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    Hit Em Hard

    We know New York can’t leave the game too long, you just get faulty copies
    I cant stop with my game, I’m too strong to let these sukkas stop me.
    Let me repeat myself, retarded rappers need to lay low.
    Y’all don’t deserve to get an official K.Gee K.O.
    Y’all know me, the remedy with the crazy spit
    When you come up short like a baby’s…ok, moving on
    You think you’s a champ just cause ur internet crew be on?
    I’ll just click my nike’s three times, and fo sho you’ll be gone.
    I can’t go mainstream. I’ll just be around some fake’s and clowns
    My victory is a metaphor for violence? Other way around
    I’ll just buy up someone’s house worth about 10 million
    I’d rather live in a average house with a 10 foot ceiling.
    I’m sick of posers who think that they’re like Eminem
    They glorify themselves and soon as they get a sniff of the heaven scent
    I am the complete opposite. On the real, I am humble
    And so lyrical, I confuse peoples just like Bryant Gumbal
    I’ll rock them fools and force them to serve me
    Then shine with my team just like James Worthy.
    Look on the back of the New York Jersey, I’m numero uno
    Come to me with a wack rap and I’ll hit you with the judo.
    I’m bright as Einstein, or rather a luminous spirit
    So when I speak, make sure that all your crew and them hear it.
    I reminisce last year, when I had the dope rhyme scheme
    With hopes that one day I’d be on top and everyone would compare me
    To the legendary one and only Microphone Fiend
    Stupid rappers leave the mic alone, please!
    I mean we all heard Game’s diss with the 300 bars
    This don’t rhyme but 50, as to ya skills, you ain’t got none.
    He got the ignorance to start beef but not mature enough to stop one
    I ain’t mature though, ill kill an MC as long as I got one
    I Hit ‘em Hard

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=292024&page=2
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=292048&page=2

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    wow..i got to admiitt this had some sick rhymes and multies
    flow was nice and structure was nice
    the only thing im not feeling is the topic
    too simple and too plain..but anyways this was really good
    i liked it...keep it up man..you got potential for real

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    thanks man, uppin

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    aight dis was pretty good had a couple good metas pretty nice flow throughout but like ..... said tha topic wasnt really good u need sum betta imagery but yo topic aint really give yoself a chance 2 paint a picture but overall it was nice




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    ok ill think about it. one more comment plz. bump

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    bump

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    aight then as im only the exprinced one that is about to comment about ur shit
    heres the verdict


    firstly use higher vocab wat i mean is use more intelutucal words..fix up ur structre
    u got some decent multis but it could elevate

    so far homie ya alright but u can elevate

    take my advice and u be one dope head...

    ~1~
    The Rise And Fall Will Be My Death
    So As I Gasp For My Last Breath
    Put the Gage To My Chest
    i Gulp a Heep of Salayva In Distess
    Sound Of The Gun Cocked Wat's Next
    *Bang*
    Bullet Incarnates His Soul
    Burinin His Skin His Heart Turned Cold
    Dead In a Matter of Secounds
    MIND AND THE PEN
    Is the Greatest Weapon
    So Dont Use Gunz or Knives
    Do it If u Dont wanna Live a Life

    Made By Me

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    yeah your structure could use some work
    but overall this was a nice piece nice multi's
    decent work play just work on being a lil more creative

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