this peice is yet to be finished so tell me what you think so far...
An art gallery intoxacated with a theifs theme played as historacal
i represent all elements at a test my own existence is metaphorical
askin me or others if im ready to die that question seems rhetorical
sillouetted in this paragraph is a truth presented as a deep analogy
poetic antics amoungst theatrics with a similar old skool technology
forsaken for the manstream but none will be be needin the apology
only neccessary when the mind is overdosed and can not be fillin
unconciously i blend and shade like eclipses as if to the lords willin
my life is a mic and the beat or dj spins out all of my nervous cells
emptyin out my soul onto the pad or disk as if it were bullet shells
like i said unfinished so tell me what ya think this far
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