the things that play

[MC Xelsior]

Let me start this from the beginning, my name is MCX,
Or in full terms MC Xelsior,
don’t come to me with fake chicks, cause I kick your ass trough the door.
Make me proud so make me king,
I flash you out with all my futurious bling.
My feet are covered in Phat Farms,
The X is the one that harms.
I smash you down with one single blow,
You better beware cause I will humiliate you more with one single flow.
It’s all about money, power and respect,
These are the only ways to make a changing effect.
I’m still 16, so I still falling under the term of teen,
But when you hear my rhymes, you wouldn’t know what I mean,
Maybe you’re stupid and you’re just standing here like a god damn machine.
I hate those liars, rapping about fake crimes in fake rhymes,
let that be the message to shout and for now: Peace out...

Links:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=295297
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...73#post4539573

[$pitacular]

I hope you get banned.

[MC Xelsior]

I hope you get banned.

And why is that then?

[Lurid]

u didnt write a OM , there was no emotion , no imagry , no good vocab or concepts it was like a really really weak freestyle , iono wat u were thinkin , either go battle or write somthing meaningful not this b/s , elevate

[MC Xelsior]

Thank you for this usefull reply
I got one good emotional lyric, but the limit of the open mic is 16 lines and that one is about 60 lines or something so...
But one day you will see a strong, good and emotional thing.

[Lurid]

fsho , but that is what the OM is about its about letting people know how u feel , bringing tru emotion and not played lines , its about relevant topics of intrest today, i wasnt tryin to hate when i posted what i said i was tryin to help u out

[MC Xelsior]

Thanks again bro, Now I know the site a lil bit more and better.