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i got ya names dats true but everything u spit aint true
errything i spit is sick hatchoo so im a give u da cold and squeeze at you
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nothing....bars were way to streached
-no hate to any of you guys...but elevation is needed..
\\// Billz....ho hate
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both of you were shit, i can't comprehend with these verses let alone grade them due to the fact that they're both BELOW average. you guys deffinatly need to upp your game and get into the swing of things.
Structure - Doesn't matter
Flow - for the most part is nothing besides the ends of your lines
Directivity - MUST HAVE
Consistancy - NEED THIS TO HARM YOUR OPPONENT
Punches - WTF? your punches were weak
Wordplay - you both have no clue what this word even is
seriously, none of these qualities applied to you guys. you need to get better, Tru had a more close verse to anything. so i'll go with him. both suck ass.
v. Tru
http://www.geocities.com/sk8orbe8/raps.html
Read those. All me. Then tell me I suck.
All I gotta say is murder mook and stop biting yo
In The Middle Of It All, I'm The One You Call, "MAX'CLEVELAND"
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i one lyrically i came harder his raps were bubblegum and the bars were about different stuff everytime i even switched my delivery and made it softer to
^You had no punches, no wordplay, no nothing. And you "One"? Wow.
^wow, you just proved my point. those lines are the reason you suck. you have NO IDEA what wordplay is. like i said, go read Leathal Lyricist League verses to get a better understanding for what people are looking for on THIS SITE. not some dumbfuck "Audio freestyle" freewrite site. you need to understand this site is mostly TEXTCEE'S which is WAY more intricate than most audio. get a better understanding for things then talk to me kid. YES, right now you suck.
Is that to me or Billz? Don't act like I'm into that audio shit.
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