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verse due by midnight.
house rules.
Lil J.C.
Sniperrr.
10-16 lines
check in ASAP
verse due by midnight.
house rules.
muh bad homes i aint remember 2 check yo name fo specifics
check
You was quick to battle me..........I'll bust a shot at ya dome.
But wen Brandon called u out yu said....3 battles open homes.
You a opposite of your avatar................you just a loney fag.
Punches to your face, knock it off........now the shit is a drag.
U gone be mad wen da voters line directed at u sayin no hate.
How will you look, when your officially defeated by a noweight.
Ur just a lousy rapper....U sleep on me i'll make you feel a bed.
U be thinkin bout sex..when ya brains is between ya girls legs.
You wasnt expecting this huh?..I'll destroy your crews u faget.
The W is like things too expensive for u..you aint gone have it.
bump.for.ya.verse.
Scytsophrenia
not much effort
u perfect 2 b a sniper, cuz u stealthful, no1 knows u exist
thay will once u on my merk list, cuz all yo shots missed
u stepped 2 me wit no-wait, shudda ate a couple noobs 1st
want round 2? it'll b worse, cuz i kno yo shit will b re-hearsed
bomb dropped on yo dome, ur now LD, Lyrically Defected
yo rhymes out-dated, livin in retrospective, im unnaffected
u started PMS'n when i forgot yo period, so r u really a man?
ur nuthin new, same old shit, nigga expand yo mind spanOriginally Posted by Sniperrr.
u thank yo shit hot, no fans, n heat seekin missles still wont find u
talk like u down wit tha streets, but u aint on tha grind dude
yo complete defeat is not discrete, so accept dat u been beat
i CONTROLLED yo mind, ALTERED yo rep, so now u start 2 DELETE
explanations
re-hearsed=rehersed-practice, re-hearsed-KO'd again
line 7=i made a thread n forgot his period at tha end of his name
Ctrl+Alt+Delete=to close his internet
uppin(1) fo votes
uppin #2...lets get sum votes plz!
ill hit yo battles up wit sum votes if u drop sum votes herre
r u fuckin serious???? uppin #3 fo sum god damn fuckin votes! gimme a link n ill drop a vote on yo battle
sniperr- iono but ur rhymes seem bit and mos def played first off avatars dont work on this site any more so im wonderin where u got that punch from, nothin had a consistant flow but ur concepts were good
JC- basic flo and rhyme some played punches but nothin wack like none ur shit was bitten so i think u take this win
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uppin #4
dis battle was kinda lopsided but not that bad, i think that Lil J.C took this one wit better punches and more consistancy...also he had a better flow
no hate good battle but v/ lil jc
Hit This- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=294844
JC- basic flo and rhyme some played punches but nothin wack like none ur shit was bitten so i think u take this win
v// Lil J.C
sniperrr.-structure was fuked up flow was bad and punches were horrible your concept no wording wss bad jus overall bad verse elevate
Liljc-flow was good punches were straight structure was nice concepts were iight jus needed better wording you didnt really need o try..
\/-liljc
V//Liljc
better structure, flow, and punchesbetter wording would have helped you, sniper you need to elevate alot punches flow and structure all that jus elevate
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