Catastrophe vs CashBoy

[CashBoy]

no crew vote
10lines

[Catastrophe]

Check. Due in 30.

[Catastrophe]

ok..

your a blast from the past you wack bitch of a hoe
i'll smack this dits so hard, his jacket will make him cold
you're like star jones the way your losing your rep
this dudes concepts are so slow...
... the nursing home beats him step by step
we're all tired of hearing you, even your ear lobe
but your ear has nothing to worrie..
... your skills to low, so it goes to your toe
your aint good enough to be played, thats pittyful dude
your lacking dope bars, like africans lack food
i know i'm mean, its not my fault you suck
do all the whining you want..
.. cause the votes wont give a fuck.

[CashBoy]

i dont know why this cat want to battle me
when im the dog and CATstrophe is pussy
this pussy is going to get ran through by me like a neighborhood hoe
but the only time im busting on you is when im giving you shots like a doctor catstro
this nigga suck dick he goes down like yung joc
this cashboy i got money to go to any store bitch why you still at save alot
im hard when i spit why yo softass dont know nothing about it
i bring more niggas to your hood then a place that crowded
i put a hole in you like a pencil sharpener trick
you going to need somebody to hold hands with you like you preganet

[CashBoy]

uppin vote #1

[kid sick.]

your a blast from the past you wack bitch of a hoe
i'll smack this dits so hard, his jacket will make him cold
ehh
you're like star jones the way your losing your rep
this dudes concepts are so slow...
... the nursing home beats him step by step
word it better
we're all tired of hearing you, even your ear lobe
but your ear has nothing to worrie..
... your skills to low, so it goes to your toe
blah
your aint good enough to be played, thats pittyful dude
your lacking dope bars, like africans lack food
ok
i know i'm mean, its not my fault you suck
do all the whining you want..
.. cause the votes wont give a fuck.
blah

vs

i dont know why this cat want to battle me
when im the dog and CATstrophe is pussy
NO
this pussy is going to get ran through by me like a neighborhood hoe
but the only time im busting on you is when im giving you shots like a doctor catstro
No and strcthed
this nigga suck dick he goes down like yung joc
this cashboy i got money to go to any store bitch why you still at save alot
huh, no
im hard when i spit why yo softass dont know nothing about it
i bring more niggas to your hood then a place that crowded
wtf?
i put a hole in you like a pencil sharpener trick
you going to need somebody to hold hands with you like you preganet
no

This battle was very weak. Cat seen WAY better from you. I know you didnt try at all and I can see why. Cash work on your stuff, cut the threat's and self glory. Read LLL battle's and hit the cypher to get better. Um yea this was a wack battle, but cat get's it for at least attempting punche's.

*yawns*

v/catastrophe (better verse)

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[Pens Ill]

Catastrophe
your a blast from the past you wack bitch of a hoe
i'll smack this dits so hard, his jacket will make him cold

we're all tired of hearing you, even your ear lobe
but your ear has nothing to worrie..
... your skills to low, so it goes to your toe
^cool but i didnt like the wording

vs.

i dont know why this cat want to battle me
when im the dog and CATstrophe is pussy

^now dont get me wrong...im not sayin that punch was tight at all. it was actually played and wack. But it was your best line.. so thats why I quoted it. You should keep battling though. youll get better.

v/catastrophe

sry I cant poll =\

[Catastrophe]

your a blast from the past you wack bitch of a hoe
i'll smack this dits so hard, his jacket will make him cold
ehh
you're like star jones the way your losing your rep
this dudes concepts are so slow...
... the nursing home beats him step by step
word it better
we're all tired of hearing you, even your ear lobe
but your ear has nothing to worrie..
... your skills to low, so it goes to your toe
blah
your aint good enough to be played, thats pittyful dude
your lacking dope bars, like africans lack food
ok
i know i'm mean, its not my fault you suck
do all the whining you want..
.. cause the votes wont give a fuck.
blah

vs

i dont know why this cat want to battle me
when im the dog and CATstrophe is pussy
NO
this pussy is going to get ran through by me like a neighborhood hoe
but the only time im busting on you is when im giving you shots like a doctor catstro
No and strcthed
this nigga suck dick he goes down like yung joc
this cashboy i got money to go to any store bitch why you still at save alot
huh, no
im hard when i spit why yo softass dont know nothing about it
i bring more niggas to your hood then a place that crowded
wtf?
i put a hole in you like a pencil sharpener trick
you going to need somebody to hold hands with you like you preganet
no

This battle was very weak. Cat seen WAY better from you. I know you didnt try at all and I can see why. Cash work on your stuff, cut the threat's and self glory. Read LLL battle's and hit the cypher to get better. Um yea this was a wack battle, but cat get's it for at least attempting punche's.

*yawns*

v/catastrophe (better verse)

Please hit my link up with a fair vote, thank's

I was doing a quick one.
I watched tv while typing

I'll hit it later..

[NYisBack]

cat - ur verse sucked, u had bullshit punches, nun of them hit hard, u really need to elevate, unless u didnt come ur hardest i dont kno, but that verse sucked, u lacked hard hitting punches, lacked nice wordplay, the flow was ok, u need sum more wit behind ur punches, ur verse was like preschool nursery rhymes, accept worse, elevate alot

cash- wtf was that, ur verse was full of statements and selfglory, i think u should elevate as well, u cant talk about money u got, unless ur gonna turn it into a punch, u have to try and diss ur opponent with more wittiness to ur verses, and its not even that ur wording sucked, even though it did, but regardless, the punches had no chance to be good, the concepts were jus played out the ass, from a few decades ago,

both- well no hate but both need to elevate, go read sum LLL battles to help u elevate and get the idea of wat a punch is and sum concepts, but dont bite off their shit, jus use it for ideas

vote - my vote goes to catastrophe for atleast having a few punches in there, and then sum that could've been better if worded different

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299413

[◄Patʁone►]

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..... the hell?
Since i cant vote yet ill just drop my two cents.
You both need some serious growth on your brain stimulation

Catastrophe, you look like you have an idea of what a good battle-cat is.
Lets show some examples of your lagging.

your a blast from the past you wack bitch of a hoe
Sounded like maybe you were trying comedy?
i'll smack this dits so hard, his jacket will make him cold
that shit was plain wack!

Cashboy, you sound like a 1998 version of jevenile, ha!?
you need to first study a intelligent book, then expand your vocab, majorly
your punches were rediculous, read a few battles on frontlines such as Sinister, Feeble, Wordzworth or even mine, give you a little idea of how to improve. Serious
listen to a Ludacris cd and Canibus or Em or Ras Kass or Crooked I, give you a picture of wordplay and multis.
then drag yourself back into this column and battle someone

:twothumbs:

[chuck taylor.]

your a blast from the past you wack bitch of a hoe
i'll smack this dits so hard, his jacket will make him cold
wtf
you're like star jones the way your losing your rep
this dudes concepts are so slow...
... the nursing home beats him step by step
lol
we're all tired of hearing you, even your ear lobe
but your ear has nothing to worrie..
... your skills to low, so it goes to your toe
meh
your aint good enough to be played, thats pittyful dude
your lacking dope bars, like africans lack food
heh
i know i'm mean, its not my fault you suck
do all the whining you want..
.. cause the votes wont give a fuck.
lol meh


i dont know why this cat want to battle me
when im the dog and CATstrophe is pussy
weak
this pussy is going to get ran through by me like a neighborhood hoe
but the only time im busting on you is when im giving you shots like a doctor catstro
no
this nigga suck dick he goes down like yung joc
this cashboy i got money to go to any store bitch why you still at save alot
weak
im hard when i spit why yo softass dont know nothing about it
i bring more niggas to your hood then a place that crowded
no
i put a hole in you like a pencil sharpener trick
you going to need somebody to hold hands with you like you preganet
meh

you need to elevate.. learn how to throw punches etc etc use metahpores and shit. go read some other FL battles..

vote - cat

[Blazin' Young]

my advice would be that both verses were weak, in your next battle guys come alot stronger.

[Catastrophe]

Thanks for voting. I didnt try, quit nagging on how "weak it is" and vote. And if you free post in here, dont expect to get away with it. Oh and Lyrics, Reading your battles will probably make me suck. I dont need to read feebles battles, because all of his lines are flipped. Uppin.