Championship: Spitacular (10-2) Vs. Mr. Write (7-3)

[Mystery~Murdera]

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[$pitacular]

sup W.rite

say... 20?

[Mr W.Rite]

sup

20 is cool

[$pitacular]

I destroyed Deja. I'll do the same with AI, trust.

you bout to get dealt. unlike you n' ya crew I'ma stay forever real
what's the point of goin for the belt.. of pants you could never fill?
I walk the path - you can't compare don't doubt the wrath
bitch I'll never be your fan. you're flaming enough without a draft
I'm hot. you get too close I'll just watch you burn like slow vapor
n' I don't know how you manage to come all season, WITH NO FLAVOR
sick as sin.. spit that wicked shit n' stay dope cuz I'm fit to win
you can put an end to my ego.. but fag I still won't stick it in
I'm the hardest. it's true there's no one badder I smash this
I'ma make a spectacle of you.. moments before I shatter ya glasses

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h5.../uglywrite.jpg

I know.. I shouldn't have posted ya pic. sorry but dun it's funny
when ya head, gives the peak of your career a run for it's money
which isn't much.. plus that shit looks gay so I clowned it
aside from the fact, it's even more proof that you ain't well-rounded
I rip the joint in this bitch. make phrases they coinin n' shit
I already put it in the end zone. you're just the extra point on my wins
but I'm always lookin for talent. n' if I find you I'ma holler
cuz you might take the title.. buff n' shine it for a dollar
I'm the best in the place. don't know why you thinkin to try
you can stare death in the face.. n' I won't even blink as you die

bitch

[Mr W.Rite]

[IMG]C:\Documents and Settings\Curtis.CJROBERTS\My Documents\My Pictures\6391re3.jpg[/IMG]



dam i forget how to post a pic..
anyway, most have seen him before
dont have time to bother with it now






I’ve seen the shots this guys’ took, and my left’ll graze w/shy hooks
He boasts of Second Coming…that’s still coming in last in my book
Another spic has jumped the boarder; I just wish this jerk would vanish
I wanted the best from him and got some played clichés in perfect Spanish
Get off your ass u lazy bitch, we know u cant afford to stunt
From the looks, we know u’ve been chin checked way more than once
You may look like a man of steel, prick…u can barley act hard
I wont lie, you look mad dope... well at least the mad part
Your legacy’s short lived…forgotten, and without a brink of hope
that aint a crew, its just the kids u’ve brainwashed to think you’re dope
so whats this pussy’s involved in, I’ll put my foot on the problem
cus now my patience is wearing thin, like when he puts on a condom
by the way-ya wifes a whore…that verse aint worthy to witness
so when we say u still got it, we really meant ya herpes and syphilis
cant hurt me with writtens…I wreak of havoc, and u best believe im savage
bitch you’re in a world a trouble…so I suggest u leave the planet
take a day trip, and I would join, but im way too dope to hire
next time you’re MIA, why don’t you and Shaq just both retire
think u’ve sealed your legends status, after dropping classic shit
I bought off Keys to face him…cus he owned ya ass in that one, bitch





-W.Rite

[$pitacular]

I tried to edit your link to fix the pic for you man, but it won't work cuz you have that shit on your pc.. send me the pic and I'll put it up on my photobucket for you and edit in the link if you want homie

send it to spitacular1@yahoo.com or just tell me which one it is.

pz and good luck

[Jay Walker]

ok, well first, i'm not like these other pussies that are going to wait til votes start going one way, so they can follow along. secondly, this was a nice battle with alot of nice lines, so only my "best of the best" are being selected.



I'm hot. you get too close I'll just watch you burn like slow vapor
n' I don't know how you manage to come all season, WITH NO FLAVOR
sick as sin.. spit that wicked shit n' stay dope cuz I'm fit to win
you can put an end to my ego.. but fag I still won't stick it in
I know.. I shouldn't have posted ya pic. sorry but dun it's funny
when ya head, gives the peak of your career a run for it's money
which isn't much.. plus that shit looks gay so I clowned it
aside from the fact, it's even more proof that you ain't well-rounded


vs.



Another spic has jumped the boarder; I just wish this jerk would vanish
I wanted the best from him and got some played clichés in perfect Spanish
Get off your ass u lazy bitch, we know u cant afford to stunt
From the looks, we know u’ve been chin checked way more than once
so whats this pussy’s involved in, I’ll put my foot on the problem
cus now my patience is wearing thin, like when he puts on a condom
by the way-ya wifes a whore…that verse aint worthy to witness
so when we say u still got it, we really meant ya herpes and syphilis



ok.. well.... i guess i gotta dig deeper.


but I'm always lookin for talent. n' if I find you I'ma holler
cuz you might take the title.. buff n' shine it for a dollar


vs.


cant hurt me with writtens…I wreak of havoc, and u best believe im savage
bitch you’re in a world a trouble…so I suggest u leave the planet


those lines i wasnt feeling at all. and now as i look deeper into the verses, there are a few more lines i wasnt feeling from writes verse.


but regardless, talking the entire verses as they are, without saying what i do like, dont like, what one line sucks, blah blah blah... spits verse hits hardeer in its entirety.

vote spit.

(now start voting. if you guys are the champs of the league, start acting like it)

[I Got Pwnd]

you bout to get dealt. unlike you n' ya crew I'ma stay forever real
what's the point of goin for the belt.. of pants you could never fill?
^coo..Ive seen the concept so many times tho'..but not in this way.
I walk the path - you can't compare don't doubt the wrath
bitch I'll never be your fan. you're flaming enough without a draft
^Draught,But Good.
I'm hot. you get too close I'll just watch you burn like slow vapor
n' I don't know how you manage to come all season, WITH NO FLAVOR
^Nice.
sick as sin.. spit that wicked shit n' stay dope cuz I'm fit to win
you can put an end to my ego.. but fag I still won't stick it in
^I like this...the only thing that got me was stick it in..put an end...but good punch.
I'm the hardest. it's true there's no one badder I smash this
I'ma make a spectacle of you.. moments before I shatter ya glasses
Violent.NIce.
I know.. I shouldn't have posted ya pic. sorry but dun it's funny
when ya head, gives the peak of your career a run for it's money
LMAO!!
which isn't much.. plus that shit looks gay so I clowned it
aside from the fact, it's even more proof that you ain't well-rounded
^aiight.sorta repititive.
I rip the joint in this bitch. make phrases they coinin n' shit
I already put it in the end zone. you're just the extra point on my wins
^Statement IMO...
but I'm always lookin for talent. n' if I find you I'ma holler
cuz you might take the title.. buff n' shine it for a dollar
okay i guess.
I'm the best in the place. don't know why you thinkin to try
you can stare death in the face.. n' I won't even blink as you die
^Boi you can murder a cliche..I like this.

vs

I’ve seen the shots this guys’ took, and my left’ll graze w/shy hooks
He boasts of Second Coming…that’s still coming in last in my book
^sarcasm.pretty good..lol a lil.
Another spic has jumped the boarder; I just wish this jerk would vanish
I wanted the best from him and got some played clichés in perfect Spanish
^LOL.nice..Hey,Im spanish...*HMMmmm*
Get off your ass u lazy bitch, we know u cant afford to stunt
From the looks, we know u’ve been chin checked way more than once
^ not really hard hitting.
You may look like a man of steel, prick…u can barley act hard
I wont lie, you look mad dope... well at least the mad part
^aiight.
Your legacy’s short lived…forgotten, and without a brink of hope
that aint a crew, its just the kids u’ve brainwashed to think you’re dope
^Ha.
so whats this pussy’s involved in, I’ll put my foot on the problem
cus now my patience is wearing thin, like when he puts on a condom
^Lol.That was weird..but funny.
by the way-ya wifes a whore…that verse aint worthy to witness
so when we say u still got it, we really meant ya herpes and syphilis
^okay.but it made me chuckle.
cant hurt me with writtens…I wreak of havoc, and u best believe im savage
bitch you’re in a world a trouble…so I suggest u leave the planet
^Played 2 me..I used it myself in the battle with Untold.
take a day trip, and I would join, but im way too dope to hire
next time you’re MIA, why don’t you and Shaq just both retire
^naw.
think u’ve sealed your legends status, after dropping classic shit
I bought off Keys to face him…cus he owned ya ass in that one, bitch
^Ouchy.Nice closer.

Overall/-Nice battle.really.But i felt spit came more consistant with his punches...an besides that.pretty good battle..IMO.

V/$pit.

[Cody Nash]

you bout to get dealt. unlike you n' ya crew I'ma stay forever real
what's the point of goin for the belt.. of pants you could never fill?
meh. didn't like this that much..
I walk the path - you can't compare don't doubt the wrath
bitch I'll never be your fan. you're flaming enough without a draft
cool.
I'm hot. you get too close I'll just watch you burn like slow vapor
n' I don't know how you manage to come all season, WITH NO FLAVOR
nice. liked the concept.
sick as sin.. spit that wicked shit n' stay dope cuz I'm fit to win
you can put an end to my ego.. but fag I still won't stick it in
lol, weird. SO MANY WAYS TO INTERPRUT THIS.
I'm the hardest. it's true there's no one badder I smash this
I'ma make a spectacle of you.. moments before I shatter ya glasses
cool, think i've seen spectacle lines before though.
I know.. I shouldn't have posted ya pic. sorry but dun it's funny
when ya head, gives the peak of your career a run for it's money
omfg ..nice. lol.
which isn't much.. plus that shit looks gay so I clowned it
aside from the fact, it's even more proof that you ain't well-rounded
same kind of punch as the one before ..na.
I rip the joint in this bitch. make phrases they coinin n' shit
I already put it in the end zone. you're just the extra point on my wins
meh. no.
but I'm always lookin for talent. n' if I find you I'ma holler
cuz you might take the title.. buff n' shine it for a dollar
lol, cool.
I'm the best in the place. don't know why you thinkin to try
you can stare death in the face.. n' I won't even blink as you die
decent.

$pit - the thing you're most famous for to me, didn't really show in this battle as harsh as they usually do, and that's your flips. you had a couple nice ones, but compared to other shit you've written this was probably my least favorite. good verse nontheless.

vs.

I’ve seen the shots this guys’ took, and my left’ll graze w/shy hooks
He boasts of Second Coming…that’s still coming in last in my book
cool punch.
Another spic has jumped the boarder; I just wish this jerk would vanish
I wanted the best from him and got some played clichés in perfect Spanish
rofl. good.
Get off your ass u lazy bitch, we know u cant afford to stunt
From the looks, we know u’ve been chin checked way more than once
lmao. cool.
You may look like a man of steel, prick…u can barley act hard
I wont lie, you look mad dope... well at least the mad part
meh, alright.
Your legacy’s short lived…forgotten, and without a brink of hope
that aint a crew, its just the kids u’ve brainwashed to think you’re dope
lolol ..good.
so whats this pussy’s involved in, I’ll put my foot on the problem
cus now my patience is wearing thin, like when he puts on a condom
lmfao, good.
by the way-ya wifes a whore…that verse aint worthy to witness
so when we say u still got it, we really meant ya herpes and syphilis
cool ..not too creative though.
cant hurt me with writtens…I wreak of havoc, and u best believe im savage
bitch you’re in a world a trouble…so I suggest u leave the planet
lol, cool way of puttin it.
take a day trip, and I would join, but im way too dope to hire
next time you’re MIA, why don’t you and Shaq just both retire
good.
think u’ve sealed your legends status, after dropping classic shit
I bought off Keys to face him…cus he owned ya ass in that one, bitch
meh, na.

Write - i've also seen better from you as well. i really think you could've done better here and won it. but there's a couple lines there as well that didn't stirke my attention. and some of your concepts were just meh, and i've seen some before.

this battle wasn't what i expected it to be. but it wasn't bad either. both had great verses and there can only be one winner ..that person to me was,

v. $pitacular

btw. why don't you both take part in voting as well? the only time you've EVER voted on my battles was when i was against one of the more experienced heads, but when i'm against someone you don't care about, you just don't bother. we don't do that to you, so don't do it to us. thanks guys.

[Richard Parker]

How are we expected to vote when one of the pic's isn't up lol?

[Tae]

ive seen Spit so ill just go off that. but im sorry i dint think this battle was as good as it should of been, nothing in the realm of Com v MM or even Com v Write or Spit v Key...type of shyt i was looking for and i didnt see anything that made me say wow. Sorry fam, i know it sounds funny coming from me but neway imma have to go with who came with more lines in this one. Write i feel had the flow going, didnt see too many multis from either and all the punches were all almost really personal or almost really hard hittin but i guess Spit had a few ringers tho, i really didnt see too much from Write. Take the title and going for the belt were kinda the same concept but i felt were best two lines along with the flaming/fan/draft shyt. V/Spitacular

[phlymo]

i sort of agree with tae. this wasn't a bad battle by any standards, it was nice, it just disappointed a little. spit you didn't have as much venom here as normal, but your verse was solid. it just didn't seem spectacular. write your verse was also real solid, but i felt a couple of your bars were too simple and took some of the shine of it, for example the world/planet and the herpes lines, so i think i've gotta go for spit. his was a little more creative, but i thought it was close.
v/spit

[I Got Pwnd]

How are we expected to vote when one of the pic's isn't up lol?

^Sarcastic bastard.lol.

[$pitacular]

Sorry Write I left shortly after you posted and I didn't get your PM in time.

Also, to those complaining that I didn't vote I had to jet on Friday after work, I'll vote now..

pz

Good battle Write

[Vaskez]

you bout to get dealt. unlike you n' ya crew I'ma stay forever real
what's the point of goin for the belt.. of pants you could never fill?
I know.. I shouldn't have posted ya pic. sorry but dun it's funny
when ya head, gives the peak of your career a run for it's money
which isn't much.. plus that shit looks gay so I clowned it
aside from the fact, it's even more proof that you ain't well-rounded
but I'm always lookin for talent. n' if I find you I'ma holler
cuz you might take the title.. buff n' shine it for a dollar


vs.

Another spic has jumped the boarder; I just wish this jerk would vanish
I wanted the best from him and got some played clichés in perfect Spanish
Get off your ass u lazy bitch, we know u cant afford to stunt
From the looks, we know u’ve been chin checked way more than once
Your legacy’s short lived…forgotten, and without a brink of hope
that aint a crew, its just the kids u’ve brainwashed to think you’re dope


well this battle was a bit disappointing but only to your own two high standards. I think it was quite close but Spit edges it

v./Spit