...?... vs. $inister

[Flavin.]

20 lines
due by tomorrow midnight

[Big Question]

check in
gud luk.....
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[Flavin.]

Bitch Ill whoop you outa sight, im winning by decision
Wreck you line for line, then ill wreck your vision (20-20)
This nerds always getting picked on, I see its affecting your health
Id try to work on self esteem, cus ur always questioning yourself
Cross the rivers of history, wash u away, as I make it to the top of this scene
I rip a strong current, take a step in my direction, and get washed down stream
I rail hoes daily, a straight player, Bitches always stairing at me son
Try to step up and spit some game, but they just push you down em
I’m connecting with my cross and hook, got your body shook dude
You’re a sight for sore eyes, especially when they’re black and blue
I clap at you, got u pail in the face, Dog im the king of the hill
Come to fetch my crown, And ill brake yours faster than jack and jill
You’re wack, Im ill, Still on top, Im raping this kids, I knew I could
Cum at you quick white shots, faster than a priest wood
You started out as a ripped one, Son lets look at this in reality
Im feelin for yo moms, funny how wack a broken condom could be
Definition of a pimp, bring in bitches in, go through little measures
And we know this guys always getting off, Bi sexual pleasures
I leave you with a word to the wise, you know im always boasting
Make up a quick lie, “I forgot I was supposed to be posting.” (that should work)

[Big Question]

naw he aint a fag, heres the truth behind why hes clearly a mr
this guys conducting incest....how he got his name sin is sister
damn talk bout fukin trash, but really your more than jus a joke
youd fail to make an impression if u keyed ya verse in a bar of soap
ya verses are full of self glory, yet you aint got nothing to boast
it shows how far his ..Minds Elevated.. by its position in his post
now your biting off more than you can chew, remenicent of jaws
veres remind me of an apartment block, coz all im seein is flaws
opening doors for ya, i dont know what kinda shits gon greet me
seven days to write ya verse, so no wonder you came so weekly
i would never copy ya shit,talent uve got is clearly not god given
if someone tryed to feed off ya verse theyd end up with malnutrition
fuck this guy aint got no rb following, in ya own shit your wallowing
no wonder he sounds forced to spit.....hes so used to swallowing
flap all you like, i dint hve to read ya verse to tell this ones mine
this guys the worlds rarest joke..he doesnt actually hve a punchline
youll never go on to greater things, see im a realist not a hater
your lyrics wouldnt be heading skyward...if i lit your writing paper
your only 15, yet so far from dope..and dnt look like gettin any wins
its like when you look in ya pants, just hope you on to bigger things

[Flavin.]

rise

[Flavin.]

rise mother fuckers

[Flavin.]

this sucks
#3

[Flavin.]

wow
once again

[SmokaJoka]

pretty decent...here's the quotables...

Bitch Ill whoop you outa sight, im winning by decision
Wreck you line for line, then ill wreck your vision (20-20)
This nerds always getting picked on, I see its affecting your health
Id try to work on self esteem, cus ur always questioning yourself

^Not too bad here, but you still need work on better concepts and wit

opening doors for ya, i dont know what kinda shits gon greet me
seven days to write ya verse, so no wonder you came so weekly
i would never copy ya shit,talent uve got is clearly not god given
if someone tryed to feed off ya verse theyd end up with malnutrition
fuck this guy aint got no rb following, in ya own shit your wallowing
no wonder he sounds forced to spit.....hes so used to swallowing

^Weekly line was definately nice...you came like a pro in disguise...WHO ARE YOU!....the rest was pretty good

BreakDown
Punches - ...?...
Wit - ...?...
Originality - ...?...
Rhymes - ...?...
Overall - ...?...

Why: Sinister needs work on better punches and harder more effective punches other than that it was pretty much a clean sweep from my point of view


Vote = ...?...

[Flavin.]

last upp

[Lawd]

this battle was iight for fl, but there was no need to go 20 lines wtf not alot of ppl will read this cuz of the 20 lines bullshit, but sin ur shit was off there was some iight attempts but there weren't worded write, u had some decent lines that could have been much better so work on re wording ur shit, ...?... ur shit was basicly the same but u had some iight punches instead on some of ur punches u worded it right so u on this battle cuz of that

V/...?...

[Feeble]

Don't do 20 lines anymore. This wasn't bad but work on ten lines to make yourself better. Spend more time on each line is what I'm saying. "Bitch Ill whoop you outa sight, im winning by decision
Wreck you line for line, then ill wreck your vision (20-20)"
you made the connection of ideas that is necessary to becoming a good battler, but you didn't word it into a diss. it was just kind of a comparison (20-20 battle to 20-20 vision) that had no direction as far as dissing your opponent. and ...?..., you had the make an impression / bar of soap line that wasn't bad. but you have to keep in mind that what ur saying is unrealistic: people dont key things into soap bars...that makes ur punch ineffective.

v sinister

[Big Question]

meh.bump........................
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[Creepz]

Bitch Ill whoop you outa sight, im winning by decision
Wreck you line for line, then ill wreck your vision (20-20)
nice

This nerds always getting picked on, I see its affecting your health
Id try to work on self esteem, cus ur always questioning yourself
lol gd

Cross the rivers of history, wash u away, as I make it to the top of this scene
I rip a strong current, take a step in my direction, and get washed down stream
nice

I rail hoes daily, a straight player, Bitches always stairing at me son
Try to step up and spit some game, but they just push you down em
no

I’m connecting with my cross and hook, got your body shook dude
You’re a sight for sore eyes, especially when they’re black and blue
ok...could have been better

I clap at you, got u pail in the face, Dog im the king of the hill
Come to fetch my crown, And ill brake yours faster than jack and jill
lol ok

You’re wack, Im ill, Still on top, Im raping this kids, I knew I could
Cum at you quick white shots, faster than a priest wood
no

You started out as a ripped one, Son lets look at this in reality
Im feelin for yo moms, funny how wack a broken condom could be
lmao gd

Definition of a pimp, bring in bitches in, go through little measures
And we know this guys always getting off, Bi sexual pleasures
no

I leave you with a word to the wise, you know im always boasting
Make up a quick lie, “I forgot I was supposed to be posting.” (that should work)
would have worked lol..could have been better i feel

vs

naw he aint a fag, heres the truth behind why hes clearly a mr
this guys conducting incest....how he got his name sin is sister
ok

damn talk bout fukin trash, but really your more than jus a joke
youd fail to make an impression if u keyed ya verse in a bar of soap
ok

ya verses are full of self glory, yet you aint got nothing to boast
it shows how far his ..Minds Elevated.. by its position in his post
lol gd

now your biting off more than you can chew, remenicent of jaws
veres remind me of an apartment block, coz all im seein is flaws
no

opening doors for ya, i dont know what kinda shits gon greet me
seven days to write ya verse, so no wonder you came so weekly
lol

i would never copy ya shit,talent uve got is clearly not god given
if someone tryed to feed off ya verse theyd end up with malnutrition
lmao gd

fuck this guy aint got no rb following, in ya own shit your wallowing
no wonder he sounds forced to spit.....hes so used to swallowing
lol gd

flap all you like, i dint hve to read ya verse to tell this ones mine
this guys the worlds rarest joke..he doesnt actually hve a punchline
gd

youll never go on to greater things, see im a realist not a hater
your lyrics wouldnt be heading skyward...if i lit your writing paper
could hav been better but ok

your only 15, yet so far from dope..and dnt look like gettin any wins
its like when you look in ya pants, just hope you on to bigger things
lmao gd

an all right battle but 20 lines....abit too much lol and not many people can be arsed to read it all....im actually surprised i did however from looking at these verses i felt you both came with some interesting ideas and both came with some ideas that you could have improved, but still your verses contained some nice punches
sin, u started off better than you ended as you gradually got weaker as the verse went on...purhaps a shorter verse may have given you this win
..?.. your verse seemed to get better as you went through your verse with alot of hard punches and comicle ideas therefore i feel you get the vote
v..?..

[+AffIzIaL+]

pretty decent...here's the quotables...

^Not too bad here, but you still need work on better concepts and wit


^Weekly line was definately nice...you came like a pro in disguise...WHO ARE YOU!....the rest was pretty good

BreakDown
Punches - ...?...
Wit - ...?...
Originality - ...?...
Rhymes - ...?...
Overall - ...?...

Why: Sinister needs work on better punches and harder more effective punches other than that it was pretty much a clean sweep from my point of view


Vote = ...?...

ok this was nuff said. i mean sin you came well but it felt like your punches tjust didnt crunch well and didnt really effect him...or even cause sevre damage.
..?.. came well ready and had loads of punches and had you from start to finish so

V/ goes to ..?..

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