uppin#3
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uppin#3
Billz- really weak verse..your punches were wack on Explicit...You need to think more about what your saying and make it all come together better..You also need direct personals on him..and leave the girlfriend jokes out, all that is played...Just stick to battling other newbs that are new to the site and work ya way up and you'll become better as you progress
Explict- Its obvious you took this battle..however, u need to work on your structure..leave all the dashes,commas, etc. out of your verse, all it does is make it look sloppy and messy..Your punches were meh, they could have been better, but you took this battle with your verse
\/-Explict for reasons above
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WOW if that first verse wasn't stupid....
Billz:
you have a long way to get somewhere on here, punches were weak, structure was awful, sorry homie elevation is a must, everybody has potential to do better on this site you should think about put'n in some work to do that
X:
getcha structure together you punches were hit'n, some nice internal rhyme'n, flow'd good, not the best but still it was better then most ya kno work on better creativity and originality ya feel me homie you have potential also i wanna see where it takes you
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
thankz uppin#4
XTC....won this all around/overall.....but the ("") <<< Thats a bitch move to win a battle but I feel where U R coming from......U had hard hitting punches, Nice structure, and better wordplay...
V// XTC
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last uppin
uppin#5
plz vote yal
vote up plz
v// explicit
his rhymes were better (other nigga was a bit played out)
flow and punches were sick and he came down harder
both yall need to elevate on structure
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Billz- really weak verse..your punches were wack on Explicit...You need to think more about what your saying and make it all come together better..You also need direct personals on him..and leave the girlfriend jokes out, all that is played...Just stick to battling other newbs that are new to the site and work ya way up and you'll become better as you progress
Explict- Its obvious you took this battle..however, u need to work on your structure..leave all the dashes,commas, etc. out of your verse, all it does is make it look sloppy and messy..Your punches were meh, they could have been better, but you took this battle with your verse
v// Explict for the reasons i have stated
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