Upping for more feed. Thank you people, it means alot.
Upping for more feed. Thank you people, it means alot.
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dope piece! i lost all my grandparents too,
so i can definately associate. extremely well
written and heart felt as usual. you really
know how to bring it w/ the tear jerka'z brotha.
reguardless, this piece was great, keep em comin!
loved it!
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Thanks man, once again i apreciate it alot.
AI
“¡Viva la Revolución!”
Upping for more feed.. Thank you.
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“¡Viva la Revolución!”
Upping... I would apreciate it people. Thank you.
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“¡Viva la Revolución!”
upping.
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“¡Viva la Revolución!”
Very elegant piece Po. I felt like you did a great job with this. None of the content came off as overtly abrupt or shocking... Everything just had it's own subtle charm and itelligence to it. It actually reminded me alot of a piece I wrote awhile back called "Picture Perfect" where I wrote about a dieing grandmother aswell. See, I got nervous about coming in here because alot of times with topics like this, readers will just bull shit you so bad because really... Who wants to critisice someones efforts to honor a loved one? But this came out very very authentic and heartfelt. Never once did I feel like you were just pulling something out of your ass, yet on the other hand I never once got bord with the content either. I feel like you're really starting to come into your own man. Great job.
Feed my poem... "Monsters Under the Bed" please.
po'ethics /
abstanticollective.
Thanks alot man... I'll be sure to hit that poem up, you know i enjoy your work dude. Thanks alot.
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“¡Viva la Revolución!”
Ok Wow once again you have astonished me in every single way.Your writing is flawless and has so much emotion and creativity.You imagery is unbelievable and it just makes a great read.Every time I click to go into one of your poems or pieces,I know i'm in for a treat and actuually read something that I will actually remember.Thats what you did here for me bro and I would actually like to thank your for writing it.Great piece bro and i'm sure you will keep it up
Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
So far so good.....
So far so good.....
So far so good.....
But how you fall doesn't matter
Its how you land
Upping, And atty, I'll feed on yours in the morning dude... Damn late here in sunny england.
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“¡Viva la Revolución!”
Upping. Thanks guys so far i really apreciate everything, especially the comments that 'your grandma would be proud of you if she could read this'... That actually means alot.
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“¡Viva la Revolución!”
I agree man your just dope in all areas thisOriginally Posted by Dyl
Ok Wow once again you have astonished me in every single way.Your writing is flawless and has so much emotion and creativity.You imagery is unbelievable and it just makes a great read.Every time I click to go into one of your poems or pieces,I know i'm in for a treat and actuually read something that I will actually remember.Thats what you did here for me bro and I would actually like to thank your for writing it.Great piece bro and i'm sure you will keep it up
is another hof piece man emotional..........
your the best yet poet on this site............
Today.a Tear Has Fallin For You............................beautiful......simp ly Beautiful...................
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Thanks dude... Upping.
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Upping.
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