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Com
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John Hensley
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regular rules
verses due Saturday. 12EST
Voting Ends Monday
must vote on 3 battles
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Com
Vs.
John Hensley
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hey.. 20 lines
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20 it is
don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footsteps on the moon
EDITED out until tonight
Last edited by Erupt; June 10th, 2006 at 04:35 AM
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edit: was pointing out problem with com's photo link but he's fixed it now, please delete this post
Last edited by Vaskez; June 9th, 2006 at 08:27 PM
i need an extension until tomorrow, and i wasn't aware this was a pic battle. oh well, either way, hopefully that's cool.
don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footsteps on the moon
ok scratch this and delete these posts please,,, I took out my verse and will now be dropping 30 by tonight.
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24 lines:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/atta...id=18375&stc=1
Now I'm not for dissing your ways, but man this shits a disgrace
I mean the five year old with the camera's got his dick in your face
I'll put this bitch in his place, but Johns hitting the heroin hard
Coz you know there's something wrong
..when a white dude;s squinting more than Marv
And this hoar looks like an ogre, I'll pull the cord on this poser
You're the only dude I've ever seen who's head's more broad than his shoulders
But John's won all over the net, he's known to make his presence felt
So RB's finally made its name...as the place he'll never get the belt
You ain't the best here so keep dreaming bitch, you'll bleed on your clothes
Because this prick came to take heads, and he took one clean in the nose
Prick I'm mean with the prose but I ain't been around as much as you
Johns verse is a sign of the times, and it points to two thousand and two
Bitch I'm proud of my crew and this pricks been overated as of late
This homo's lines ain't raw talent, just some played shit that's half baked
Prick I'll dominate the scoreline, straight KO shit. this brawl's mine
Coz John gave me room to breath, and its got a nice view of his jawline
Faggot you can't contend on RB, and everyone tends to agree
Dude on the site where you're a legend, they pretend to be ME
Come and watch KING's thrown whored, he won't go back to his own board
So I'll make use of the home advantage n' strangle this bitch with the phone cord
And we know under your pic you're a fat shit, so diet and do yourself a favour
Coz you've got a body people would die for, like your mother did during labour
You're making no noise you can't hack it,
...forget about tryna make the bracket
Because the ball's in your court, and you're still tryna make a racket
Last edited by Erupt; June 11th, 2006 at 05:19 AM
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wtf? can I catch some feedback please?
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Now I'm not for dissing your ways, but man this shits a disgrace
I mean the five year old with the camera's got his dick in your face
ROFLMAO! this shit was hilarious lookin at that picture man.
I'll put this bitch in his place, but Johns hitting the heroin hard
Coz you know there's something wrong
..when a white dude;s squinting more than Marv
wasnt feelin this one. the punch isnt hitting right, the biggest diss about its the set up.
And this hoar looks like an ogre, I'll pull the cord on this poser
You're the only dude I've ever seen who's head's more broad than his shoulders
haha. pretty nice.
But John's won all over the net, he's known to make his presence felt
So RB's finally made its name...as the place he'll never get the belt
i said it in another battle, these types of punches are just to old to me.
You ain't the best here so keep dreaming bitch, you'll bleed on your clothes
Because this prick came to take heads, and he took one clean in the nose
nice shit.
Prick I'm mean with the prose but I ain't been around as much as you
Johns verse is a sign of the times, and it points to two thousand and two
lol, i've never seen that shit, fire.
Bitch I'm proud of my crew and this pricks been overated as of late
This homo's lines ain't raw talent, just some played shit that's half baked
again, fire.
Prick I'll dominate the scoreline, straight KO shit. this brawl's mine
Coz John gave me room to breath, and its got a nice view of his jawline
damn. consistency?
Faggot you can't contend on RB, and everyone tends to agree
Dude on the site where you're a legend, they pretend to be ME
haha, cool personal.
Come and watch KING's thrown whored, he won't go back to his own board
So I'll make use of the home advantage n' strangle this bitch with the phone cord
eh. alright. nothin makin me go wow.
And we know under your pic you're a fat shit, so diet and do yourself a favour
Coz you've got a body people would die for, like your mother did during labour
hahaha, i'm sure it isnt true, but its funny as fawk.
You're making no noise you can't hack it,
...forget about tryna make the bracket
Because the ball's in your court, and you're still tryna make a racket
not feelin ya closer.
solid verse though com. had some fire in there. u started to pick it up as you went. funny fucking dope read though man, glad to see ur consistency back to where it should be.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
Now I'm not for dissing your ways, but man this shits a disgrace
I mean the five year old with the camera's got his dick in your face
nice... good pic attack
I'll put this bitch in his place, but Johns hitting the heroin hard
Coz you know there's something wrong
..when a white dude;s squinting more than Marv
iight... not to hersh tho
And this hoar looks like an ogre, I'll pull the cord on this poser
You're the only dude I've ever seen who's head's more broad than his shoulders
lmao.. nice 1.
But John's won all over the net, he's known to make his presence felt
So RB's finally made its name...as the place he'll never get the belt
lol..
You ain't the best here so keep dreaming bitch, you'll bleed on your clothes
Because this prick came to take heads, and he took one clean in the nose
lmao nice
Prick I'm mean with the prose but I ain't been around as much as you
Johns verse is a sign of the times, and it points to two thousand and two
*dead*.. wow... dope line
Bitch I'm proud of my crew and this pricks been overated as of late
This homo's lines ain't raw talent, just some played shit that's half baked
nice again
Prick I'll dominate the scoreline, straight KO shit. this brawl's mine
Coz John gave me room to breath, and its got a nice view of his jawline
nice punch.. damn u use "prick" a whole lot
Faggot you can't contend on RB, and everyone tends to agree
Dude on the site where you're a legend, they pretend to be ME
lol
Come and watch KING's thrown whored, he won't go back to his own board
So I'll make use of the home advantage n' strangle this bitch with the phone cord
meh, flowed coo.. kinda stretched tho.
And we know under your pic you're a fat shit, so diet and do yourself a favour
Coz you've got a body people would die for, like your mother did during labour
lol.. nice..
You're making no noise you can't hack it,
...forget about tryna make the bracket
Because the ball's in your court, and you're still tryna make a racket
iight
overall spit nice shit u had like 2 lines that were meh, other than that shit was hot.. the shoulder line had me chucklin alot..
Now I'm not for dissing your ways, but man this shits a disgrace
I mean the five year old with the camera's got his dick in your face
^Didnt see the pic..its not loading..
I'll put this bitch in his place, but Johns hitting the heroin hard
Coz you know there's something wrong
..when a white dude;s squinting more than Marv
^lol.Still no pic is showing.But still funny.
And this hoar looks like an ogre, I'll pull the cord on this poser
You're the only dude I've ever seen who's head's more broad than his shoulders
^Didnt sumbody just say last week,That Broad shoulder punches were played.but still I kinda laughed on this,cuz it was a bit witty.
But John's won all over the net, he's known to make his presence felt
So RB's finally made its name...as the place he'll never get the belt
^Nice.
You ain't the best here so keep dreaming bitch, you'll bleed on your clothes
Because this prick came to take heads, and he took one clean in the nose
^Damn Com!..Harsh.
Prick I'm mean with the prose but I ain't been around as much as you
Johns verse is a sign of the times, and it points to two thousand and two
^lol.That couldve been worded alot harder,but still GOOD.
Bitch I'm proud of my crew and this pricks been overated as of late
This homo's lines ain't raw talent, just some played shit that's half baked
^Hee,hee
Prick I'll dominate the scoreline, straight KO shit. this brawl's mine
Coz John gave me room to breath, and its got a nice view of his jawline
^Whoa!
Faggot you can't contend on RB, and everyone tends to agree
Dude on the site where you're a legend, they pretend to be ME
^You mean Bloody Bloke.lol.
Come and watch KING's thrown whored, he won't go back to his own board
So I'll make use of the home advantage n' strangle this bitch with the phone cord
^Man I like this punch,Really nIce.
And we know under your pic you're a fat shit, so diet and do yourself a favour
Coz you've got a body people would die for, like your mother did during labour
^Got Damn!Com ur a beast.
You're making no noise you can't hack it,
...forget about tryna make the bracket
Because the ball's in your court, and you're still tryna make a racket
^I get it,Not hard hitting but very witty.nice.
Overall/-I see why John no showed..That shit was murder.Im Glad you didnt drop like this on me....whew...lol...COM ur a beast!
V/-COM the Beast.
broad shoulders punches are played, but com's was a personal and had nothing to do with the played broad/girl concept...
^yeah I was gonna say that, drop some feedback feebsOriginally Posted by Feeble Minded
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OK well i dont know if this is allowed since im not in the LLL but,
Now I'm not for dissing your ways, but man this shits a disgrace
I mean the five year old with the camera's got his dick in your face
"And this hoar looks like an ogre, I'll pull the cord on this poser
You're the only dude I've ever seen who's head's more broad than his shoulders
Prick I'm mean with the prose but I ain't been around as much as you
Johns verse is a sign of the times, and it points to two thousand and two
Bitch I'm proud of my crew and this pricks been overated as of late
This homo's lines ain't raw talent, just some played shit that's half baked
Prick I'll dominate the scoreline, straight KO shit. this brawl's mine
Coz John gave me room to breath, and its got a nice view of his jawline"
Faggot you can't contend on RB, and everyone tends to agree
Dude on the site where you're a legend, they pretend to be ME
And we know under your pic you're a fat shit, so diet and do yourself a favour
Coz you've got a body people would die for, like your mother did during labour
^^^^^^^^
All Dopness! I really dont think anyone in the LLL is writing as well as you right now..
Last week and This weeks verses were illy yo...
But always on time.
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