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Ron B. Vicious
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Last edited by WordzWorth; June 29th, 2006 at 08:54 PM
chizzzzzzzzzzzzeck .
check kid.
You faggot, you're not worth words, borin dudeMeters: wtf @ some herb kid putting me in his crew
Ronny B: roflmao so u did'nt join because he was good or yall was coo
Meters: hell no i dont even know the name of the crew lol
Ronny B: dat wack shit is called the chosen few
Your whole roster isn't willingly, just your chosen few
Man we all know lifes a bitch, but i doubt this bitch can beat her
Dont try to pull a fast one on me, cuz we all know your a cheetah
i determine what happens in dis battle, we all know im da boss
so fuck writin your name on da board, i'l just chalk you up a loss
When dis kid loses he has a tantrum, but he dropped like horse shit
so in dis battle fuck lettin him wait imma make him have a forfit
I wont lie im a cocky foo i like to make shit look nice but u're through
I'd really make this look easy, but i could'nt find a picture of you
sneaky bitch.
fake quotes? yeah you weak duke you never was dope coz
the fake quote was almost as weak as your verse was
countlessly i'll stab you to death, punching like my fist's a sword
have so many holes in ya corpse, you'll be my new chinese checkers board
feel embarased hoe, im murking.... have you hiding in ya seller
then ill talke you under my wing, then send you right off to the propeller!
yea you elevated.. but you were quick to fall off....... of a palace
honestly you feel off so quick, it made bungee jump experts jealous
duke gangster? nah you pussy bitch weak with all ya clout
only corners you ever owned, was the only ya moms put you in for time out.
5 min key, literally.
You faggot, you're not worth words, borin dude
Your whole roster isn't willingly, just your chosen few
bad.
Man we all know lifes a bitch, but i doubt this bitch can beat her
Dont try to pull a fast one on me, cuz we all know your a cheetah
that cheetah wordplay is played.
i determine what happens in dis battle, we all know im da boss
so fuck writin your name on da board, i'l just chalk you up a loss
meh. OK.
When dis kid loses he has a tantrum, but he dropped like horse shit
so in dis battle fuck lettin him wait imma make him have a forfit
no. weak.
I wont lie im a cocky foo i like to make shit look nice but u're through
I'd really make this look easy, but i could'nt find a picture of you
oh shit lol. that was good.
Ron - bleh, weak verse. that last line was tiight though.
vs.
fake quotes? yeah you weak duke you never was dope coz
the fake quote was almost as weak as your verse was
meh.
countlessly i'll stab you to death, punching like my fist's a sword
have so many holes in ya corpse, you'll be my new chinese checkers board
OK. not that great though. kind of random.
feel embarased hoe, im murking.... have you hiding in ya seller
then ill talke you under my wing, then send you right off to the propeller!
this was cool. wording was bad, could've been better.
yea you elevated.. but you were quick to fall off....... of a palace
honestly you feel off so quick, it made bungee jump experts jealous
meh. basic. "Falling off" shits kinda played.
duke gangster? nah you pussy bitch weak with all ya clout
only corners you ever owned, was the only ya moms put you in for time out.
lol, with better wording this could've been flawless. i liked the concept a lot.
Goochface - concsistant. some shitty lines some average. good.
v. Wordz, just a better overall VERSE.
word, upping 1 leave links ill hit them.
v// wordzworth
Originally Posted by WordzWorth
best bar in the game here^^
Word: your verse had nice punches u rhyme LLL style......nice wordplay n vocab, structure wus juust a liiitllleeeee off but nice.
10/10
Ron B.: dawg ur verse was dope too buut its like u put less effort into your flow. sometimes i gotta stop n decide if those 2 words go along together so naaaa.
8/10
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You faggot, you're not worth words, borin dude
Your whole roster isn't willingly, just your chosen few
wtf? no
Man we all know lifes a bitch, but i doubt this bitch can beat her
Dont try to pull a fast one on me, cuz we all know your a cheetah
played
i determine what happens in dis battle, we all know im da boss
so fuck writin your name on da board, i'l just chalk you up a loss
alright not hard
When dis kid loses he has a tantrum, but he dropped like horse shit
so in dis battle fuck lettin him wait imma make him have a forfit
eh no
I wont lie im a cocky foo i like to make shit look nice but u're through
I'd really make this look easy, but i could'nt find a picture of you
hahadefinitaly the onlygood line in ya verse
vs.
fake quotes? yeah you weak duke you never was dope coz
the fake quote was almost as weak as your verse was
meh, feeding is gay
countlessly i'll stab you to death, punching like my fist's a sword
have so many holes in ya corpse, you'll be my new chinese checkers board
rolfs, weird... its ok tho
feel embarased hoe, im murking.... have you hiding in ya seller
then ill talke you under my wing, then send you right off to the propeller!
liked this was pretty funny
yea you elevated.. but you were quick to fall off....... of a palace
honestly you feel off so quick, it made bungee jump experts jealous
ok
duke gangster? nah you pussy bitch weak with all ya clout
only corners you ever owned, was the only ya moms put you in for time out.
lol. nice... but wording a lil off
guccimeh alright verse better than the other guy, but the other guy had that nice closer that i liked overall i chose
V/Gucci
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Ron
You faggot, you're not worth words, borin dude
Your whole roster isn't willingly, just your chosen few
Aight
Man we all know lifes a bitch, but i doubt this bitch can beat her
Dont try to pull a fast one on me, cuz we all know your a cheetah
Nooo whack
i determine what happens in dis battle, we all know im da boss
so fuck writin your name on da board, i'l just chalk you up a loss
Nahh
When dis kid loses he has a tantrum, but he dropped like horse shit
so in dis battle fuck lettin him wait imma make him have a forfit
Straight
I wont lie im a cocky foo i like to make shit look nice but u're through
I'd really make this look easy, but i could'nt find a picture of you
lol Alright
Ehh decent verse. Not really consistant, 2 whack lines that really brought you down. Keep working on wording.
vs
Cucci or somethin
fake quotes? yeah you weak duke you never was dope coz
the fake quote was almost as weak as your verse was
Nahh
countlessly i'll stab you to death, punching like my fist's a sword
have so many holes in ya corpse, you'll be my new chinese checkers board
Lol I liked this
feel embarased hoe, im murking.... have you hiding in ya seller
then ill talke you under my wing, then send you right off to the propeller!
Pretty good.
yea you elevated.. but you were quick to fall off....... of a palace
honestly you feel off so quick, it made bungee jump experts jealous
Ehh decent
duke gangster? nah you pussy bitch weak with all ya clout
only corners you ever owned, was the only ya moms put you in for time out.
Straight
Straight verse. Only one line that wasn't @ least decent. Good wit, thats why you got this with consistancy.
v. Cucci
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You faggot, you're not worth words, borin dude
Your whole roster isn't willingly, just your chosen few
No
Man we all know lifes a bitch, but i doubt this bitch can beat her
Dont try to pull a fast one on me, cuz we all know your a cheetah
Played
i determine what happens in dis battle, we all know im da boss
so fuck writin your name on da board, i'l just chalk you up a loss
Alright
When dis kid loses he has a tantrum, but he dropped like horse shit
so in dis battle fuck lettin him wait imma make him have a forfit
Nah
I wont lie im a cocky foo i like to make shit look nice but u're through
I'd really make this look easy, but i could'nt find a picture of you
Nice
Ron - 1 Nice Line, rest meh.
vs.
fake quotes? yeah you weak duke you never was dope coz
the fake quote was almost as weak as your verse was
ALright
countlessly i'll stab you to death, punching like my fist's a sword
have so many holes in ya corpse, you'll be my new chinese checkers board
Nah
feel embarased hoe, im murking.... have you hiding in ya seller
then ill talke you under my wing, then send you right off to the propeller!
Alright
yea you elevated.. but you were quick to fall off....... of a palace
honestly you feel off so quick, it made bungee jump experts jealous
Alright
duke gangster? nah you pussy bitch weak with all ya clout
only corners you ever owned, was the only ya moms put you in for time out.
Lol..
Im gonna go with wordz for better consistancy..sorta close, but a coulpe of Ron's lines hurt him bad.. too bad though he ahd that nice line..
Vote/ Wordz
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