, and unique. I cant be bothered reading the same thing over and over:
'D/R this'
'Wak ish that'
'your name this'
'i'll beat yo ass that'
It's not good. At all.
And Prince, this is a battle site, not a NaS fan club. Attempting to 'raise the crowd' by screaming MURDA in your rhyme wont get me jumping out of my seat like a horny chimp. it just makes me want to skip your verse, because you must be sat in front of no more than a keyboard and monitor - and you evidently think you're in the 212.
To both: Be witty, original, harsh as fuck, and a site-pleaser. Dont talk about how bad you are with no rep, it might work on your street but this is the internet.
I vote ~One~ for grasping the basics of a text battle twice as good as Da Prince.
KtHx
PE|WV
ya know what...i know i did my shit better than ~One~ but i aint bout to disrespect no one cuz that wont get me anywhere.. thanx for the advice dat
lol good feed dat uppin #2 but da prince you keep swayin
Overpowerin curses, you shook, you mentally stuck...
Usin cowardly verses, tha look, worth a million bucks...
no
Ur a pussy, I'll make u bleed. every 1st of the month...
You'll never return, best believe, by the wrath of my tongue....
no
That I don't do this for fun, this is part of my life man...
I be choosin the gun, anytime over tha knife man...
hell no
~One~... two three to the four...
You stunned, off the first line, you aint wantin no more...
no
Tryin to come at me, I'll put an end to you...
And I'll havin you screamin(ITS MUUURDA) like ja rule...
[b]no[b/]
THE WEAKEST VERSE I'VE EVER READ ON FRONTLINES, AND I CANT BELEIVE SUM OF THE PEOPLE U CALL-OUT, ITS ACTUALLY SAD, BUT JUS ELEVATE, IT MIGHT TAKE AWHILE AND IT MIGHT NOT, BUT LOOK FOR SUM LLL BATTLES OR SUM SHIT THAT WOULD HELP U THINK MORE WITTY, AND BETTER CONCEPTS, VERY BAD VERSE, OVERALL RATE- 1/10 FOR ATLEAST DROPPING
VS
sayin he's a newb is comin out of his throat, he aint evn gotta choke
callin evrybody dick ridersand ish jus becuz you cant get a vote
MEH,WEAK
we aint d/r,we just seen you're other battles and kno you ez to beat
haha, and you dont know no body so i guess yo ass is hear to meet
NO
ppl that would jump on a chance to just beat Da Prince's ass
cuz youre a Prince, and we're Kings so we're tha highest in class
NO
so what tha fuck,i peeped your other battles and you sucked
and i was stuck,cuz your names not tha only thing fucked
NO
so bitch now that you kno that Da Prince's reign is ova
cuz one line of my ish compared to ur verse is like a Super Nova
MEH, WEAK
IIGHT, THAT WAS PRETTY BAD ALSO, BUT ATLEAST UR SHIT WAS GOING SUMWHERE, U ATTEMPTED ON MAKIN UR PUNCHES LAND, BUT U NEED MORE WIT ALSO, THEY NEED TO BE MORE DIRECT, AND U NEED TO TURN UR PUNCHES, MORE INTO PUNCHES INSTEAD OF STATMENTS, IT AINT EASY, BUT U WILL LEARN, NO HATE, JUS READ SUM LLL BATTLES TO TRY AND GET IDEAS ON WAT A GOOD PUNCH IS, GOOD LUCK IN THE FUTURE, OVERALL RATING- 2.5/10
OVERAL VOTE IS ONE
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Overpowerin curses, you shook, you mentally stuck...
Usin cowardly verses, tha look, worth a million bucks...
doesnt hit him at all
Ur a pussy, I'll make u bleed. every 1st of the month...
You'll never return, best believe, by the wrath of my tongue....
it doesnt even rhyme, not even close
That I don't do this for fun, this is part of my life man...
I be choosin the gun, anytime over tha knife man...
what the fuck..
~One~... two three to the four...
You stunned, off the first line, you aint wantin no more...
meh
Tryin to come at me, I'll put an end to you...
And I'll havin you screamin(ITS MUUURDA) like ja rule...
eh
yep your verse was garbage all over dude, elevate go read some LLL battles or even FL battles or something.
sayin he's a newb is comin out of his throat, he aint evn gotta choke
callin evrybody dick ridersand ish jus becuz you cant get a vote
weak
we aint d/r,we just seen you're other battles and kno you ez to beat
haha, and you dont know no body so i guess yo ass is hear to meet
huh?
ppl that would jump on a chance to just beat Da Prince's ass
cuz youre a Prince, and we're Kings so we're tha highest in class
weak
so what tha fuck,i peeped your other battles and you sucked
and i was stuck,cuz your names not tha only thing fucked
meh
so bitch now that you kno that Da Prince's reign is ova
cuz one line of my ish compared to ur verse is like a Super Nova
ok
meh this battle sucked ass, none of yall came with anything.. One your closer was the only okish thing.. the rest was garbage.. elevate..
vote - One
LOL
These Verses suc
If yall niggas think yall can beat any one thats nonsense/
Ray Charles gotta a better chance getting his license/
before yall post again make sure yo flow game is crazy/
fuck it Stay at home study tapes of Pac and Jay-Z/
Sin the monster came thru just to state my opinion/
don try to talk shit cause u know u aint winning/
So take this criticism I hope it make u work harder/
Cause yall the kwame browns of the game while im the vince carter.
EAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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