T.I.M.
$$Streetz$$
nothin
V.
If you choose I can bust him, so assume his destruction....
You ain't a g, ho, this "street'z" closed due to construction
Speak my name, we could brawl bitch.
He don't gotta grind, got more dollar signs in his name than his wallet
I hope this poor fellow gets gold. His heart? Like jello it folds.
I didn't shit on him, I pissed on him so now 'streetz' is a yellow brick road
V/ T.I.M.
aight, this needs to be closed.
That's 5 votes...
Streets- sum alright stuff. wasn't too bad holmes. I felt the punch about him having lots of money was almost kind of a compliment though. I wouldn't complain if i spent my time to get lots of money. Meh wat i'm trying to say is....elevate on the wording of u punches and working on making more creativie concepts. Then connect the punches. finally elevate on ur personals like that money one. Just elevate on the wording holmes. u've got potential.
T.I.M.-You ain't a g, ho, this "street'z" closed due to construction
rofl lmao. i like that one. not bad. you had sum self glory though in ur verse and filler as well.
"He don't gotta grind, got more dollar signs in his name than his wallet"
^^another decent punch. but these 2 were bout the only ones i felt outta the verse. Keep up wat ur doing. Just make more of them like these. and don't do the spaces between each bar. keep it up.
v// T.I.M for have a couple harder punches. keep it up.
hit this up- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=293465
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This was a n over all weak battle but i'm
have to give it to T.i.M overall he had better
flow,punches,wordplay and structure.......
v/t.i.m.
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