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    The Eye

    The once azure sky bleeds galvanism from Zeus's womb
    Baneful climaxes, real worlds becoming fiction
    Death torrents meet Hades violent dispostion
    Masquerading Corinthian sculptures; life turned to stone

    Poisedon's limniad army swiftly invades Land-dweller territory
    The Styx syntax is obliterated, the aqua diffuses through land
    Necromancy reawaking the puppet carcasses of the damned
    Plastic saviors with perhaps salubrious swords searching for glory

    Natures sundial: gone - Evil Nimbusi shielded the scintillator
    Stagnant smell of dancing cadavers fills life support systems sphere
    Skin recedes from all mens head, one word etched in the skull - fear
    Rays of hope sealed by Mephistopheles. Locked away with our savior

    Peaks become decumbent as the plains are made oblique
    The desert is wet and the ocean is dry, antipodean change
    As the animals become dictators and the nobles deranged
    Grandioise paladins are bowing to all of the weakest of feet

    Obseqious imps practicing sycophancy for the master Satan
    The beast who brought the misanthropic storm upon Mankind
    The beast who slaughtered God and became the last one divine
    The beast who broke nature and made assymetrical metamophosis
    The beast who made a land equivalent to the four horsemans bliss
    The beast who eradicated the line between alive and decadence
    The beast who is the only entity who knows where the heaven went
    And now as I view the panorama, my soul is shattered and taken
    So I now am anticipate the eye of the storm... I am waiting

    waiting.... waiting..... waiting.... waiting

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    waiting

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    I dont understand this poem, each line individually made sense but as a whole it was thrown off track so much...It sounds as if u were just rtying to sound smart through vocabulary...though extremely advance especially to be thirteen shit to be 20 it is advanced, but if u could pm me an explanation or plot line or how each concept relays to the overall meaning of the poem it would be much appreciated


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    its about an apocalyptic storm

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    I know that but how does each stanza help develop the ideas that fully convey that
    "the ink of a scholar, is worth a thousand times more, than the blood of a martyr"--lupe fiasco
    "I'm sonnin' ya'll like father's day/disrespect pop and get popped like Marvin Gaye" Skillz


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    first four: describe the storm
    last one: info about Satan
    last line: someone watching te storm waiting for the eye of the storm

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    hit this up fooz

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