No one can Fool This, I'm Ruthless
So when I spit Venom, I drop bombs like whores drop Denim
I learned half in Privacy & half in'the Library, standin on stage hearin Em' all shout Hail~Mary
A misguided stoner who found skill in the darkest Corner
Every girl just tryin to Cop~A~Feel still got years to Unlock~my~Skill
A livin legend, a Young vetren all wrapped up in a Presen
Im makin all the shots Fade~Away, I'm quenchin your thirst for raps like Gaterade
Tell me what you think
naw man work on this piece, i mean u can freestyle but put a lil flava into it
dude.. it isnt working for you.
Artificial.Intelligence
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^lmfao word
I hate it when people come in just to talk shit about a piece...O.M. Replies are meant for constructive criticism...Fuckin' teenagers...
Yo I could definately hear this my mind...But you do need to work on your lyrics a bit...elevate your vocab, your imagery, an tell a story...make people think nah mean? Keep at it an keep doing your thing...peace...
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^ thanks, I didn't know it was that bad, Whats Imaegry?
Uppin, shit
i could see the multies in your flow...but thats all i could see
just like ~Plague~ said, tell a story
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