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this is my check
10 lines
due in 20 house rules
check in 10
blind spit
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this is my check
check .. ...
Call me King Cronus, I destroy herbs who show slowness
N' I'll put so much Moss on ya body the raiders'll give ya a signing bonus
You ain't higly regarded, punk ya fuckin' retarded
Fuck Wal-Mart, bitch ya lame punches ain't even on Target
Ya just wack without hope, ya crew knows you'll NEVER be dope
So know if you were drowning they'd throw you BOTH ends of the rope
Clean ya mouth out with soap cuz ya existance hasn't a purpose
Ya played lines are so Common they could start an Electric Circus
Ya rhymes a mystery,put the peices together,its worth the trouble
.....Whackness is'nt a part or your life ...its the whole fuckin puzzle
Blah...dont vote if you dont get it
3rd line i spelt highly* wrong....
I figured you wack with variety,says hes good? nigga you seem bad
but atleast your skill ranges. . . . . . . ..
. .. ... ... .... .... .....from garbage to EXTREMELY trash
You unknown, but you famous like G-Unit, here's the proof, bitch
Cos I asked my mans if he knew you, he was like "ummm, Whoo Kid?"
...he actually thinks hes nice and that he has a chance to win
to bad he is Going Out with a Loss cause Defeat is Romancing him
& I'll admit it, you Devoured alot of competition.. for real, im not bluffing
but dawg.... you are what you Eat
.., so azzuri is just a Nobody with Nothing
nice verse uppin...
upp # 2.....
uppin #1
o shit i jus noticed on tha last line its suppose to be of* not or
You unknown, but you famous like G-Unit, here's the proof, bitch
Cos I asked my mans if he knew you, he was like "ummm, Whoo Kid?"
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nuttin consisdered a punch.
u have to kno dat ur first line is ur set up for ur punch is in the second line. u were jus dishin statements azzuri. u have to come more direct with ur punches an take more aim. dope took dis one wit the concemtion of him throwin more punches.
v/dope.
iight uppin #2
iight rise
Uh-huh.
Dope man, what was wrong with your structure? Is was so confusing, I couldn't figure out which line rhymed with what. Your whole wordplay wasn't that complicated and sophisticated, and it was boring.
Azzuri, I liked your span and variety of punches. They hit better, and I felt like you came hard. Your structure was cool, and I liked the Randy Moss wordplay.
v/ Azzuri
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