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    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
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    Suicidal Thoughts

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    In my own ghost-written memoir
    praying that the man above is merciful in the name of Allah
    hoping he will forgive for all the malicious things I did
    from using his name in vain to modernist thinkings of a stick-up kid
    basically one half of my life has been inconvenient
    two personalities within me have always come to disagreement
    by trying to suck up to people by using appeasement
    predicate of the inglorious child who always came up with mean shit
    in my own words this is my biography
    devious hollow mind where I seriously need psychology
    indignant of why the black cloud keeps on following me
    fervent of the title "Suicidal Thoughts"
    unlike Biggie I have a reason for my cauze
    of why my prurient brain has come to a lost
    took too much damage thats why its sabotaged
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    closed

    READ THA RULES

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    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
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    why?

    Quote Originally Posted by Def Angel
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    READ THA RULES
    hey yo why?its 16 lines

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    u gotta leave feedback to other peoples OM's and then post the URL links in here. but anyways, this aint a bad peice. nice use of vocab, as well as good imagery.. you presented a good picture of how you felt within those 8 or 9 bars. you'll jus keep gettin better the more you write and read other ppls peices. but yea keep droppin. peace.
    "in the event of my demise
    when my heart can beat no more
    i hope i die for a principle
    or a belief that i had lived for
    i will die before my time
    because i feel the shadows depth
    so much i wanted to accomplish
    before i reached my death
    i have come to grips with the possibility
    and wiped the last tear from my eyes
    i loved all who were positive
    in the event of my demise"

    -Tupac Shakur-

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    yeah alright thanks

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